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Nov 3, 2020 9:26 AM

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Major and side characters dying makes a story better and more realistic, especially something like Attack on Titan.
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Death is a natural thing, deal with it. Just because you don't like the thought of dying and thing every story should be a happy one to you doesn't mean you have to associate it with bad writing
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TomaTTC said:
Death is a natural thing, deal with it. Just because you don't like the thought of dying and thing every story should be a happy one to you doesn't mean you have to associate it with bad writing


Wait why are you assuming so much? I never said a story has to be happy and I never
associated killing characters with bad writing.
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alright boy, a story based on only killing characters here and there is not a good one.
BUT, killing characters sometimes spices the story up and makes it more interesting and it also gives off dark vibes to the story.

Talk about one piece for example, you're legit having more than 1000 characters in the story but only a few dies, that doesn't make the story bad but wouldn't be better if some of those 1000 characters died at a point of the story where they were supposed to die?
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alright boy, a story based on only killing characters here and there is not a good one.
BUT, killing characters sometimes spices the story up and makes it more interesting and it also gives off dark vibes to the story.

Talk about one piece for example, you're legit having more than 1000 characters in the story but only a few dies, that doesn't make the story bad but wouldn't be better if some of those 1000 characters died at a point of the story where they were supposed to die?


I mean...I don't entirely disagree, but I just think a death is more impactful when it's rarely done, if death's are common you begin to mentally prepare for them, thus causing to not hit as hard.

In a series like One Piece when a death happens you almost don't even believe it because of how rare they are, and when you finally realize it was real...it just hits way harder.
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AwokenStroken said:
TomaTTC said:
Death is a natural thing, deal with it. Just because you don't like the thought of dying and thing every story should be a happy one to you doesn't mean you have to associate it with bad writing


Wait why are you assuming so much? I never said a story has to be happy and I never
associated killing characters with bad writing.


then what was the point of making this thread? I'm pretty sure everyone knows characters dying =/= always good writing, especially if they are unnecessary ones. Characters dying can do either good, bad or add nothing at all to the story, it depends a lot, also it's your problem that you tried to get close to some AoT characters but failed since they are very minor and act like Isayama actually wanted you to get attached to them. See
for example. Their death was not for you to get sad, but to see the consequences of very important choices you make, it was also their fault since they "manipulated" Eren (ironic) into choosing to trust them, otherwise he'd himself try to fight the female Titan
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Hey, keeping alive your characters doesn't make your story good

Quite true.

Everything must be judged by looking at circumstances of either killing a character in anime/manga or keeping him/her alive.
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Excessively? It gets repetitive. A tragedy is probably the easiest way to invoke emotion but if it gets used a bunch, then it will get old.
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AoT is actually a very good example about how not to do it, from what is adapted thus far we only have a single example of a somewhat relevant character dying and they milked the shit out if it for ''muh feels''. The rest are all irrelevant non-characters.

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Everyone so far who said that dying makes a story more realistic or better is just plain wrong.
Killing off characters, or the faking of doing so, are writing techniques. Thats it. There is no good or bad to a writing technique.
The question is rather how good the writer is able to use those story elements. Shingeki no Kyojin for example did a darn poor job at it, making with Erens Fake death basically a promise that he won't die any time soon. That is even worse of a plot armour than say Naruto, where we were always aware that he would live through his series.
Also, on a side note: There are other ways to create the same despair as killing characters. So I kinda have to agree with the OP, that writers lately tend to get really lazy with it, especially because of shows like Game of Thrones, which showed how big the demand for GRITTY and DARK shows is.
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Everyone so far who said that dying makes a story more realistic or better is just plain wrong.
Killing off characters, or the faking of doing so, are writing techniques. Thats it. There is no good or bad to a writing technique.
The question is rather how good the writer is able to use those story elements. Shingeki no Kyojin for example did a darn poor job at it, making with Erens Fake death basically a promise that he won't die any time soon. That is even worse of a plot armour than say Naruto, where we were always aware that he would live through his series.
Also, on a side note: There are other ways to create the same despair as killing characters. So I kinda have to agree with the OP, that writers lately tend to get really lazy with it, especially because of shows like Game of Thrones, which showed how big the demand for GRITTY and DARK shows is.
Lmao I find it so funny that you say all this and then have My Hero Academia and Code Geass at 10/10 which are two of the of the worst written anime ever

I don't know why exactly you think that those shows are particulary badly written, but I feel an underlying hatred without reason, so I won't bother. Also, both Boku no Hero Academia and Code Geass are both a 9/10, not even a 10/10. I shouldn't expect a whole lot from someone who isn't even able to read a list entry, I guess.
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DBZisUnderrated said:
I'm very glad that people are starting to notice the facade Attack on Titan puts on. Most of the major characters don't die, could anybody name at least three major characters that die? At first glance, it looks like the series has a lot of deaths, but I can't even name three characters that have died. Maybe one or two.
A story where it's inevitable there'll be death is a good story. There are titans fml...
If a story just kills characters in a show that could still be the same without any deaths is what he means.

Also, characters die for other character's developments. Here are two examples:
A) The character is fully-fleshed with connection to more than just the plot or a character, they personally helped to progress the story and characters for multiple episodes and their death did something that helped the protagonist get closer to their goal, or their death gave a clue.
B) The character is the protagonist's sibling, you meet them for one episode and learn basically nothing apart from them being their sibling; they get killed for shock value.
Which one doesn't sound bad?
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Yes, I totally agree with this, Isayama needs to step up his game.


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I just can't get into something like Attack on Titan, but it kind baffles my noggin when people say "dUde cHaRaCtEr's dIe". It's just my opinion, but I feel like killing characters is the laziest way to evoke an emotion within the viewer/reader.

It's okay if you disagree, I'm not trying to bash you or your favorite show. I just want to enjoy the journey with ALL the characters!


I'd say it depends on how and why you kill the character and how much the character has been built up. It definitely is used out of laziness sometimes to evoke emotions. But, in Attack on Titan, I think the deaths are usually meant to have less impact than it's perceived to have. The first season in particular doesn't have any deaths that evoke lots of emotion; it seems to me that the deaths are more-so meant to show what consequences are like in the world. I'd ignore anyone that says the appeal to Attack on Titan is that characters die; it's more likely that they like that people die because edge is cool lol.
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Yeah killing character without any point is no good, but if it for the sake of story development or character development then it's good
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DBZisUnderrated said:
I'm very glad that people are starting to notice the facade Attack on Titan puts on. Most of the major characters don't die, could anybody name at least three major characters that die? At first glance, it looks like the series has a lot of deaths, but I can't even name three characters that have died. Maybe one or two.


Attack on Titan does have a lot of deaths, but major characters rarely die. Deaths are more-so shown as consequences rather than emotional moments. It's edgy, and people tend to like that. You should try watching the show in a different light. Not necessarily as just an edgy show and nothing more, but without the impression that a death has to have strong meaning or emotional value.
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Nillwas said:
@Tarotsu.
How can it be a insult when it's the truth?

Fairy Tail is rainbow, sparkles and glitter.
Even if the show has a death the chance that he or she is coming back to life is way to damn high.

There are no real darkness in the show and it dosen't fit as a battle Shounen to be this ridiculous happy shunshine Anime.

If that's not a problem I don't know what is.



I'm just saying that Fail Tail is so commonly used by critics of the series. Or Fanservice Tail or Fairy Fail.

And I do agree. Fairy Tail just lacks the stakes of a proper narrative. It has way too many death flags but the author is too cowardly to follow through with them. There are no consequences that can't be fixed by a random deus ex machina. I still like it for whatever reason. Maybe it's just the characters (save for the main cast).
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YEAH! ONE PIECE! KILLING ????? FOR NO REASON ONE PIECE!


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I dont usually post, but I had to this instance. The whole point of AOT is an apocalyptic world where humanity is under attack and people die every day. Therefore, of course the bloody characters have to die, or else the whole setting would just be meaningless. Some important characters died in AOT, but if the mc's died, people just wouldn't like the damn show, as then there wouldn't really be a main person(s) to follow and see their development despite the setting of the world. Also we tend to put ourselves in place of mc and live vicariously through them, just helps with getting into the show. Thats why we're mad when an mc gets killed because its like we died ourselves lol.
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The AoT "killing characters" was overrated,




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I mean yeah that's why the akame GA kill anime sucks but imagine summarizing attack on Titan to just "dUde cHaRaCtEr's dIe" lol.
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AwokenStroken said:
I just can't get into something like Attack on Titan, but it kind baffles my noggin when people say "dUde cHaRaCtEr's dIe". It's just my opinion, but I feel like killing characters is the laziest way to evoke an emotion within the viewer/reader.

It's okay if you disagree, I'm not trying to bash you or your favorite show. I just want to enjoy the journey with ALL the characters!


Might be the laziest way, but it certainly doesn't mean that authors shouldn't kill characters anyway.

AoT revolves around battling Titans. People gonna die. You never know who's gonna die, when and how. Hence, people die. People you thought wouldn't die, die, at surprising times and in various ways. It adds an atmosphere of realism to the story.

It would feel fake if characters didn't die. The amount of deaths in AoT is actually a truthful number.
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It would feel fake if characters didn't die. The amount of deaths in AoT is actually a truthful number.

It would also feel fake if the main characters don't die.

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AwokenStroken said:
Order-Sol said:
YEAH! ONE PIECE! KILLING ????? FOR NO REASON ONE PIECE!


Can you add a spoiler tag much appreciated :)

But he didn't said who's gonna die right?Every shounen battle anime someone's got to die.Even in mha someone dies.

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Scordolo said:
Excalibur1702 said:


It would feel fake if characters didn't die. The amount of deaths in AoT is actually a truthful number.

It would also feel fake if the main characters don't die.


That is one of my issues with AoT, the plot armour in the initial portion of the story. It isn't that bad though, but I get what you mean.
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Scordolo said:
AwokenStroken said:


Can you add a spoiler tag much appreciated :)

But he didn't said who's gonna die right?Every shounen battle anime someone's got to die.Even in mha someone dies.


He did say, I edited his quote and took out the name and replaced it with question marks.

Sorry for the confusion.
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Didn't bother reading all of the replies, sorry if someone has already sayed this!

Deaths on pretty much any show, manga, LN are usually trash. There's pretty little stories that actually make them for good, such as using it as a resource for character development, to make you feel awful or even for something as plain yet as useful as making a loss out of a win on the MCs side. This is the reason why I consider what you are stating is not completely right from my pov. It's actually quite far from both statements "Killing your characters makes/DO NOT make your story good", as in reality its just a dangerous resource that the author can use to make a point, or end up being something pointless. I'm not going into specific detail, because even though an example can make what im trying to say more clear, im too lazy to do it, and you can think of lots (Shingeki no kyojin; TGGL; Guilty crown;One piece, and the list could go on for ever)

So basically, deaths can turn either way, strengthening your bonds with something, or falling into something as irrational as it could get. Shows are not based on this premise.

Personally I do like when MC or side characters die (Obviously if they meet any of the points I made) but thats more of what I enjoy and not going to impose to people lol.

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DBZisUnderrated said:
I'm very glad that people are starting to notice the facade Attack on Titan puts on. Most of the major characters don't die, could anybody name at least three major characters that die? At first glance, it looks like the series has a lot of deaths, but I can't even name three characters that have died. Maybe one or two.

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There are plenty of major characters that die...
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Yeah, you're right,


agree with this! especially since he was replaced by someone who basically has the exact same role that he did
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Y-yeah it does like in the anime AR(actual reality) people died everyday but it's other that died not us so it's definitely good right now
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Who says that's what makes AoT good?
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Who says that's what makes AoT good?


No one. OP seem to basically be straw-manning
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I can agree with any writers that perhaps kill characters for the sake of progressing the plot or creating a subplot of avenging the dream of a character who has passed. The only issue that persists is if the characters are being killed off for practically no reason at all? If there isn't a blatant reason towards killing say an important and well developed character, why kill them off in the first place? Of course there could be various underlying means so I'd say it really depends on the series and what purpose is being served.
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maybe not but it sure makes fans go surprised pikachu face everytime.

oh and by thge way. i agree completely. this is one of the reasons i dont like clannad after story and all that.
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That's not what SnK is popular for but whatever
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"I just want to enjoy the journey with ALL the characters!"

*One Piece Theme Plays*

Alright I'll be honest. Killing characters does make the story better. As an edgelord I deny your claim.
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I bet you like fairy tail then, no hate but I can't stand "happy" endings. Imagine all the shows and their story without dead characters, Story needs that to happen, authors doing it well, except for
It was awfully bad and I can't see a reason why the author did that.
Anime/Manga needs drama, When you starting to love/like a character and they are killing him, That makes you feel sad and uncomfortable. Imagine all anime without the deaths of characters. If you watched Ashita No Joe, Just think how the story would have been gone If no deaths.
Idk how can someone say "laziest way" about the Deaths of characters? For me, the Laziest way to develop a story is to keep all characters alive, No drama, no emotion, nothing really worth to watch.
That's why I hate fairy tail and That's why I think MHA is childish compared to OG shonen jumps. That's why Naruto is so great, cos the author didn't fear to kill characters and the audience's hearts.
Anime without drama = TRASH.
I'm not saying that death is necessary, But drama is necessary for every anime, Not saying about that Kawaii mediocre Animes, But when it comes to Attack On titan alike anime/mangas. yes, IT NEEDS DRAMA. I can't even imagine AOT without deaths and etc. It would have been the most cringiest anime of all time. Imagine titans attacking people and no one dies lmao. main characters can easily defeat them without loss!
Well, I can't stand animes like that so....
If they are killing characters meaninglessly then okay I can see what you were saying.
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Who said it does? If you are meaninglessly killing characters, of course your story wouldn't be good. But there's actually substance behind the killings, then it definitely has the ability to make the story great and compelling.
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It depends if it’s like SAO Aincrad when they kill people for shock factor an episode after they were introduced. If it’s something like
, then it’s one of the better deaths.
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DBZisUnderrated said:
I'm very glad that people are starting to notice the facade Attack on Titan puts on. Most of the major characters don't die, could anybody name at least three major characters that die? At first glance, it looks like the series has a lot of deaths, but I can't even name three characters that have died. Maybe one or two.

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I know some of these aren't major, but there is quite a few characters that still go out. But I get your point, then again, who would want AOT to suddenly turn into Akame ga kill
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NextUniverse said:
DBZisUnderrated said:
I'm very glad that people are starting to notice the facade Attack on Titan puts on. Most of the major characters don't die, could anybody name at least three major characters that die? At first glance, it looks like the series has a lot of deaths, but I can't even name three characters that have died. Maybe one or two.

S1 - S3P2






I know some of these aren't major, but there is quite a few characters that still go out. But I get your point, then again, who would want AOT to suddenly turn into Akame ga kill


Yea, but AOT was trying to give out this Walking Dead, Game of Thrones "nobody is safe!" vibe but when I really started to think about it, the main cast, characters that get the most screentime (not villains) never get killed.

And if they do, it's rare.
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DBZisUnderrated said:
I'm very glad that people are starting to notice the facade Attack on Titan puts on. Most of the major characters don't die, could anybody name at least three major characters that die? At first glance, it looks like the series has a lot of deaths, but I can't even name three characters that have died. Maybe one or two.


Mhh let's see
Sasha,hanji,Erwin,Ymir,Berthold,Marco,The Levi Squad is arguably part of the major characters,


So yeah all in all calling attack on titans approach to consequences a facade is delusional at best



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@Tarotsu.
How can it be a insult when it's the truth?

Fairy Tail is rainbow, sparkles and glitter.
Even if the show has a death the chance that he or she is coming back to life is way to damn high.

There are no real darkness in the show and it dosen't fit as a battle Shounen to be this ridiculous happy shunshine Anime.

If that's not a problem I don't know what is.



I'm just saying that Fail Tail is so commonly used by critics of the series. Or Fanservice Tail or Fairy Fail.

And I do agree. Fairy Tail just lacks the stakes of a proper narrative. It has way too many death flags but the author is too cowardly to follow through with them. There are no consequences that can't be fixed by a random deus ex machina. I still like it for whatever reason. Maybe it's just the characters (save for the main cast).


My favourite part is when laxus sucks up a lot of toxic smoke to safe everybody , effectively sacraficing himself.

And then he doesn't die and the only explanation you get is characters being like " lol how is he not dead ? Well we don't know either lmao "

The thing worse then not having stakes is when a story pretends to have stakes but is to afraid to actually deliver on it
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DBZisUnderrated said:
I'm very glad that people are starting to notice the facade Attack on Titan puts on. Most of the major characters don't die, could anybody name at least three major characters that die? At first glance, it looks like the series has a lot of deaths, but I can't even name three characters that have died. Maybe one or two.


Mhh let's see
Sasha,hanji,Erwin,Ymir,Berthold,Marco,The Levi Squad is arguably part of the major characters, The Marley Party characters that join later on in the Story are Major characters and a lot of them die too , Hannes may not be a Major character but a important one , grisha has a big role and his own backstory and he is also dead

So yeah all in all calling attack on titans approach to consequences a facade is delusional at best


Except that the MAIN characters are Armin, Eren and Mikasa. Those three. Everyone else is a side character. Are those 3 dead yet?
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A show has to keep the balance, if you don't kill characters the fear of the main cast dying will get lower, if you kill too many the characters may or may not get their arc cut of.

But in general when i want to watch a show that creates good drama without the factor of death i would not watch a action/fighting show, if i watch a show like that there should be at least some chance the characters could die.

Attack on Titan is more on the side of not killing characters, like many of its battle Shounen buddies it protects its main cast from any sort of potential death which in the case of Attack on Titan really weakens the narrative and believability. Its one of the best example of how not to handle it in my opinion.
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Mhh let's see
Sasha,hanji,Erwin,Ymir,Berthold,Marco,The Levi Squad is arguably part of the major characters, The Marley Party characters that join later on in the Story are Major characters and a lot of them die too , Hannes may not be a Major character but a important one , grisha has a big role and his own backstory and he is also dead

So yeah all in all calling attack on titans approach to consequences a facade is delusional at best


Except that the MAIN characters are Armin, Eren and Mikasa. Those three. Everyone else is a side character. Are those 3 dead yet?

Why are you trying to undermine this argument with the main characters? Major characters definitely exist outside of those three.
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