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When I first read a summary about this manga it piqued my curiosity and I began to read it.

Story: 8
Ichiko did something terrible and ran away from home only to be found by a masked stranger and taken to his home where she is offered to live if she does the work of a maid.

Each of those living within this household alll have their reasons for doing so, none moreso than Kohaku, the masked stranger.

The story seems fairly normal, if a bit dramatic in regards to Ichiko's reason for fleeing from her home. There is a nice build up and you are lead to ... be curious about why Kohaku wears a mask. I will warn you that you will not his his face till almost the very end of the manga, but the scene where he reveals his face is a powerful one.

Art: 9
The artwork is fine, though I personally did not care much for Ichkio's hair style, but that is simply personal taste. The eyes are not drawn successfully in a few 'close up' frames making them appear almost hollow while a character's facial expression shows one of joy, giving a weird creepiness when these close ups occur. That being said there aren't too many of these and after a while they aren't nearly as distracting as you progress through the manga.

Character: 10
I love all the characters in this manga! While many of the support characters don't have their backgrounds explained, they are still wonderfully developed characters with an important background role to the main characters. Kohaku's personality is incredibly complicated but this is only ever explain through the support characters.

Enjoyment: 9
This is a manga where I would read it again (and there are only a few that make me do this). I was never bored with a single chapter or volume as there aren't too many 'filler' moments.

I really wanted to love this manga. There were a lot of things I liked about it, but there were things that were disappointing. Maybe the other reviews had me believing it would be deeper than it was, I'm not sure, but I was sad after I finished reading it and couldn't say that I loved it... Let's talk about the good/ bad!
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STORY 5/10: As the other reviews said, there isn't really any story like this one, but it isn't completely new either. While I love unique stories, I had to rate this one much lower because I didn't understand exactly what was happening half ... the time.

As someone who is also a comic artist, I saw there were many flaws in the way the artist did the panels, making it hard to follow along. The issue was that there were NOT ENOUGH panels to clearly understand what was happening in each scene, and this was happening all the time! I kept going back to previous pages to closely analyze them in an effort to understand, but I still couldn't always. I could get the gist of the story, but if that is the case, it makes it much less enjoyable.

There were interesting things in the story, but others that seemed randomly thrown in without anything leading up to it or even hinting at it, like Kohaku's issue with one of the teachers at school. The way that Kohaku's power seemed out-of-the-blue was a little off-putting. There was no indication of anything supernatural before getting into his backstory, which I believe was a big mistake. Even just a small incident with Kohaku, showing there was something supernatural about him before uncovering his backstory would have been compelling! However, waiting to show his face until the final chapters was a great decision! It was much more impactful that way. There was also a good reason for him picking up Ichiko in the beginning of the story, like he saw himself in her. So you can see... there were decisions that the mangaka made that I loved, while others, I wondered why they made them?


CHARACTERS 6/10: First, the character designs were great! An adorable, petite bob-haired girl and a tall, long-haired guy who always wears a mask and never shows his face... I LIKED that! I think those two had really great chemistry when it came to romance. I wished it was explored more, though.

*SPOILERS* (you can skip)
I liked the idea of Ichiko running away from home because of her loneliness and unease in her own home. The reason for her leaving, which was accidentally kicking her sister's baby, causing fear/anger in her home, was a unique idea! I liked that! However, I think it was over-dramatized and I thought if they had just taken it a step further, it would have been more interesting. For example, if the baby was actually very injured, or if the baby died because of her, there would be much bigger trauma and reason for her to stay in that house with the other characters. It still would have been an innocent accident, but it'd be a much heavier burden on her and would match her situation more to Kohaku's so that they could connect more as characters.

For Kohaku, the idea of him wearing the masks because of his abilities was a good move! BUT the manga didn't make it clear why exactly he needed it? I thought it kept him from seeing spirits, but then he was still acting like he could see/talk to them... Maybe it was because he resembled his mom and they were trying to hide that? The manga shouldn't make me question the reason of that so much. It's not bad to leave things open-ended, but when the reader is just confused, that's no good either. It would have been nice to see more development in Kohaku's character, from a scared child into a man. That development was not very clear to me.

The love rival... gosh... the love rival. I don't even remember his name, and on top of that, I didn't even realize they were rivals in love! I could tell he was flirty with Ichiko, but he seemed like that with any girl? I could tell Kohaku would sometimes get jealous, but he didn't do much other than get a little jealous. At the very end, when the love rival was like "I lost." I was thinking, "What?? You were fighting to begin with? When did you develop feelings for her?"
*END SPOILERS*

The other characters were okay, but they probably could have been taken out (or at least some of them) and it wouldn't have affected the story.


ART 7/10: The art style was pretty good. I especially loved the way the author drew faces and eyes. The outfits looked cute too! When Kohaku took off his mask, I was enamored by his face and eyes!! The author made him so handsome and I took screenshots so I could try out that art style myself. When a manga does that to me, then the art feels unique!

On the other hand, the way they decided to draw some scenes were just so confusing. As I mentioned, there were not enough panels to show exactly what was going on. On top of that, the positions of the characters were not always ideal to understand the situation or feelings. I found myself staring at one panel for a while trying to figure out what was happening in that panel. It needed more dramatic poses, more close-ups to convey emotions, and a little more life to it because the characters felt a little static as far as movement goes.


ENJOYMENT (5/10): I spent hours on this manga, but I couldn't really enjoy it. I was struggling too much to understand what was going on. Maybe some of it had to do with the translation, but I just think it also has to do with the layout of it. The story could have been far deeper, which is what I was expecting, but it didn't get there. Not only was the pacing frustrating, but the mood was just all over the place. The most enjoyable moments, to me, were the romantic moments between the two MCs. You could feel their love for each other in the way that they always embraced one another for comfort and they were there for each other. That's why I'm so sad I didn't enjoy it like I wanted to.

There were good an bad ideas, but I think it didn't reach it's full potential with any category.

This may seem like an unnecessarily harsh rating for this series, but I was very disappointed.

Story: 4
This seems like the best place to tackle my issues. The writing style is extremely haphazard. Even if I take translation errors into account, there just aren't enough dialog or thought boxes to make up for the lack of explanations. If a manga is comparable to a storyboard, this one would be sent back for rework. The gaps between frames are difficult to interpret, and I found myself helplessly scrolling through multiple chapters, grasping for concrete actions. The conclusion of the series follows in ... this same vein, wrapping up with repetitive conversations between characters and then vaguely answering the main question.

Art: 6
Certain frames showed noticeably disproportionate features on characters, but overall it's suitable to shoujo. It's also a little light-handed for my taste.

Character: 4
The author overstretched herself on this count. She introduces a house of around six people, each with a seemingly distinct personality, but Kohaku is really the only one who gets any character development. The other housemates only show up in flashbacks briefly (if at all) as they overlap with Kohaku's story.
Furthermore, the premise of the manga is resolved within the first few chapters, which makes the story description misleading. It's less about the unimpressive female lead and more about the very bizarre male lead.

Enjoyment: 5
I read it and I laughed a couple of times, but I was generally bored due to the lack of character development and disjointed storytelling style.

Overall: 4
Again, this rating may land on the harsh side, but I feel the need to counteract the overwhelmingly positive vibe coming from other reviews.