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Anime Stats
Days: 77.1
Mean Score: 7.77
  • Total Entries415
  • Rewatched0
  • Episodes4,389
Anime History Last Anime Updates
86 Part 2
86 Part 2
Oct 16, 7:04 PM
Watching 3/12 · Scored -
Kageki Shoujo!!
Kageki Shoujo!!
Sep 26, 4:17 AM
Completed 13/13 · Scored 8
Kobayashi-san Chi no Maid Dragon S
Kobayashi-san Chi no Maid Dragon S
Sep 24, 10:49 PM
Completed 12/12 · Scored 8
Manga Stats
Days: 39.9
Mean Score: 8.18
  • Total Entries87
  • Reread0
  • Chapters6,844
  • Volumes419
Manga History Last Manga Updates
Mahoutsukai no Yome
Mahoutsukai no Yome
Oct 14, 9:35 PM
Reading 81/? · Scored -
Oshi no Ko
Oshi no Ko
Oct 14, 6:21 PM
Reading 59/? · Scored -
Kingdom
Kingdom
Oct 14, 3:59 AM
Reading 695/? · Scored -

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aifydimensionia Sep 22, 5:37 AM
White Album 2 is like cocaine to the soul
HollowLive_VOID Apr 20, 5:51 AM
WHITE ALBUM 2 IS THE SPICIEST ROMANCE DRAMA ANIME EVER, GREAT TASTE SIR
Nozly Jun 7, 2020 5:22 PM
Good taste sir. RIP
amaanu01 May 5, 2020 9:03 PM
rip :(
AlucardNoYuuutsu Mar 5, 2020 8:33 AM
good taste, rip
DiangeloKun18 Oct 20, 2019 8:24 AM
R.I.P
Veele May 7, 2019 2:18 AM
Great reviews.
RegularOne Jan 27, 2017 3:49 PM
On-point review for White Album 2 dude ;D
ooo333 Nov 21, 2016 8:01 PM
Hey there

Read that sign over there:

"Watch White Album (AKA White Album 1). 26 episodes. Then do a review."

Interesting sign.
Kotone_neko Nov 20, 2016 2:35 AM
Just completed WA2 and ur review is right on point :D
Glad to see that WA2 is one of ur fav animes, just like me!
ABHISHEKV Sep 11, 2016 11:28 PM
Fair call. Let me know when the next piece is ready.
ABHISHEKV Sep 8, 2016 9:10 PM
Glad to know.

Yeah. That should fix things. As I alluded to, that is definitely an option. Simply, write another short story. Given that we're reading the story from his point of view, it would be the case. Another option would have been to switch points of view but that probably would work better with a longer work. Or quite simply, you could even write the same story from the point of view of the Spider Girl. Then the stories would work together as a pair. That might be interesting in its own right.
ABHISHEKV Sep 7, 2016 9:07 AM
Right, so my thoughts on your fan fiction novel. This isn't much and I am not that adept at giving a critical analysis but I'll just offer my two cents on the matter.

First off, I can see where you got the Re:Zero inspiration from. I know very little about Dark Souls though. I assume that this is the first time that you have actually tried writing a fan fiction novel and for a first time, it was really good. You definitely have potential. As for the story itself, the initial section was solid. The environment description was on point and it certainly tingled my imagination. The usage of words was apt and it was really effective in easing the reader into the world. That entire section was also effective in piquing the reader's interest (I probably shouldn't speak in general but it was certainly the case with me). At some point, I was very interested in what the Spider Girl was all about.

Next (and pretty much the rest of the sections), I can't help but feel that there should have been a little more content here. The Spider Girl and Sister section was way too short. I wanted those characters to have more exposure or more like, they should have been given more exposure. Given that, this was an experimental fan fiction, I don't blame you and simply the fact that I wanted more is a testament to how good your novel was at hooking me. If not, I wouldn't have said this. The ending (or was it the epilogue?) was sweet. I am a sucker for happy endings like that so no problem there. If there was a little more to the middle section, this would have been a great short novel. It's still very readable and your potential was clearly illustrated there. And I seriously wouldn't mind reading any new creation of yours. More than welcome.

Apart from that, there were a couple of typing errors but that is inevitable I suppose. Also, that one picture of the Sister and Spider Girl hugging was pretty darn good. Not sure how helpful my thoughts were, but that's pretty much it. If there's anything specific that you want me to comment on, let me know and I'll do so. It was an interesting read :D
Anime_World1 Aug 21, 2016 8:36 PM
I just read your white album 2 review and all I got to say is wow. Good for you
pbbuiter Aug 21, 2016 6:55 AM
my boy. White Album 2 is lit.