too many sudden cuts during the exposition part of the episode.
bad camera janks, like when Mewi comes back from shopping and sits down she's out of frame and the camera just 'zoop!' left to put the door in-frame center and Mewi out of it and Beryl is frame right.
the CGA for the fight scene in the wheat fields was good, but needed more work to make it look EXACTLY like the rest of the episode.
the 'heart to heart/nostalgia' discussion between Allucia and Rose at the cafe was... at least in the Eng Dub... a VERY stilted and wooden script. the acting was good, but the writing? bleck!:p why did they cut/totally take out/edit the pieces of the discussion those ladies were having about the tour of the fields? this would have given foreshadowing of Rose being involved in the assassinations.
the final scene where Beryl and Rose face-off makes ZERO sense! terrible cliffhanger because it had NO setup!
whomever drew those wheat/grain fields has NO idea how wheat/grain grows. it was TOO SHORT! for the grains at the head of those stalks to be that mature. yessss i know different varieties of wheat/grains etc. grow different heights. but none i've ever seen with mine own two eyeballs and held in my hands in a field were that short and looked 'harvest me! harvest me! cut me down and griiiiind meeee!' also too short to hide a human unless they're belly/low crawling... no animations of the wheat being disturbed by the moving assassins.
somebody slap the ever loving crap out of whomever storyboarded the arrows and where IN-FRAME they appear. CONSTANT crappy trajectories and terminal ballistics. you can't see the archer? do NOT make the arrows appear frame-center, above the horizon line, like they just POPPED into existence!
once again, just like ep10 one-handed dagger wielders NEVER bind or parry one-handed with a two-handed longsword. they also do not parry directly, they ALWAYS redirect the sword and move out of center-line of the sword-wielder.
cutting an arrow mid-flight and even four and five arrows in a row with a sword? no. seriously, no. even using our technology to simulate dozens upon dozens of attempts with robots and tech... Mythbusters showed that is NOT probable and may be impossible. slowed down 'toy bow n arrow sets' or trick-shot arrows possibly! merely due to hours upon hours of practice by the bowman and the swordsman working together. but a pile arrow meant for armor piercing or a bladed arrow for flesh, in-combat at killing speeds? no. humans do NOT have those reaction times. 99% of people can't even visually perceive an arrow mid-flight and push a button on a joystick fast enough to pass a simulation test in laboratory conditions. race car drivers, tennis and baseball hitters, martial artists, lots of people with both um-natural and well-trained reaction times have taken the same tests and those folks still are NOT that much faster than the Joe/Jane on the street.
this squad of assassins compared to ep10's? they sucketh harder m'lord! check the 'ewww gory wound!' count and dead baddies for the time spent fighting tween the eps. bout everybody in 10 took the pill and pushed their reset buttons. everybody in 11 got the medieval close shave and a sword-cut... two coppers... package at this barber shop. no need for a frequent shopper stamp book or customer appreciation discount card for these fellas.
oh and the bows? for those 'invisible snipers'? the staves and shapes were too short. when the bowmen were shown on-screen compared to the 'who is shootin these things!?!' frames? no. nuhuh. nopers. ya got bowstaves shaped like that with those lengths? that's a horsemen's bow or a lil kiddie first ranger toy set. suction cups included! you're not hiding in the short grain fields gaining that much range with those bows.
also, who is tying Passione down when it comes to da boobies with this show? let the sweater puppies wrastle! this show's Gainax Boing and jiggle physics are baaaaad! Surena's WORLD CUP!!! size udders are baaarely satisfactorily Jello-fied... all the other gals? Pudding Pops. nooo animation. just fixed shapes. a 'breast plate'? mmmkay! i getcha! attractive and confining and protecting with minimal 'wiggle room'. but out of armor, off duty, civvies? nopers. |