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Apr 24, 2015 3:41 PM

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FunnyGames said:

One anime with a mean higher than 8? There are more than 550 anime to watch, you get this achievement without even trying. Same about less than a 5.5, watch 1 dementia anime with 3 minutes long. (Nami or Utsu Musume Sayuri - first came to mind)
Those achievements are too easy to get. And there's already an average mean score (by you) achievement, I don't see a reason to add those 2 to tell the truth.

Achievement definition: "something accomplished, especially by superior ability, special effort, great courage, etc.; a great or heroic deed:".

Achievements should be fun way to watch anime.


No, not one anime, one achievement, meaning it would have only one level, similar to Long Runner for example.

And about dementia, the challenging part is finding it (some of them are pretty obscure and hard to find) and of course watching it and staying sane.
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Apr 24, 2015 3:46 PM

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Since there were some new anime achievements, I would like to see more for manga. Just as "mystery" also became anime achievement, something like "historical" or "slice of life" from anime section, would be also good for manga part. Also don't forget the "perverted" one, that was great idea after all :D
 
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Ryuma00 said:
Since there were some new anime achievements, I would like to see more for manga. Just as "mystery" also became anime achievement, something like "historical" or "slice of life" from anime section, would be also good for manga part. Also don't forget the "perverted" one, that was great idea after all :D

GAR achievement for manga? Since mahou-shoujo is already there. I´d love GAR achivement for manga.
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Apr 24, 2015 4:20 PM

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So is there gonna be a site like https://github.com/animesc/graph/blob/master/achievements.md where you show what all the available achievements are? That'd be nice for people with less completed anime/manga to look at and work towards.
 
Apr 24, 2015 4:32 PM
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abystoma2 said:

No, not one anime, one achievement, meaning it would have only one level, similar to Long Runner for example.

And about dementia, the challenging part is finding it (some of them are pretty obscure and hard to find) and of course watching it and staying sane.

After re-reading your last reply, "x anime" means some amount of anime.
It's worse than popular anime, as score is way more dynamic than position in popularity.
Then how about one achievement that checks if you have watched 50 popular anime? I have tracked the popular anime and it hasn't changed much, there were slight differences between the years. (starting 2012 as I started watching it) Most of top 50 are jumping between themselves, there are few 2012~2015 anime that actually get into here. The point is, new anime releases will not take over the top 50 so quick, unless it's something amazing like SAO or SnK that in a short time topped #2 and #3. (Though, SAO 2 is in top 50, so I guess SnK 2 will also top 50 when it released in 2016)
 
Apr 24, 2015 5:50 PM

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Since you're giving achievements for Boku no Pico there should be an achievement for the brave souls that managed to sit through Mars of Destruction.
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Apr 24, 2015 6:30 PM
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I would like to see a manga achievement for completing X number of works by Tezuka Osamu, who is often referred to as the godfather of anime/manga. There are over a hundred different manga entries accredited to him for story/art. It seems reasonable enough as long as you focus on either a single tier (30+ titles) or two tiers (maybe 30 and 60).
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Hey also it seems recommendations never go away unless you add them to your list in someway. I was wondering if you could find some way to fix that or something. Pleaseeee? ^.^
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Apr 24, 2015 6:53 PM

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Numi said:
I would like to see a manga achievement for completing X number of works by Tezuka Osamu, who is often referred to as the godfather of anime/manga. There are over a hundred different manga entries accredited to him for story/art. It seems reasonable enough as long as you focus on either a single tier (30+ titles) or two tiers (maybe 30 and 60).

Rumiko Takahashi would also be a good idea for a achievement like that.

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Hey also it seems recommendations never go away unless you add them to your list in someway. I was wondering if you could find some way to fix that or something. Pleaseeee? ^.^

Likely nothing could be done if you don't mean Missing titles.
 
Apr 24, 2015 7:07 PM

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¿podrían agregar mas logros a mangas? Es injusto que los animes tenga mas que los de mangas
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Apr 24, 2015 8:04 PM
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Lukz94 said:
¿podrían agregar mas logros a mangas? Es injusto que los animes tenga mas que los de mangas

I agree, we should have more Manga achievements. Like stated earlier by Ryuma00 and abystoma2, why not add the GAR, historical, hentai/ecchi, and slice of life as achievements for Manga?

Also what is the current scale you are using for the hentai/ecchi achievement is it:

100 / completed * (ecchi * 2 + hentai * 4)

or

100 / completed * (ecchi + hentai * 2)

or something else? I think times hentai by 4 and ecchi by 2 is a little overkill.
 
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NeinGesicht said:
I agree, we should have more Manga achievements. Like stated earlier by Ryuma00 and abystoma2, why not add the GAR, historical, hentai/ecchi, and slice of life as achievements for Manga?

Also what is the current scale you are using for the hentai/ecchi achievement is it:

100 / completed * (ecchi * 2 + hentai * 4)

or

100 / completed * (ecchi + hentai * 2)

or something else? I think times hentai by 4 and ecchi by 2 is a little overkill.


From what I understood it's the first one, and it doesn't feel like an overkill, for starters not everyone watches hentai, and to tip the scale over for some users with a determined amount of ecchis seems fairly accurate for an achievement.
For the regular "cross over" user it should leave him near a 20 to 30% and people who watch a lot of anime could be cropped from the achievement if not done so.
 
Apr 25, 2015 12:03 AM

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Narushisto20 said:
Growing suspicions

I'll use this for level 1. #1 for level 2. Good images and titles. Can you/someone think of more descriptions?
 
Apr 25, 2015 12:08 AM
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EvenJellyOn said:
Rumiko Takahashi would also be a good idea for a achievement like that.


Not particularly, and I say that as a Takahashi fan. She only has a little over twenty different series in the database. She's more well known because of having several very well known long-running series - Inuyasha, Ranma 1/2, Urusei Yatsura, etc. It's those few long-runners that most Takahashi fans are most likely to have read anyway.

To single out a single mangaka's work as worthy of an achievement should one read enough of it, it's better to look specifically at mangaka who are both legendary and prolific, otherwise the standards are so broad you wind up with a long list of different mangaka to consider. Tezuka's work goes back to at least the 40s, covers up through his death decades later, and, as mentioned before, features over a hundred different individual works. There aren't many other mangaka who stand out to such a degree.
 
Apr 25, 2015 2:25 AM

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I made a thing for the Mysterie Achievement, seeing as you still need a few titles and descriptions for that. Maybe I'll find a better image but for now this is it.




http://abload.de/img/mysterie1ttsb6.png
Title: Golden Truth
Description: The truth was never made to aid you or to be in your favor, but you were made to uncover it regardless.
 
Apr 25, 2015 2:56 AM

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FunnyGames said:

Then how about one achievement that checks if you have watched 50 popular anime?

Well, if you mean top 50 popular, you currently not complete them, as there are anime still airing, Naruto Shippuden for example. And as I said, these are mostly meainstream anime that almost everyone watched already, therefore not achievement worthy.
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Apr 25, 2015 5:38 AM
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Jakly said:
Maybe yuri and yaoi too.

I would like to see yuri too (I don't care about yaoi ^_^ ... it's the same as fujoshi title, I guess)
And yuri as adult stuffs (Sono hanabira...) and not adult stuffs (manga Girlfriends - only one +18 scene; Sakura Trick - only kissing).
It would be nice if there were 3 categories:
- straight/hetero stuffs/male<->female
- yuri/homosexual woman
- yaoi/homosexual man
= and maybe something betweeen: Intersex. For example manga http://myanimelist.net/manga/3993/IS:_Otoko_demo_Onna_demo_nai_Sei but I don't know how many manga/anime are there.

Kyuss said:
More achievements sounds delicious.

I love them too!

gardevoir7 said:
Since you're giving achievements for Boku no Pico there should be an achievement for the brave souls that managed to sit through Mars of Destruction.

There is probably more animes/mangas like this, right? Why don't we make a list of 10-50 that are the *worst*? Then we can add some levels, like:
1. Curious type
2. ...
3. Weird guy

As for comedy:
There are a lot of comedies but at most 50 that are GREAT. Maybe we can vote for the best *50*?


What about anime+manga achievements? For example you have read 20 yuri mangas + 30 yuri animes. It gives you "I love yuri" achievements.

ps. @Deividas can you edit a first post and can you post list of suggestions there? Maybe this thread should contain only suggestion. Each suggestion should have separate topic. I think it would be better.
 
Apr 25, 2015 6:55 AM

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Could you add a shoujo tag here?
 
Apr 25, 2015 7:02 AM

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nekomimibadik said:
Could you add a shoujo tag here?


I would like to see this as well (shoujo, josei, shounen and seinen)
However do keep in mind that they were initially removed because they aren't actually genres but demographics.
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Apr 25, 2015 7:02 AM

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Is it an idea to make fujoshi achievements? :3
I wouldn't mind to help making them ^^


Or maybe adding points for yuri/yaoi anime for the pervert achievement count? 1 point per yuri/yaoi anime.
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Apr 25, 2015 7:36 AM

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@abystoma2 I don't really think that belongs to the same category... idk I just really want yaoi achievements, so I'll make some~ XD
I could make yuri achievements... but I never read/watched any so I don't really know much about it, could someone make the levels? I'll make graphics for them~ c:
 
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Lwaxana said:
@abystoma2 I don't really think that belongs to the same category... idk I just really want yaoi achievements, so I'll make some~ XD
I could make yuri achievements... but I never read/watched any so I don't really know much about it, could someone make the levels? I'll make graphics for them~ c:


I think combining yuri and yaio to one achievement would be better idea, so everyone could watch the side they prefer.
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Apr 25, 2015 10:23 AM

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I definitely agree that we need more than just ecchi and hentai for that achievement as nowhere near all of them are listed as ecchi or hentai. MAL seems to have a problem with an anime having both the hentai and the yuri/yaoi genres after all.
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Apr 25, 2015 11:05 AM

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It's very sumbur in my head but you could add achievement like FapMaster or FapHero for 1000 hentais watched.

You could use those pictures


 
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It would be nice to have a way of checking progress for genre achievemenets before getting first level, for most of them it's not that much work to check number of anime with tag in favourites and substract all anime dropped, watching or on hold from it , then checking the github files which anime i completed also count, but with GAR and mahou shoujo it's a pain to rummage through the whole giant list to see which ones count multiple times ( i do this for friends to because i love playing around with stats like this )

I second that!

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Actually it would be good idea to add opposite achievement like that. Watchin the WORSE anime.

Would be nice to see the Mind=Blown achievement for that one.



Like MalGraph intended to use for watching Mars of Destruction (scored 2,52 by 12699 users), but sadly enough never did.

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Apr 25, 2015 1:06 PM
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Mars of Destruction isn't that hard to watch as BnP.
But it would be nice to get "Garbage collector" achievment for watching bad chinese cartoons.
Here is example list:
Pupa
Shitcom
Legend of Duo
Diabolik Lovers
Holy Night
Vampire Holmes
Kuroshitsuji II
Ookami Kakushi
Elfen Lied
MD Geist
Mars of Destruction
 
Apr 25, 2015 1:46 PM

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Poor_Taste said:
"Garbage collector"
Shitcom
Elfen Lied

You should be banned at MAL
 
Apr 25, 2015 2:51 PM

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Poor_Taste said:
Mars of Destruction isn't that hard to watch as BnP.
But it would be nice to get "Garbage collector" achievment for watching bad chinese cartoons.


Speaking of chinese cartoons, how about an achievement for watching chinese and korean anime? With list made similar to mahou-shoujo/GAR and these clubs´s related anime as an source of anime to add to said list: Chinese Anime and Korean Anime
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Apr 25, 2015 2:51 PM
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Lwaxana said:
@abystoma2 I don't really think that belongs to the same category... idk I just really want yaoi achievements, so I'll make some~ XD
I could make yuri achievements... but I never read/watched any so I don't really know much about it, could someone make the levels? I'll make graphics for them~ c:


I think combining yuri and yaio to one achievement would be better idea, so everyone could watch the side they prefer.

I prefer that one achievements means one thing. You should be able to compare with other mal users.
If two users (first yaoi- second yuri- fan) gets the same achievements that would be weird. They would compare each other "achievement's list" and something different (even scary).

@Lwaxana, Maybe I will try with "yuri levels" (although I'm yuri beginner)
 
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@Lwaxana, Maybe I will try with "yuri levels" (although I'm yuri beginner)


One level (the first probably) could be named "But that´s forbidden love." with picture like this:
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Hello.
I propose to rename the achievement Completionist in "not respecting even yourself" or short in Russian - govnoed. I also propose to introduce a number of achievement dropped. And sorry for my super english.
 
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Hello.
I propose to rename the achievement Completionist in "not respecting even yourself" or short in Russian - govnoed. I also propose to introduce a number of achievement dropped. And sorry for my super english.


I dunno about achievement for dropping anime, as these should encourage you to watch more rather than drop them. I think the no drop achievement they have currently works perfectly for this.
 
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A bug in "Long runner" with missing titles. Dunno how many are there but just from my list there are 2, Kuroko no Basket and Shijou Saikyou no Deshi Kenichi
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Deividas said:
Narushisto20 said:
Growing suspicions

I'll use this for level 1. #1 for level 2. Good images and titles. Can you/someone think of more descriptions?


Love this as a level 1 idea.

Possible description: You have real talent as a detective and it's already showing, but you still need a lot more experience

Hanimir said:
I made a thing for the Mysterie Achievement, seeing as you still need a few titles and descriptions for that. Maybe I'll find a better image but for now this is it.




http://abload.de/img/mysterie1ttsb6.png
Title: Golden Truth
Description: The truth was never made to aid you or to be in your favor, but you were made to uncover it regardless.


This idea isn't bad at all, though I'd change the description to something like "You can solve any locked room mystery by now. The path to the Golden Land has already been revealed to you"

Might work better for a level 3, but it could also work for a level 2

For the other level (2 or 3), I'd definitely use a Conan image, as there is no such image in manga achievemnts either with Conan being kind of a symbol of the mystery genre, and definitely the best known detective in the anime world.

Maybe something like this could work as an image:



Or this:



Level X: Genius Detective: You're already a genius at unraveling mysteries. You solve cases almost every day... but sometimes you have to wonder how is it possible that everywhere you go someone ends up dead.

For the final level, again, it would have to be one of those with black background and a simple pick or symbol at the center (can't think of anything right now besides what's already been used for the manga achievement). A possible title could be:

Mastermind: No one is better than you. You can catch the Black Organization, Lupin III, Kira and Johan in one day and still be on time for dinner. You're always one step ahead of the criminal.

Or:

Mastermind: You're already the best. You're so good that you catch the criminals before they even have a chance to commit the crime.


EDIT: Fixed the images
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nekomimibadik said:
Poor_Taste said:
"Garbage collector"
Elfen Lied

You should be banned at MAL

+1
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nekomimibadik said:
Poor_Taste said:
"Garbage collector"
Shitcom
Elfen Lied

You should be banned at MAL


He is right, Elfen Lied sucks
 
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>Mystery (add cool title here)

Okay. I have an idea. (in ** there are titles for examples of the anime pictures. Sorry, no skills in photoshop, just give an example of pictures) (((



Level 1 *Higurashi no Naku Koro ni* or *Darker than Black*
Can't understand, but do your best!
Mystery is very difficult thing for you. Just think more about it!



Level 2 *Mononoke*
So many strange things around
What? You say that can see some yokai around us? You've gotta be kidding!



Level 3 one of the Satoshi Kon's work, for example, Paprika or *Mousou Dairinin*
Do puzzles is like a piece of cake!
You're too invisible for this world! Maybe you are just our illusion?



Level 4 *Lain*
Mystery is your first name!
Mystic is your real life!Congratulations!
 
Apr 26, 2015 12:29 AM

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I have a question

What does the pervert achievment stand for?

And suggestions

More manga achievments, Drama would be nice

Also, stats showing favorite magazines for manga would be cool

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Akai_Shuichi said:
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My original #3 and 4:

3. There is only one truth
http://i.imgur.com/tL4rplA.png

All of the truth will be exposed, no matter how shocking it may be.

4. Great detective
http://i.imgur.com/m0VY7IW.png

No impossible crimes and locked rooms can stop you from finding the answer now.

Here are already made icons with Conan and Umineko on black background traditionally used for MAX level, they're useful too, anyone can change the descriptions, though I don't think they're bad as they're are.
 
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I have something for the dementia genre. Maybe someone with photoshop skills could edit them into the same format other achievement images? With the MAX level having black background and stuff?
(And somebody check the gramatical correctness, I´m not a native speaker.)


Lvl 1
Title: What exactly did I just watch?
Text: You discovered a whole new world of weird. Keep on watching.
Img:

Lvl 2
Title: My mind is full of fuck
Text: Your attempt to wrap your mind around this failed completly.
Img:


Lvl 3
Title: Is this real life? Is this just fantasy?
Text: It has become hard to distinguish between reality and fiction.
Img:

Lvl MAX
Title: 「 Wired Sound 」
Text: Watched one too many dementia anime. You transcended humanity and operate on another level now.
Img:


Seconding this

But Kago should be the last one (cause he's the best)
 
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UnoPuntoCinco said:

But Kago should be the last one (cause he's the best)

The order is not really based on what is best but on what fits the description. But I do agree Kago is pretty based.
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Just leaving these here in case they're useful to anyone.

 
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I just realized after looking through some CG's that Level 4 was already from Umineko. I'm sorry to have wronged you good sir.
 
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Just leaving these here in case they're useful to anyone.



Ok, now we REALLY need dementia achievement so we can have this.
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a 1980s or 1990s achievement would be nice to

but as there are more animes in that decades than in VHS masterrace, the number of finished animes to get this achievement has to be way higher

(some users are only watching new or airing stuff, but hey: the 80s and 90s had great animes too)
 
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Didn't see your post before, sorry.


I actually love the Umineko pic for a level 4, and the Conan one is pretty good also.

As text, I'd still go with the title suggested by Hanimir (Golden Truth) and with my description though, maybe changing "locked room mystery" for just "mystery", as it would now be a level 4 achievement. It would end up being:

4. Golden Truth

You can solve any mystery by now. The path to the Golden Land has already been revealed to you.


For the Conan one, "There is only one truth" is definitely a good title and the image is pretty good too... if anything, my "concern" here would be is that it's kind of "too strong", it feels like the "one truth" thing is almost more according to a level 4 than a level 3. I actually thought about the same title before, but didn't use it because of that, and ended up going with "Genius Detective" as title and this as a description:

"Genius Detective: You're already a genius at unraveling mysteries. You solve cases almost every day... but sometimes you have to wonder how is it possible that everywhere you go someone ends up dead."

Also, with your image and title and my description, we would have a level 1 finished already:

1. Growing suspicions

You have real talent as a detective and it's already showing, but you still need a lot more experience

And that would leave number 2 missing. I now saw your post and seems that you used Hyouka, but I would refrain from that as there is already a Hyouka image for manga. What I would recommend using for level 2 is a Kindaichi image, or maybe a Higurashi one.


RocketsSnorlax said:
a 1980s or 1990s achievement would be nice to

but as there are more animes in that decades than in VHS masterrace, the number of finished animes to get this achievement has to be way higher

(some users are only watching new or airing stuff, but hey: the 80s and 90s had great animes too)


I love this idea also. It'd be nice to encourage people to watch stuff from the 80s and 90s... there's a lot of anime there, so those could actually even work with levels.

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Akai_Shuichi said:
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I love your descriptions, especially the Conan one.

I changed #2 Hyouka for L since it was used in the manga and Devidas suggested changing places of #1 and 2, so here's my old #1 that became #2:

2. Detective's assistant

Now it's your business to know what other people don't know too.

Kindaichi was a good idea too, but I thought it would have the same color theme as Conan, and a Neuro badge seems to fit the mystery theme more than Higurashi, and I think using some less known mystery anime isn't bad. It would be great to use Higurashi if there would be a horror anime achievement though.

So, if we leave the description for #2 as it is (though I don't mind it being changed) we have:

1. Growing suspicions
http://i.imgur.com/GnVqLQU.png

You have real talent as a detective and it's already showing, but you still need a lot more experience

2. Detective's assistant
http://i.imgur.com/bIlnY3K.png

Now it's your business to know what other people don't know too.

3. Genius Detective:
http://i.imgur.com/PJt8cir.png

You're already a genius at unraveling mysteries. You solve cases almost every day... but sometimes you have to wonder how is it possible that everywhere you go someone ends up dead.

4. Golden Truth
http://i.imgur.com/Qlh96Wt.png

You can solve any mystery by now. The path to the Golden Land has already been revealed to you.
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Well, I think that looks pretty good, though after watching it like that, I'm starting to think my Conan description might be a little bit too long. If it's fine, I'd leave it just like it is right now, but if it is indeed too long, I'd use:

"You're already a genius at unraveling mysteries... but sometimes you have to wonder how is it possible that everywhere you go someone ends up dead."

If it needs to be even shorter than that, then it'd be something like:

"You're already a genius at unraveling mysteries... but how is it possible that everywhere you go someone ends up dead?"

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I think it's good that the description's a little long, there are a lot of longer ones - it just has to be good and it is.
 
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Well, if the length is indeed okay, then I have no problems with leaving it just like you posted before (though, of course, this is really Deividas's decision to make).

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