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Feb 20, 2015 4:34 AM
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Do you tend to like poetic dialogue in anime or do you find most uses of poetic dialogue to be cheesy? The most recent example is Shigatsu kimi no uso and a buttfuck ton of other Shoujo.

I tend to find poetic dialogue in a modern setting to be cheesy, but I do find poetic dialogue in older/ancient settings to be tolerable

What are some anime examples of good poetic dialogue and just completely shit dialogue?
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Feb 20, 2015 4:40 AM
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I think that poetic dialogue often feels completely unecessary and misplaced in a lot of anime, especially shounen or shoujo ones. I do like poetic dialogue (or monologue) in ancient settings as well, it's kinda something I think we see fit, because yeah, a lot of poetic things come from the ancient times.
I think an anime revolving around that theme even in modern setting could be tolerable if it does it right.
Good poetic dialogue.. currently, I can't think of any xD But I know tons of shit dialogue that feels so fake. A lot of these love speeches "Uuuh, you were the love of my life bla bla" you often find in shoujo are so horrible to watch.
Feb 20, 2015 4:41 AM
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huh expand if you will
"If you tremble with indignation at every injustice, then you are a comrade of mine"

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Yet what force on earth is weaker than the feeble strength of one
For the Union makes us strong
Feb 20, 2015 4:42 AM
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yes poetic dialogue sounds good... especially in modern settings
Feb 20, 2015 4:51 AM
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I am the bone of my sword~
Feb 20, 2015 5:12 AM
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I am the bone of my sword~


lol ..............
BEST
POETRY
EVER!!!
Feb 20, 2015 5:16 AM
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it depends, some poetry kinda gets lost in the translation :( so i might not get them, even worse they might have some cultural references embedded in them , then I'D BE FORCED TO GOOGLE THE DAMN THING TO UNDERSTAND IT!!!!
but sometimes its just fluent and easy to understand , even though it might carry some metaphors in it ...
The extreme case is, when its JUST FORCED AND OVERUSED with no reason behind it, then i just kinda overlook it if the meaning behind it is NOT too ambiguous !!!
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Feb 20, 2015 5:18 AM
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I dont really care although it usually passes of as cheesy if the person who says it is not a poetic person.
I've been here way too long...
Feb 20, 2015 5:19 AM

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WrongPriest said:
I am the bone of my sword~

血潮は鉄で心は硝子。
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CookingPriest said:
WrongPriest said:
I am the bone of my sword~

血潮は鉄で心は硝子。


doesn't he say that part in engrish ?? :|
Feb 20, 2015 5:25 AM

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It depends, sometimes it is sometimes it isn't...
I don't think there's a general rule, I always accept them, be it in shounens or in horror. It's just that it's either a hit or a miss.
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CookingPriest said:
WrongPriest said:
I am the bone of my sword~

血潮は鉄で心は硝子。


You had one job
Feb 20, 2015 5:28 AM

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Zergneedsfood said:
WrongPriest said:
I am the bone of my sword~
wtf does that even mean


nothing just go with it or just say " its 2deep4me" >_>
LOOOL
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Zergneedsfood said:
WrongPriest said:
I am the bone of my sword~
wtf does that even mean
Bane of my sword?
Feb 20, 2015 5:32 AM

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私は私のランスの骨です。
わかめは体であり、ワームは私の血である。

I totally did not use google translator for this.
Feb 20, 2015 5:35 AM
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Zergneedsfood said:
worldeditor11 said:
Bane of my sword?
Yo, that makes just as little sense. LOL xD

Unless you actually mean to say that you cause your sword great distress.




Literal English translation:

His body is made out of swords
His blood is of iron and his heart of glass
He survived through countless battles
Not even once retreating
Not even once being understood
He was always alone
Intoxicated with victory in a hill of swords
Thus, his life has no meaning
That body was certainly made out of swords
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worldeditor11 said:



Literal English translation:

His body is made out of swords
His blood is of iron and his heart of glass
He survived through countless battles
Not even once retreating
Not even once being understood
He was always alone
Intoxicated with victory in a hill of swords
Thus, his life has no meaning
That body was certainly made out of swords


In case anyone was wondering, that's a translation of the original chant not the Essay one.

WHICH NO-ONE
WANTED TO RECITE
WITH ME


Thanks guys
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WrongPriest said:


In case anyone was wondering, that's a translation of the original chant not the Essay one.

WHICH NO-ONE
WANTED TO RECITE
WITH ME


Thanks guys


DAMN!!!1 THAT TOTES SLIPPED BY ME!!! :(
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WrongPriest said:
I am the bone of my sword~

STEEL IS MY BODY AND FIRE IS MY BLOOD
here ya go
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WrongPriest said:

In case anyone was wondering, that's a translation of the original chant not the Essay one.

WHICH NO-ONE
WANTED TO RECITE
WITH ME



Thats because you are the wrong kind of priest among the MAL priests.
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I like analogies in Monogatari series.
Good example would be beginning of Tsukimonogatari,when Araragi and Shinobu talk about Ononoki.
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silverwalls said:
WrongPriest said:
I am the bone of my sword~

STEEL IS MY BODY AND FIRE IS MY BLOOD
here ya go


Thanks for trying Silver but I think the magic is gone now.

Bunch of plebs I tell you.
Feb 20, 2015 6:12 AM
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It's terrible. Shigatsu's dialogue is the cheesiest and most pretentious I've seen in the medium.
It doesn't really work in fantasy or medieval anime either; you can say "deep" things without sounding like a total jackass.
Feb 20, 2015 6:14 AM

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I like it
Feb 20, 2015 6:17 AM

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Hey mister
I am mad scientist
Its so cool
Sonuvabich

Okabe is as poetic as a bitch as always
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WrongPriest said:
silverwalls said:

STEEL IS MY BODY AND FIRE IS MY BLOOD
here ya go


Thanks for trying Silver but I think the magic is gone now.

Bunch of plebs I tell you.

they just don't understand good poetry. </3
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vodall said:
It's terrible. Shigatsu's dialogue is the cheesiest and most pretentious I've seen in the medium.
It doesn't really work in fantasy or medieval anime either; you can say "deep" things without sounding like a total jackass.


Shigatsu is cheesy in most of the aspects.
The only good thing about it is,that it features classical music.
Feb 20, 2015 6:26 AM

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I like well-placed poetic dialogue, one that feels appropriate given the plot and characters.
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i like to put my input but i no dea what this topic means
"If you tremble with indignation at every injustice, then you are a comrade of mine"

When the union's inspiration through the workers' blood shall run
There can be no power greater anywhere beneath the sun
Yet what force on earth is weaker than the feeble strength of one
For the Union makes us strong
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Zergneedsfood said:
worldeditor11 said:
Literal English translation:

His body is made out of swords
His blood is of iron and his heart of glass
He survived through countless battles
Not even once retreating
Not even once being understood
He was always alone
Intoxicated with victory in a hill of swords
Thus, his life has no meaning
That body was certainly made out of swords
lol


dude its just another case of 2dep4u !!!
Feb 20, 2015 7:20 AM

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WrongPriest said:
silverwalls said:

STEEL IS MY BODY AND FIRE IS MY BLOOD
here ya go


Thanks for trying Silver but I think the magic is gone now.

Bunch of plebs I tell you.

lmao the fail
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silverwalls said:
WrongPriest said:
I am the bone of my sword~

STEEL IS MY BODY AND FIRE IS MY BLOOD

I have created over a thousand blades

We can still save it, people!
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Mickdrew said:
silverwalls said:

STEEL IS MY BODY AND FIRE IS MY BLOOD

I have created over a thousand blades


And my name is Kiki Shikizaki.
Feb 20, 2015 7:38 AM

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Its good when done right.
All credit goes to Sacred.
Feb 20, 2015 7:40 AM
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People die if they are killed?



(っ◔◡◔)っ 𝓘 𝔀𝓲𝓼𝓱 𝔂𝓸𝓾 𝓪𝓵𝓵 𝓱𝓪𝓿𝓮 𝓪 𝔀𝓸𝓷𝓭𝓮𝓻𝓯𝓾𝓵 𝓭𝓪𝔂 ♥
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Mickdrew said:
silverwalls said:

STEEL IS MY BODY AND FIRE IS MY BLOOD

I have created over a thousand blades

We can still save it, people!

2 hours late, you aren't saving anything
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Then it's a good thing I don't know when to give up :P
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Insertanamehere said:
Mickdrew said:

I have created over a thousand blades

We can still save it, people!

2 hours late, you aren't saving anything


actually the entire series is UNsalvageable , so this hardly counts XD !!!
Unsalvageable Train Wreck !!! :P
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WAD1992 said:
actually the entire series is UNsalvageable , so this hardly counts XD !!!
Unsalvageable Train Wreck !!! :P
Yea! Shirou a shit!
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Mickdrew said:
Then it's a good thing I don't know when to give up :P

k fine
Mickdrew said:
silverwalls said:

STEEL IS MY BODY AND FIRE IS MY BLOOD

I have created over a thousand blades

Unknown to Death, Nor known to Life
WAD1992 said:

actually the entire series is UNsalvageable , so this hardly counts XD !!!
Unsalvageable Train Wreck !!! :P

ikr

so much for ufotable fixing anything
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:DDD
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Mickdrew said:

I have created over a thousand blades

Unknown to Death, Nor known to Life

Have withstood pain to create many weapons
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Mickdrew said:
:DDD
Insertanamehere said:


Unknown to Death, Nor known to Life

Have withstood pain to create many weapons

yet those hands will never hold anything
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silverwalls said:
Mickdrew said:
:DDD

Have withstood pain to create many weapons

yet those hands will never hold anything
So, as I Pray--
Feb 20, 2015 8:35 AM

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Feaor said:
silverwalls said:

yet those hands will never hold anything
So, as I Pray--

UNLIMITED BLADE WORKS
Feb 20, 2015 8:38 AM

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*high fives everyone*

We finished it! ^‿^
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Feb 20, 2015 8:41 AM

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we did it after all. ( ´∀`)☆
Feb 20, 2015 9:07 AM

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Rejoice (・∀・)ノ
Poe who? This is real poetry right here
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I'm so proud of you all



I'm sorry for not believing in you Silver
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TheConquerer said:
I dont really care although it usually passes of as cheesy if the person who says it is not a poetic person.


This. Doesn't really add much to an anime for me.
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