The pacing can be bad if people decide "Oh, wow, this baseball game and runaway came out of no where. I didn't see the antagonism of Kyousuke building up over the last two episodes, the tension of his scheme and its effects on Riki, and Kengo's opposition to it all. I'm just not going to pay attention to any characterization this episode or even try to figure out character motives, and call it force drama."
If you actually pay attention to the character motives, it's not really that bad. Events come quickly, but they shouldn't be as utterly random and forced as people claim they are.
The entire episode 6 was a test of Riki's strength. Did you guys even watch episode 26 of last season, where Kyousuke says "Become stronge. Surpass me, Riki."
And why did the baseball game happen? Gee, when Kyousuke created the Little Busters baseball team, and they've been practicing for about half the episodes of the show, and everyone is on the team, what would be the logical way to try to oppose Kyousuke's plan? Talking with him won't work. Kyousuke is set on his plan and didn't stop when Riki brought up its effects on Rin. The only way to do it was the way Kyousuke mentioned in the first season: by proving that he's stronger, and the medium was baseball. When Kengo tells Riki to oppose Kyousuke, Riki believes he isn't strong enough, and Kengo intervenes in Kyousukes' plan in order to help even the odds.
Kengo of course tries to help Riki out, but Kyousuke cheated in the game anyway.
Therefore, Riki decides that this group of friends that Kyousuke built up isn't where Riki belonged. He rebelled against Kyousuke's scheme he's been plotting since the first episode of the first season, and ran away with his sister.
With Kyousuke in control of Rin's situations at school, the only logical way was to run away, and that's what Riki did.
People just think it's forced drama because this episode transcended stereotypical expectations. The audience expects everything to be straightforward, and the bros in Little Busters to have a straightforward opinions and be open about everything. The fact that people are actually complaining that Kyousuke cheated, just shows how ignorant they are in terms of trying to comprehend a narrative. Why couldn't Riki just call the game as unfair? Because if he did, Kengo wouldn't try to push the issue with how Kyousuke cheated, and Riki would be left opposing Kyousuke's ruling of the game by himself.
Still, I hope the revelations of Refrain get people to stop being completely oblivious to what's going on. As of now, there are plenty of people that are equating the idea of "Not knowing what's going on" with "forced drama".
The events are going by at a quick pace, and I guess people just don't even try to pay attention to all the dialogue and characterization. The main melodramatic part of the season was the quick romance and struggles between Riki and Rin, but if you realize that Kyousuke and the others were all forcing the romance between them, and that Riki was siding with Kyousuke's plan for Rin to become stronger, not realizing the effects it would have on her, then there shouldn't really be an issue.
As for Riki and Rin getting caught quickly, you could call it forced drama, or you could call it a realistic depiction for when someone breaks into someone's house and tries to live there.
And forced narcolepsy? Riki's narcolepsy has always triggered at specific times in the anime due to his emotional tension, not just due to a plot convenience. Regardless, they were caught.
So overall, I think most of the issues can be solved by people getting to Refrain and realizing what the whole point of the story is, and seeing why the characters acted the way they did. There's some degree of character attachment that's going to be lost in the anime, and a lot of people probably won't realize what's going on, because they're not used to watching a show that has ascertainable depth.
And to address another issue I think people have brought up:
"Why are the girls disappearing, and why are all the bros behavior suddenly changing?"
The girls are gone because their story arcs have been completed, and that's part of Kyousukes' plan. Komari stays regardless for reasons I won't mention yet, and Rin, Kyousuke's sister, is the only one left. The clock is ticking down. The bros initially supposed Kyousuke's plan for Riki to become stronger through helping all the girls before they disappeared, and Rin's plan to become more sociable through the Secret of the World missions. Now Kengo, siding with Riki and against Kyousuke, realizes that Kyousuke's going at his plan too harshly, and opposes him. Masato remains a neutral party, and only filled in for the baseball game as a placeholder, though he's driven by his rivalry with Kengo. There are several times in the episode that indicate his neutrality.
Soooooo yeah. I managed to explain nearly every plot point using evidence from the anime. JC Staff can be blamed for rushing the events, but not for them being forced and not making sense. They might "feel" forced if you have no clue what's going on, and in that case, I'd recommend to rewatch the show after it finishes airing. |