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Anime Stats
Days: 62.2
Mean Score: 7.70
  • Total Entries338
  • Rewatched0
  • Episodes3,564
Anime History Last Anime Updates
Shouwa Genroku Rakugo Shinjuu: Sukeroku Futatabi-hen
Shouwa Genroku Rakugo Shinjuu: Sukeroku Futatabi-hen
Jan 21, 12:59 AM
Watching 3/12 · Scored -
Little Witch Academia (TV)
Little Witch Academia (TV)
Jan 18, 9:29 PM
Watching 2/25 · Scored -
Kobayashi-san Chi no Maid Dragon
Kobayashi-san Chi no Maid Dragon
Jan 18, 9:29 PM
Watching 2/13 · Scored -
Manga Stats
Days: 23.0
Mean Score: 8.32
  • Total Entries67
  • Reread0
  • Chapters4,135
  • Volumes426
Manga History Last Manga Updates
One Piece
One Piece
Jan 12, 1:51 PM
Reading 852/? · Scored -
Arslan Senki
Arslan Senki
Jan 11, 10:33 PM
Reading 43/? · Scored -
Toaru Majutsu no Index Gaiden: Toaru Kagaku no Railgun
Toaru Majutsu no Index Gaiden: Toaru Kagaku no Railgun
Nov 15, 2016 8:46 PM
Reading 89/? · Scored -

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RegularOne Jan 27, 3:49 PM
On-point review for White Album 2 dude ;D
ooo333 Nov 21, 2016 8:01 PM
Hey there

Read that sign over there:

"Watch White Album (AKA White Album 1). 26 episodes. Then do a review."

Interesting sign.
Kotone_neko Nov 20, 2016 2:35 AM
Just completed WA2 and ur review is right on point :D
Glad to see that WA2 is one of ur fav animes, just like me!
ABHISHEKV Sep 11, 2016 11:28 PM
Fair call. Let me know when the next piece is ready.
ABHISHEKV Sep 8, 2016 9:10 PM
Glad to know.

Yeah. That should fix things. As I alluded to, that is definitely an option. Simply, write another short story. Given that we're reading the story from his point of view, it would be the case. Another option would have been to switch points of view but that probably would work better with a longer work. Or quite simply, you could even write the same story from the point of view of the Spider Girl. Then the stories would work together as a pair. That might be interesting in its own right.
ABHISHEKV Sep 7, 2016 9:07 AM
Right, so my thoughts on your fan fiction novel. This isn't much and I am not that adept at giving a critical analysis but I'll just offer my two cents on the matter.

First off, I can see where you got the Re:Zero inspiration from. I know very little about Dark Souls though. I assume that this is the first time that you have actually tried writing a fan fiction novel and for a first time, it was really good. You definitely have potential. As for the story itself, the initial section was solid. The environment description was on point and it certainly tingled my imagination. The usage of words was apt and it was really effective in easing the reader into the world. That entire section was also effective in piquing the reader's interest (I probably shouldn't speak in general but it was certainly the case with me). At some point, I was very interested in what the Spider Girl was all about.

Next (and pretty much the rest of the sections), I can't help but feel that there should have been a little more content here. The Spider Girl and Sister section was way too short. I wanted those characters to have more exposure or more like, they should have been given more exposure. Given that, this was an experimental fan fiction, I don't blame you and simply the fact that I wanted more is a testament to how good your novel was at hooking me. If not, I wouldn't have said this. The ending (or was it the epilogue?) was sweet. I am a sucker for happy endings like that so no problem there. If there was a little more to the middle section, this would have been a great short novel. It's still very readable and your potential was clearly illustrated there. And I seriously wouldn't mind reading any new creation of yours. More than welcome.

Apart from that, there were a couple of typing errors but that is inevitable I suppose. Also, that one picture of the Sister and Spider Girl hugging was pretty darn good. Not sure how helpful my thoughts were, but that's pretty much it. If there's anything specific that you want me to comment on, let me know and I'll do so. It was an interesting read :D
Anime_World1 Aug 21, 2016 8:36 PM
I just read your white album 2 review and all I got to say is wow. Good for you
Patrickrektu Aug 21, 2016 6:55 AM
my boy. White Album 2 is lit.
Cold_coffee Jul 8, 2016 10:07 AM
White album 2 <3. Have you watched gunslinger girl anime?
ABHISHEKV Jul 5, 2016 9:41 PM
Yeah. Sure. Go for it. I trust that you would exercise tact and not do anything untoward. I have no issues whatsoever. If you're interested, you can share the story with me later on too. It's better to have an outlet and get it all out of your system. It's for the better. Thanks for the intimation.
patriotprideboy Jul 2, 2016 2:48 AM
I liked your WA2 review
ABHISHEKV Jun 26, 2016 10:18 AM
Think we can talk here again.

Yeah. Since you have been a rare visitor these days, it'll take a while to adjust to the whole host of changes. Not that I am one to speak since I did not log on for almost 2 months myself albeit because I was extremely busy. I only logged on before the end of this month because of what happened.
ABHISHEKV Jun 26, 2016 2:24 AM
5 hour Skype call* Made a couple of typing errors probably. Excuse me.
ABHISHEKV Jun 26, 2016 2:11 AM
Here goes then....
ABHISHEKV Jun 22, 2016 3:13 AM
I was doing quite well till the start of June. This month in general has been one of my most unpleasant and problematic months. Nothing to do but persevere I suppose. I do have something important to say to you though because I do believe that you have a right to know. I can tell you via PM.