hpulley said: THIS IS A MANGA ONLY DISCUSSION POST. DO NOT DISCUSS ANYTHING BEYOND THIS CHAPTER.
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The Final Chapter - Nozoki Ana (A Peephole)
Kido goes into the bar. "Come on in!"
"Hey, Tatsuhiko! Over here, over here! Everyone is waiting! They're upstairs already!" says Yoneyama.
"Sorry I'm late. Work ran long." says Kido.
"Since graduation, you haven't seen them for about a year eh?" says Yoneyama.
"Wasn't I out drinking with you guys last month? Are you going senile already, Yoneyama?" asks Kido.
"No, I mean everyone from class!"
Throwing her arms around him and saying,"You're laaate Taaa kun! Especially bothersome to come out to the alumni meeting, ehhh?" slurs...
"Makiko...!" says Kido, "...you're drunk? Drinking is not allowed."
"No, she's just naturally high!" says Yoneyama.
"Look at Yone's face, Ta kun! I burst out laughing!" says Makiko.
"The drinks are on me because I'm in a creative company," says Yoneyama.
"Just a crummy little game company!" says Makiko, "just the graphic artist really Zatsuyo kun!"
"Lies!"
"Ta kun, you're working for a writing tools company?" asks Makiko.
"Yeah, it's desperate times for business right now! Have real design hopes but I'm not really good enough."
"Ya, just being in the company for a year. At this point Makiko is very skilled. Eh?"
Kido asks her, "How far along now?"
"Three months," Makiko says with a smile, holding her belly.
"You look happy, Makiko," says Kido.
"Yeah," she says, with a smile and sticking her tongue out and adds, "Oh yeah, I've got a letter to everyone from Yuri!"
Letter from Yuri: "Everyone, are you well? I am currently working in Italy rather than Hokkaido. The purpose of my work is short term study abroad. Every day is fresh and really fun. Between busy days I sit here by myself gazing out the window in my room, reminiscing about everyone back home. In the over two years we had good times, lots of fun, trying times, which I didn't appreciate but now I'm a bit lonely. Especially Tatsuhiko kun, want to talk about a lot of stuff some day when there is time. Someday want to get together with you all again, Tatsuhiko, Yoneyama, Makiko... and even Emiru, everyone together, smiling!"
Everyone seems a bit shocked at the last part. Kido thanks Makiko for giving them the letter. Pouring another drink, Yoneyama says it was a happy letter and this is a great night. "Really great!" he says, tossing it back. "Would have been even better if Emiru had been here," he adds, killing the mood a bit.
That's right, Kido thinks, from this day on its about a year since graduation.
"Tatuhiko, we're heading out," says Yoneyama, "Yeah," adds Makiko, Kido replying, "yeah, it'll be tomorrow soon."
Kido thinks, I will wait forever until I see Emiru again.
"This time, drinking buddies!"
"Yeah, me too, "drinking master."
"Bad for Makiko though."
Down the street, "Hey, Madoka, what's wrong? Let's go. Hey."
"Wait." says Madoka.
"People you know?"
"Yeah. No problem. Bye, bye Kido kun."
"Something to say to them?"
"It's nothing."
Kido thinks, today was the alumni meeting, something has changed, seems everyone has become somewhat of an adult, time has passed. Who would agree we are equal, relaxed, certain... Emiru said she felt like she was in a rut, ever since we made love she had been stuck. Now I am stuck... The time to meet Emiru again is not something to laugh about... The waiting year is making me desperate to make progress from where I am. "Wait one year..." she said. The time limit for meeting was today. For every day after today, I'm afraid ... Reality may knock me down.
Kido arrives home.
This time for her, time has flowed too, for me it is long past blowing it off, forgetting...
What if today... especially tired...
"Aa....a.....a" the peephole is lit! He looks through! Kido runs down the hall to her apartment, huffing. It still says 'Ikuno' on the nameplate. He tries the door to her apartment. It is open. She is sitting on the floor, kneeling. She is modestly dressed in a skirt, jacket and blouse.
"Hey... stupid..." He says with a smile.
Emiru turns her head to the side. "The nameplate and... the key... were not changed eh?... The peephole is still there..." she says.
"I rented two rooms in the same apartment! It's family owned and double the cost... was tough just on my meagre salary. Really just barely able to wait... you really are low..."
She jumps up, puts her arm around him and kisses him. "Uh?!" he says.
"I was really selfish and I'm sorry. Selfish and alone. I... had hoped to be a normal girl, but not with stylish clothes and accessories, not having my spirit affected by praise, romantic words and expressions. I didn't want to be forever searching until it hurts for another you... so Kido kun..." she says with her hand coming up.
She put her fingers to her eye in her peeping gesture and asks, "wouldn't you like to 'show each other'' with me? From now on...forever?!"
Kido has a happy blushing face. Emiru is happy, blushing and laughing as they hug and laugh and he says, "Gladly!"
Nozoki Ana, the end.
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Wow, what a trip. Loved it! For all that it was it ended up being, for me, one of the best adult romance stories I have read. I knew from the start I wanted them to get together so I'm glad they did. Sure was a long journey... but a fun one in the end.
Note that "show each other" is a change to the "peep each other" relationship they had before with her rules. Peep each other is completely made up Japanese while "show each other" is an actual compound verb.
That was crazy good.
Thanks for the translations btw! :) |