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Sep 4, 2014 9:22 PM
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Dat kiss though. This was not bad but felt I thought it was a bit fast. Anyways, seems fun enough and the MC earned a lot of new fans.

The dialogues made me lol quite a bit.
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Sep 4, 2014 11:35 PM
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I knew the hug thing was gonna get a callback as soon as it was brought up. Short, cliche, but sweet and enjoyable enough I suppose. :D
Sep 5, 2014 12:15 AM
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I like it, but I thought it could have been longer maybe.
Sep 5, 2014 12:16 AM
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Can someone clarify few things for me please?

Did he put the letter in the wrong shoe locker? Did the girl he liked really got the letter or did the blond girl intercepted it?

Given how many hints he got from the blond girl She liked him before the change right? Why would She care how he puts chopsticks or shoes? :o
Sep 5, 2014 3:49 AM
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Could have benefited from a few extra pages.
Sep 5, 2014 4:56 AM
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Really good, but I wish there were a few more chapters.
Sep 5, 2014 5:06 AM
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A bit too rushed, a few more pages could help this oneshot.
I'm learning English so maybe I make mistakes :)
Sep 5, 2014 6:37 AM
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It felt rushed, but it was a nice read.
Sep 7, 2014 2:22 PM
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gonna be original here and say I really enjoyed it despite it being rushed.
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Sep 9, 2014 5:21 AM
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The endings to these oneshots coupled with Kaiki's mention of The Gift of the Magi in Koimonogatari make me wonder if Nisio reads O. Henry's work. There's all the haircuts in his work too.
Apr 7, 2015 4:57 AM

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I see, I see. I thought the girl saw him put the note in the other girls locker and she took it out so she can save him from rejection and save herself from him (maybe) getting taken away? I think? But then again, it was nice.
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Apr 7, 2015 3:42 PM

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its so cute and the art is beautiful
save all the cute girls from ntr manga
Apr 8, 2015 12:42 PM
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Cute, nice art but nothing special. Can't see it being anything more.
Apr 21, 2015 3:45 PM

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They should make a series for this D:
Dec 12, 2015 3:24 PM

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This One-Shot should get and deserves a full series.


Feb 8, 2016 11:31 PM

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This one was soooooooooooooo cute that my brain short-circuited!!!
May 4, 2016 11:32 PM

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So this is when NisiOisiN[monogatari series creator] created normal high-school romance story ???? WOW!!!!!

I need more something like this, The art is really good because i am sick and hate with shoujo art
May 5, 2016 5:47 PM

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I loved it, a little bit rushed but i'm not worrying to much.
May 7, 2016 4:55 PM
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Just perfect!!!!!!!!!!!
Jun 6, 2016 9:44 PM

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Kinda wanted more or maybe even just a after story T.T
Sep 2, 2016 3:13 PM

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I need more of this. Cute,caring tsundere ayyy. I'm in.

Awesome one-shot!
Sep 5, 2016 12:36 PM

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Good ol' Nisio xD


Buddy pick the right girl for him in the end, good for him.
Jan 25, 2017 8:55 PM
elk sensei

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Really liked this - would love to see it continue, or even be adapted (doubt it, it's only a one-shot :-))
Aug 9, 2017 6:15 AM

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It was an okay one-shot. But I love happy endings :D
Nov 3, 2018 2:47 AM

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that's pretty good for a one-shot

To-Do List:

  • NOTHING

Dec 3, 2018 1:57 AM

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It was really good! Good story, funny moments, nice art style: I loved it!



buy mochi at the mochi store
and friends at the friend store

Jan 27, 2019 11:26 AM

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should've been a short series, like idk, 12 chapters? still liked it tho, the art was pretty good

7/10
Jul 22, 2020 1:10 PM

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Hilarious beautiful panel of her complaining with over 20 reasons of what's bad about him. Love that subtle hint of her being attracted to him from knowing this is a romance. Nice character design and overall art.

Beautiful sweet strong short one-shot of Ichizono encouraging him to make his crush Horoi regret rejecting his love letter without replying to him in person and then being determined to be a better hard working baseball player to impress Ichizono and hug her from behind which she mentioned was manly and cool after his rejection, but then for her to turn around and kiss him to stay ahead of him. 8/10.

I love The Monogatari Series and Imperfect Girl. Nisio Isin's writing is amazing.
Once he finishes The Monogatari Series: Monster Season, I'd love to see him write a romance story.
Oct 10, 2020 6:35 PM

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Solid one-shot. Also that panel of Ichizono coming up with all of those bad points about Sunaki was great.

Nisio Isin strikes again.
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Oct 10, 2020 10:44 PM

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That was a bit fast but it was ok for me it was quite romantic for a one-shot and it's good as expected from Nisio isin.

That kiss was shockingly amazing lol 6/10 for me it was just a bit rush.
Sep 15, 2021 12:45 PM

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The hug was a little creepy in my opinion but she was into it so it works. Such a cute ending! Predictable but still a fun little read
Feb 5, 2022 1:26 AM
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Top 2 one shots I’ve read and probably my favourite. Makes me wish Nisio Isin made more normal romance like this. Loved it
Apr 26, 2022 12:27 PM

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Could've been better if it was little longer but still good nonetheless
Nov 15, 2022 1:20 AM
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I- it was just too good for a one shot
Feb 23, 2023 9:24 AM

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Honestly one of the best romantic oneshot I had ever read! Too bad this didn't got serialised :(
Mar 9, 2023 10:36 AM
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Cute little oneshot, outcome was obvious after the amount of crippling detail was exposed about the dude's flaws by the best friend of all people
Jun 20, 2023 10:25 AM

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Felt like a sudden twist, even though it already hinted from the beginning that Ichizono likes Sunaki. It was a fun read.
Oct 22, 2023 12:44 PM
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made me happy, made me smile
May 19, 2:06 PM

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Watching the dude reap the fruits of his labor after putting in the work to better himself was satisfying. The romance was adorable too.
It’s time to ditch the text file.
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