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| THIS IS A MANGA ONLY DISCUSSION POST. DO NOT DISCUSS ANYTHING BEYOND THIS CHAPTER. ---------------------------------------- I enjoyed that a lot for a one shot. The ending was a little disappointing since I didn't really understand what was up with the phone number in his locker. Still, some good drama and decent characters. |
| I know I've read this before, in fact I added it to the DB a little over a year ago but it got removed since it didn't follow the guidelines. So of course I end up seeing it on here again, seriously mods make up your mind. |
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| Ahh, I remember reading this one-shot a long time ago and absolutely loving it. The story was just so beautiful and touching despite it being so brief. This is honestly still one of my favorite manga of all time. |
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| Kinda want a different ending but oh well.. |
| Recommend me an anime |
| After finished it, i feel like hundred knives stike through me V_V. renzbiohazard said: Kinda want a different ending but oh well.. kinda want a good ending for Shiroyama too :) |
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| Poor girl. This could be made into a perfect Shinkai Makoto movie though. |
| your waifu is shit |
| will never forger this story Yuki was a beautiful name too |
| The ending wasn't exactly what I expected but I liked it anyway. Such bittersweet story. |
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| Liked the manga. But I really expected the end girl to ne shiroyama. Even though she's like that, I still like her. |
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| Goodness, I wish this story got adapted into a longer manga! I hope Yuki got a nice end after this.. |
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| Everything was perfect in this story up until that pure fucking shit ending....., I feel so empty inside right now. I HATE fucking stories like these..., seriously. |
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| Crap.... Disappointing ending. :( |
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| Well i think the ending was good, BUT would really liked a lot more whit ending whit that blond girl. 9/10 |
| Well, I dislike the sadness of the story, but that was also why I found it good. |
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| This was so beautiful... The wording was simple but deep. Tbh I didn't get the plot twist at the end on my first reading. I hope Yuki gets a good end too. |
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| I liked it and I do feel bad for Yuki, I'm curious if she still thinks of herself as used goods that won't sell in a clearance sale. I hope she got a happy ending. |
| Feeling so empty after reading, to be expected from bittersweet genre. But that kinda too harsh for Yuki, even if MC ends up with her, I dunno if it really just pity or could truly love her. |
| Can't say that i enjoyed it. Especially that kick in the nuts ending. |
| Pretty giod for a one chapter story :) |
| What is the most cowardly and shameful thing in human conduct? It's when people with power and people who flatter them hide in safe places and extol war, force patriotism and self-sacrifice on others, then send them to the battlefield to die. For the sake of peace in the universe, before we continue this fruitless war with the Empire, mustn't we first start by exterminating such evil parasites? - Yang Wenli |
| Damn that ending!! So she put the other girl's number in his locker huh. I wanted him to end up with Yuki or see her happy ending. I wonder though if he truly loved her or pitied her. |
You can just be yourself. Do things your own way, one step at a time. You'll get there. Just be yourself, you'll be fine." ~Fruit Basket |
| Too bad there was no happy ending for that poor girl. She gave her best to make him see her and want her ..he was foolish for not giving it a try. |
| Thanks to all you guys who commented on this because i can understand this one shot now & can definitely say This one shot was trash |
| Sweet, short story. I like that the ending has a bitterness to it. Would have been better if it was at least a volume long. 4/5 |
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| Well it lived up to it's name. 4/5. |
| Big Order (TV):great anime or greatest anime? |
| pretty well done story and pretty realistic. the MC is not totaly coward and that's how it supposed to be. too bad don't see what happened to yuki afterwards. hope she also has happy ending. 8/10. |
 "If taking responsibility for a mistake that cannot be undone means death, it's not that hard to die. At least, not as hard as to live on." |
| I don't care much about the spineless guy and his wife but I was hopping for some developments about the tragic heroine's fate. However in the end we have no clue about what happened to her. It's really frustrating. |
Ysad_ZiwezhanJan 9, 2017 4:53 PM
| Like it!! Is a plot naive, but direct and effective, that get you read, not once more, or a twice, three .... ... a love story, with feelings, with a great end, and nice thoughts!!! 7/10... |
| So nobody knows about Shiroyama whereabouts. Kinda sad, but I'm glad he ended up with the girl he love, not with someone he pity. I hope Shiroyama find a better life, and a love. 8/10 |
| I was a bit bored with all the happy endings I've seen in the one-shots I've read so far... This one was refreshing. The cover made me a bit hesitant, but this was much better than I expected. The sad ending made me hate this but it's the reason why this is good, somehow... |
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| To be honest, I really don't know what all the hype with this story is. I thought it was mediocre at best. |
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| Best manga ever seen I was crying for it I hope will have long story :( |
| What happened to Shiroyama afterwards? It was an okay oneshot. And for the people upset at the ending, the MC’s crush was tsukimura. |
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| Did not expect this level of feelings in a doujin, good work. |
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| dont 1 shot usually get full lenth series? why didnt this one :( |
| I wish she had a better life :( |
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Accelerator48 said: I agree with you wholeheartedlyDidn't feel any sympathy for that whore. Glad he ended up with his crush in the end Call me cruel or whatever I really hate this type of story Man a whore is a whore |
Mitaka99May 6, 2023 7:05 AM
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| Don't say whore. You saw how she was abused and beaten up. She was forced to go in that situation. |
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| WAIT WHAT HAPPENED TO HER?? I NEED TO KNOW |
| Damn I remember reading this back in 2012. Today, 10 years later, I went on a witch hunt to search for this doujinshi and reread it. After all those years I still remember the bitter sweet ending it had and let me tell you that I'll probably never forget this masterpiece. One of the first one-shots I've ever read. 10/10 |
| At least he got his crush in the end |
| Inhales oxygen |
| I was expecting a different ending, still its a beautiful one shot. |
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| This was fine. Tragic girl meets kind boy done pretty well. For those that don't really get it, Yuki did get a happy-ish ending: She is out of the situation that caused her to be how she is so she gets a chance to start again...and isn't that the best possible end for her? Now she's gotta figure out how to get over what her father and other relatives did to her. That's a rough road that will always have an impact on how she loves people but she can do it! |
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