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Feb 14, 2018 2:08 PM

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this was sweet. gave me a good impression about Nisekoi but.. *checks comments* lol

Feb 16, 2018 2:08 AM

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One of the best one-shot ever read, that plot twist and ending were sad :'(

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Feb 16, 2018 2:40 PM

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5/10

Dunno, it just didn't give me the feels. The plot seemed too forced.
Feb 23, 2018 6:35 PM

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Really liked it 8/10
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Mar 25, 2018 9:22 AM

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Well this is my second favorite manga / one-shot of all time. I did not see the plot twist coming at all and I almost teared up. Loved the art style and I loved the interactions between both of them.
Apr 29, 2018 5:34 AM

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I'm not crying or anything of the sorts ;__;....


May 3, 2018 4:53 AM

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Meh. What broke my suspension of disbelief was too much contrived coincidences.


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May 9, 2018 7:50 PM
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Frostbytes said:
So 15 min left and dude is in school instead of a fucking hospital? Having your heart stopped working isn't a matter of joke.


That aside, decent one-shot although I saw the twist coming.


Calma é só um oneshot, creio eu q n adiantaria nada ir pro hospital.
May 10, 2018 2:23 PM

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Pretty good. 7/10
I liked the concept.
Dec 2, 2018 1:27 AM

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I'm sad they didn't kiss, ahhah ;A;
For a one shot, I guess it was well done bc you get emotional over the characters and I'm glad they both died instead of sugarcoating a miraculous recovery lol

7/10
Jan 26, 2019 2:06 PM

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LoneWizzy said:
Someone was reading Seo Kouji lately huh...Sasuga Komi Naoshi plagiarising like there is no tomorrow...At least Love Hina was an old series tho so it felt like a fun remake...Dont know what to feel about this one...

I will probably read this till i lose all hope like i did with Nisekoi...

Inb4: Harem lol


Why you say that is a cliche series and I don't know what Seo Kouji did you read but this is probably not plagiarism.
Jun 12, 2019 7:56 AM
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Am I the only one who doesn't really care about the logic behind this manga?
Jun 12, 2019 4:47 PM
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It hits me right in the feelings
Aug 18, 2019 10:25 PM

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This was pretty neat. Definitely was not expecting him to have it as well.
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Sep 8, 2019 12:35 PM
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Decent manga not low not high.
Jan 17, 2020 4:02 AM

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Felt pretty short for a one shot. It was a good read, I kinda hoped this could’ve been turned into an anime or at least into a manga with more chapters.

7/10
Feb 14, 2020 2:19 PM

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not gonna lie.. i almost cried. this was so adorable and sweet.
May 1, 2020 2:35 PM

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That M night shyamalan plot twist doe
"i only have few hours to live so imma waste them searching for your useless lucky charm" lmfao get the fuck outta here
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May 9, 2020 6:49 AM

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Now that was really unexpected, I never would've thought that he had the same disease, and with far shorter heart beats left. Now that's pretty sad :(

Just like he sad, he should've at least kissed her

They could've spent the last 15 minutes together, but I guess he has realized, the best way for him to pass is to hear her singing :(

But it was pretty short though, so I'll go with a solid 8/10
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Jun 24, 2020 7:24 AM
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OMG that's the best one-shot I've ever read. Brilliant.
Jul 19, 2020 11:30 PM

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It's been a long time I have read a one-shot and damn it hit me right in the feels. I only wonder where did Poppo keep his device.
Aug 5, 2020 11:11 PM
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I didn't see that coming. I have mixed feelings about the twist, but it certainly caught me by surprise. Plot holes aside, it hit me very hard. Though I didn't cry as much compared to Watashitachi no Shiawase na Jikan, it really hits me. Shows that I have to enjoy life. This is the 2nd sad romance manga I've read, and I'm very impressed
Aug 27, 2020 4:54 AM

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the characters were really likeable, i really liked ijima

it was a little too short to really evoke emotion of sorts, it had its sweet moments tho but that "twist" kinda fell flat for me, great premise tho felt like it had so much more potential.







but i’ll probably remember over and over again
you were there and everyone else was there
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Sep 9, 2020 2:49 PM

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well shit i still somehow cried, im utterly broken for the rest of the day
Sep 12, 2020 2:33 AM

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Well this was a great manga.

The disease was silly but it was a happy and at the same time it's sad.

It was pretty enjoyable reading it but still bro seriously he literally have 15 MINUTES LEFT instead of going to the hospital he just stay there like imagine someone just go upstairs and suddenly he just saw a fucking dead body like.

It was a sad manga making a lot of cute faces and a cute waifu so overall rating 8/10

I liked a lot it was very good I appreciate the one who created it<3
Sep 23, 2020 5:57 AM
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This one just punches you in the face and you cry. Literaly cry like a baby bcs this puts feels even on the coldest person. agh...
Oct 5, 2020 7:25 AM
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A heartbreaking story , I wish if we would've been able to them join together in the afterlife... ❤
Oct 7, 2020 5:07 AM

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How come this wasn't popular enough to get serialised?
Oct 16, 2020 7:09 PM

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😔😔😔did not expect that
Oct 23, 2020 12:40 AM
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Ah yes another "death-bait being the most beautiful thing I've ever seen" thread. Art was nice tho.
Nov 22, 2020 1:56 AM

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I am caught off guard...damn
Very good this oneshot
Dec 17, 2020 11:26 AM
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This one-shot was too good.
Didn't expect this ending though.
Jan 16, 2021 2:30 AM

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As the second latest One-Shot from the mangaka of Nisekoi, I was a little confused to why this didn't succeeded in becoming serialized for a moment until I read a few pages to realize why.

I think his talent is decent but possibly unextraordinary for how cliche his foundations are of a story's core and his characters.
I was intrigued in the synopsis without first knowing it was from him, and upon further reading it was almost clear why it wasn't serialized from how full in story it is as a One-Shot with no warrant to adapt it because it's already complete as it with everything that it revealed.

As beautiful as it was for simple fact of what it lays, I expected better potential because it wasn't necessarily unique at all.
The heart disease of elevated heart beats to cause death seems to exist in some form, but a device to count what heart beats you have left is fake even though it's a cool aspect to the story.

The plot twist that the male protagonist himself had the same disease without telling her was great but some may have predicted that just from assumption.
Unfortunately as decent as the characters are as well from a seemingly gloomy girl with that secret being very expressive and the guy himself having little to live enjoying his life ... they're extremely basic and unoriginal because of their lacking distinctiveness.

I guess that could have been evolved in a manga but it's cliche from many bland stories/characters alike. I did enjoy it though even if it's very ordinary. 4/10.
Jan 25, 2021 7:54 PM
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damn this was pretty sad, pretty decent for a one shot though. art was really nice and each page was nicely laid out. characters were developed well for a single chapter, the pacing was fairly good too. the ending was quite unexpected, but i think it was kinda a happy ending. overall 6/10
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Feb 22, 2021 6:45 AM

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Feels really underwhelming since I saw that one coming.
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Mar 24, 2021 4:01 PM

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Sweet one-shot.
Though it could've been better in so many ways.
But it was still touching.

So 6/10 from me.
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Apr 17, 2021 1:36 PM

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Istg wtf was that ending. Komi Naoshi, I really thought you could redeem yourself from Nisekoi lol. Everyone just really needs to come and go with the same damn plot device. Smh.

I quite liked this tho, it had a good concept but just ended with a wtf moment. Good comedy too I guess.
Apr 18, 2021 10:31 PM

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Wow it was not a good idea to read this at 3am. I’m speechless this was a really good one-shot.
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Jun 4, 2021 8:41 AM

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I just started reading manga...so this would be my 3rd or 4th manga....and after reading this one shot I felt really sad...they both were perfect for each other...and they lived short lives...but both Iijima and Takagi could live their lives to the fullest....I will miss them :(......this is one of the saddest manga I have read so far
Dec 7, 2021 5:04 AM
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Very Tragic Ending. I hope they are together and living happily in afterlife.
Dec 7, 2021 6:29 AM
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good manga, ending got me a bit emotional
Dec 23, 2021 5:02 PM
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How in the fuck does the dude that makes Nisekoi also makes this ?
Jan 19, 2022 11:56 PM

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The plot twist caught me off guard
Apr 2, 2022 11:46 PM

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Hmm that was good. Loved it. Tho it felt too short...
Aug 11, 2022 8:36 PM

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It's too too much beautiful ❤️❤️
Sep 11, 2022 5:10 PM
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if she became a famous singer why didnt she take advantage of the aforementioned expensive treatment options?
Oct 5, 2022 7:19 AM

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Was scrolling through the one shot section and landed on this, finished it in like 7-8 mins.
The plot twist really had me.

It was a wonderful short read.
Oct 8, 2022 10:50 AM

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That was good read, better than nisekoi.
Though, people are saying seo kouji had hand in this one.
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Nov 15, 2022 10:05 PM
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Saw the twist coming and it still made me cry in the end
Dec 28, 2022 12:28 AM

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Very beautiful, although sad in bittersweet way, one-shot manga. They died young, but with smile on their faces.
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