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Anime Stats
Days: 56.1
Mean Score: 6.43
  • Total Entries326
  • Rewatched0
  • Episodes3,354
Anime History Last Anime Updates
Patalliro Saiyuuki!
Patalliro Saiyuuki!
Sep 28, 2016 1:24 PM
Plan to Watch · Scored -
Gakuen Handsome The Animation
Gakuen Handsome The Animation
Sep 28, 2016 1:21 PM
Plan to Watch · Scored 10
Diabolik Lovers
Diabolik Lovers
Jul 20, 2016 4:22 AM
Completed 12/12 · Scored 9
Manga Stats
Days: 76.8
Mean Score: 6.98
  • Total Entries327
  • Reread0
  • Chapters12,925
  • Volumes1,536
Manga History Last Manga Updates
Jan 7, 2017 2:08 AM
Reading -/37 · Scored -
Tada, Kimi wo Aishiteru
Tada, Kimi wo Aishiteru
Jan 2, 2017 12:57 PM
Reading -/4 · Scored -
Jul 1, 2016 7:46 AM
Completed -/15 · Scored -


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Raging_Berserker Apr 15, 2018 3:55 AM

By the way, I stumbled on your profile from your review of Ib: Instant Bullet, was it? Yeah.
AlexTheRiot Sep 23, 2017 7:15 PM
Happy birthday friend!! Hope school and all else is going well!
Snappynator Sep 23, 2017 6:48 AM
Happy Birtdayif you are still alive
Illyricus Sep 22, 2017 4:36 PM
Happy Birthday, my friend! Hope you are still alive somewhere....
Kaishiyoku Sep 2, 2017 1:02 PM

Sugarie Jul 18, 2017 5:43 AM

Pantsu May 30, 2017 10:29 AM

AlexTheRiot Mar 23, 2017 8:40 PM
To be fair I did only use dojo for the story of the past which was centuries prior, which is intended to give it a more intimate and traditional feel, and I use barracks for the present time. But I hear ya though, diversifying the terms is definitely a good idea, and something I need to work on.

Yeah that makes sense. I think I get so caught up trying to maintain paragraph and narrative flow that I miss out on taking advantage of simple sentences.

Cool, cool. I hope the ending came across okay. Since I decided to shorten the volume and end it halfway through the arc, I figure some people will be put off by lack of resolution.
Mummykun Mar 15, 2017 11:55 PM
I haven't even played Ataraxia yet, so I don't really know much about her. lol
But I still liked her in Fate/kaleid liner Prisma☆Illya. And the reason I have her in my favorites is mostly because of her character picture, that's the most beautiful one I've seen in this site.
Illyricus Mar 15, 2017 1:50 PM
Well, at least it's something :`(
AlexTheRiot Mar 14, 2017 5:27 PM
All good stuff! Thanks a bunch, there's definitely a lot for me to look at.

Certainly going to look at better dialogue tagging, because the gruff guy you thought was telling the story of the bandits, wasn't. It was the oldest of Quentle's foster brothers, hence the change in speech style lol.

About some of the Japanese terms, there's two reasons. One is, like you said, it's an alternate world, so my way of taking advantage of that is throwing in and mixing various concepts from different cultures/time periods, just for the heck of it honestly. The main reason, stems from the little hints that there's a lot of things in this world that shouldn't be there. Only at a certain point way down the road, it won't just be me having my way with the world, as there is a big reason for it.

I'd have to say the comma>noun descriptor>comma thing is a bit of my style, and a way to prevent short boring sentences. Though there's definitely some places that you pointed out that I could have explained better with a little more thought on wording.

Like I said, a lot of good stuff to work with, I appreciate it. Did you think anything particular about characters? Were there any that felt strong or weak in characterization? Or any that just stood out? And I'm glad you were pulled into the narrative quickly. While I have what I feel is a 'rich' story to tell, maintaining an engaging narrative is probably my biggest challenge with it.
Illyricus Mar 6, 2017 12:28 PM
Are you still alive, bro?
Mummykun Feb 25, 2017 11:49 AM
I love your Luvia profile. :D
Girls with ringlets are the best. <3
AlexTheRiot Feb 13, 2017 6:26 PM
Alright cool, well thank you in advance. Hmm gotcha, I'm interested in your thoughts on the flow for sure, since I don't remember you mentioning it for the first 3 chapters on wattpad. Though I did do some things different in the latter half due to feeling I needed to get rolling on the plot with a lot of events still to cover, so I'm wondering if your thoughts will be some of the things I was worried about.

I haven't. I've tried reviewcircle and keepwriting a while back and got nothing, but I see destructivereaders is a lot more active. I just worry about posting excerpts, and I feel like the opening chapter is the one thing I've gotten a decent amount of feedback on...but I might go ahead and give it a try at some point.
AlexTheRiot Feb 12, 2017 9:55 AM
That sure is unfortunate. Sorry you put in all that time and it disappeared :/ But if it would be easier for you to just give me your general thoughts and details you can remember, I'd hate for you to feel obligated to do all that over again.

I have not, as of yet. I started writing the second volume, so I'll probably wait until I've finished it to have a better idea of the whole arc's picture and how I want to present it and hopefully by then have some more feedback to go off of to find ways to better execute it.