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this is a one shot is 42 pages and not a complete series but i hope people come to like this manga as it is very interesting, its story isn't as original as other distinguished mangas but its takes on from a good classic, Romeo and Juliet, it kinda set's itself apart with its funny scenes and small cast, it is a one shot with a refreshing story and be warned this is only my second review but my first didn't come out bad

Story: like i said before its not original but it uses this to its advantage, i cant really say much because ... it was a one shot but as someone who enjoyed it i can say it was very well done Low 8 but an 8

Art: the art is real nice, the lines are clear, there bolded nicely, the bubbles are where they are suppose to be, shading and thinning are good too i give it a high 9 nothing much i can say i've seen some poorly drawn mangas not gonna read those until they sharpen up

Characters: they are cool and memorable but they need that PAZAM to set them apart, some of the back ground characters have this PAZAM, thats why i do think they should introduce more into this small cast of only 2 but im not saying the MC's are bad, the two MC's are awesome, the idea of love is dead if their families dont see eye to eye isn't original but in this case they would really die if their families did find out if their relationship was found out thats why the 2 MC's personalities and characteristics go well together and thats why i gave it a good mid 8

-MC Inudzuka: Boss of the touwa family, his character is the male love interest, he has esteemed combat abilities as per being the leader of his family and is really honorable and commendable if this One shot does become a series i wish they dont change his character

-MC Persia: Boss of the Britain group, she has strength comparable to that of Inudzuka, she seems regal like any princess type of boss out there though she is awesome but if anything i would change her character a bit dont know how but she needs a bit

Enjoyment: other than the funny scenarios the couple ends up in to hide their relationship, i would like to see more action scenes or drama, it is a one shot of course but im just saying what i'd like to see, middle 7

Overall: This manga really is an interesting one, it has all the fundamentals to become a next hit manga, the drama, the romance, the action, the throwing your gf into the pool moments, its very good, the only reason im giving it an 8 is because it was too damn short, i wish there was more, i might exaggerate a bit but when there are already hype anime battle anime out there, there should be one sweet manga you can go to this manga would be the one, for its comedy, hilarious romance, and pr esteem art i gave it like i said before and mid 8 out of 10 thank you and i hope you give this a good read and give a shout out to Kanade Yousuke for his nice One Shot

Kiss My Ass interesting name right, i just began reading this manga 20 minutes and OMG what a delightful 20 minutes they were.

The first time i read the name i immediately thought "What a badass name lets give it a try" Honestly i was a expecting a delinquent shounen manga but sadly i was mistaken. What i did end up reading was a very funny, comedic, and educational(at some points) manga about ass yes ass... more importantly Hemorrhoids, who knows probably the author had a case of this one day and decided to write this up as a story board but

be it as ... weird as it maybe (a story with hemorrhoids revolving around it) it was very interesting, for 2 volumes the story board is average compared to other but above when above average when compared to those average if you get what i mean

the story was well thought out, well its kinda hard to explain for this you kinda gotta read it to see what i mean, some people might be disgusted by the idea of hemorrhoid manga but its quite knowledgeable and it doesn't show any but diagrams if it helps you read it better

characters were developed quite nicely, even though its short the characters do spend quite enough time together and develop a connection which is quite nice seeing what they share in COMMON

the art had nice lining and were clean not much of an artist but i have seen some poorly drawn manga out there and its not pretty when a leg is drawn out of proportion

enjoyment factor is up to you to decide if you read this, i enjoyed it very especially cuteness factor of the main heroine lol

i dont believe in ODD numbers so i will only rate in Even so i give it an 8 would be 7 but its odd, I gave an 8 because though the story was nice the characters weren't developed well enough, and the hemorrhoid factor in between chapters 9- 10 were they all had it was too conspicuous, but everything is fine i got to learn new things i never knew before and it was a nice story, though its short and story was short it was a nice read and the characters are funny i would probably red this manga again in the future