Korrvo said: Coffee > Tea dammit Nope -___- gotta be tea. "Tea? I hope you like it, it took me quite a while to find just the right ble-" "your fucking insane Korrvo" replies Jack tied to the chair Suddenly the whole tea set was casually flung out the open window, without missing a beat Korrvo turns to his Jack "You're right, its far too late for tea isn't it. So where were we my darling?" ".....actually I could go for a cup." Jack gulped. ;) |
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| LOL That scene in a nutshell And then I realize I've ran out of tea and I pull out the coffee. Right? Riiiiiiiight? |
☕ Truth be told, I'm quite proud of my house blend. To attain my flavor and fragrance, I use five different types of coffee beans. ☕ |
| can i be in the story as a trap cant think of anything else though |
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Korrvo said: I like how I'm some kinda romantic rapist. Korrvo said: Basically I'm French as fuck. LOOL So that really is how the world sees our men, huh ? Seems legit x). Anyway, this one chapter is so choke-full of fan-art material (approx. 70% of which including Korrvo, lol), I can't even begin to count. I'll definitely have to move my lazy bum and do something nice before we get to things get 'serious'. Keep up the good work, Kibura. |
| Proud founder of The Official Anti-Ging Freecss Fan Club Join now! Kellhus said: GuusWayne said: there is a limit to the suspension of disbelief And it's the fan that did it. Not the smoking porn reading rubik cube genius rape ape with a magic boat. |
| sorry for the delays Ive not quit its just trying to find the time to write up the next few chapters. |
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Kousoku11 said: Well-made story comes before anything else. I'm a patient person. |
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| I like it, update now! |
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beavis2323 said: can i be in the story as a trap cant think of anything else though |
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| I'm not banned anymore so you can update it again cause I know you were just waiting for me. you flirt |
☕ Truth be told, I'm quite proud of my house blend. To attain my flavor and fragrance, I use five different types of coffee beans. ☕ |
Korrvo said: s-stop...I'm not banned anymore so you can update it again cause I know you were just waiting for me. you flirt |
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Korrvo said: I'm not banned anymore so you can update it again cause I know you were just waiting for me. you flirt you know it ;) but yeah its been a little delayed but not forgotten. I don't stay awake through the night much lately and during the day I can't seem to write Yaoi right, needs the night. Also my flatmate is around and he can't know I write dirty Yaoi fiction. I got an image to maintain. I'll try to get a good few chapters in one go. |
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| So this is really happening |
text27 said: yes if you read the whole thing...robots will only kill the people you put in-front of them so yeah. RandomChampion said: u were that homie in the thong werent u |
Damaein said: Has been happening for some time. You're late to the party.So this is really happening Better late than never, I guess. |
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| Ok here it is, another part! The bandits had moved out of town the way they came in, the only way in or out of casual town. Their camp sat upon the hillside overlooking the town and the lands beyond. A small collection of caravans sat with gear bursting from the seams. "come on love, I want to show you my place" Korrvo dragged the tied Jack away from the camp fire and towards one of the caravans, leaving Lime_ kneeled next to one of the far vans alone. He managed one last glimpse as their eyes met, he knew what he had to do to keep him safe. Even if it hurt him doing it. Meanwhile back in town the crowds had begun to disperse, a lone character stood against the sunlight of the day. Kousoku looked around, he couldn't believe the people of this section would just let a group like that come in and take people away to do such nefarious things to. "Wait now" he tried to pipe up, trying to find the courage to stand up "W-we can't just let them get away" "sure we can" came a voice from the dispersing crowds who were already going about their normal business. "wait, just wait come on guys we need to stand up for our fellow users!" he had already lost the crowd and was left standing alone and defeated. He looked down at the dirt, "Damn it!" kicking up a cloud of dust. "We can help you out" came a voice from behind him. Back at the bandit camp Heredity had kicked off his knee high boots and was wiggling his toes close to the fire "oh sweet jesus so much better" UnoPuntoCinco has laying upside down looking at the sky chewing on a blade of grass "Somedays it's good to do nothing at all" he murmured to himself, he glanced over back at Heredity "You know we have some spare hours, why don't we?" Heredity shot him a glance of murderous intent "What did I tell you, that was a mistake" he crushed a pair of nuts in one hand to demonstrate his point harder. "Sorry I asked" Uno huffed and went back to looking at the sky. Behind the camp in the nearby forest clearing, a pair of eyes watched the camp. Back in the wooden caravan, the lights inside had dimmed. Jack was tied to a large chair in the back, the whole place was decorated in French art nouveau with well decorated tea set at the centre. Korrvo had kicked off most items of clothing and now wore even more revealing clothing. He picked up the tea set "Tea? I hope you like it, it took me quite a while to find just the right ble-" "your fucking insane Korrvo" replies Jack tied to the chair Suddenly the whole tea set was casually flung out the open window, without missing a beat Korrvo turns to his Jack "You're right, it's far too late for tea isn't it. So where were we my darling?" ".....actually I could go for a cup." Jack gulped. "no no not now" Korrvo had slowly sat down on Jacks lap and rested his head on his shoulder, looking up like a pet "tell me what you like about me" he cooed, twirling his finger on Jacks chest "Ha you!" Jack sniffed, suddenly the finger touching him began to dig into flesh and started clawing its way down his chest "You know..." Korrvo spoke through gritted teeth trying to keep a level voice "I can be just as much!" pulling his fingers through jacks flesh and causing cuts "An aggressive lover" His demeanour turned back again "As much as a gentle one" he went back to stroking the new wounds. "I don't need your consent but I welcome it" he lowered his head to the chest wound he had just caused, kissing it gently, his lips were ice cold like his hands, just what was he? the shirt was slowly coming off as Korrvo explored every inch of Jacks upper body with his lips and tongue. As Jack sat there tied up, the two of them alone. He knew what was coming and somewhere in his head, his brain was telling him the only thing he could do was try to enjoy it, imagine it was a woman's touch to get through this. He closed his eyes and tried to visualise a woman's touch, a woman's kiss but it was hard to focus, the image kept changing, there was a familiar voice in his head. "I can make everything better" it was limes voice, he could see him in place of Korrvo, the image clear he couldn't shake it "why you?" he spoke "I said I can make everything better" replied Korrvo again, looking up from untying jacks lower clothing. Jack has his eyes shut "lime_" he mumbled quietly, nearly defeated, holding onto the one hope he had left. Korrvo's face turned repulsed, he quickly got off of Jack's lap, growling he slapped Jack hard across the face "You bastard" he growled turning away from him "Still can't get that little shit out of your head even when you have me" He punched the wall, grinning like a psychopath "fine you want him, you want him I'll take him from you. All you will have is me" Korrvo quickly grabbed a large knife from the desk "right in front of you!" he yelled charging out of the room. Jack was regaining his senses "no stop!" he yelled struggling as hard as he could, rocking the chair he fell to the floor still trapped "No!" he yelled after Korrvo. |
SpooksApr 11, 2014 11:09 AM
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NarTaco said: That was.......interesting. I'm guessing Korrvo is ok with being portrayed like a sadistic bastard. you know how sometimes characters end up writing themselves, he's one of those. I have absolutely no control of him, I merely write and he does what he wants. Anyway hes...misunderstood and finds it hard to deal with his emotions in a stable way, he really does like Jack he just can't show those feelings normally, no matter how much he would want to. The more Jack resists the more he feels unwanted, not knowing how to deal with those feelings he attempts to destroy. But if you think HE is sadistic just wait... |
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| Rofl I can't stop laughing I'm like some kind of male yuno We need more interesting characters like this in anime imo |
☕ Truth be told, I'm quite proud of my house blend. To attain my flavor and fragrance, I use five different types of coffee beans. ☕ |
Korrvo said: Rofl I can't stop laughing I'm like some kind of male yuno We need more interesting characters like this in anime imo Ive always wanted them to make a genderbend mirai nikki series, it would be amazun. http://31.media.tumblr.com/a89405231a2c920d2fb883a3e7f3bafc/tumblr_mra8e0pM611sna2nso1_500.jpg |
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| Feel sorry for UnoPuntoCinco |
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| Had I not finished watching Oldboy just a few moments ago, I'd probably cringe a bit more at what Korrvo was doing to Jack. Nevertheless, it's always lovely to see a yandere in action. Although it did hurt my immersion when I realized that when Jack mumbled Lime_'s name out loud, it would have come out as "Lime Underscore". The drama is certainly intensifying. Not to mention the fact that I think I can see a H-scene coming. (Assuming that you're going to include them, that is. If not, then I just sense incoming implications of something happening). |
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| Korrvo why you so mean :[ poor Jack - everything was going so fine before you had to jump in: "There's nothing sweeter than the pure romance that blossoms between high school boys--except for confectioneries based on the flavor of their kisses." -- I don't feel this will turn out well for mine hero |
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UnoPuntoCinco said: Feel sorry for UnoPuntoCinco Y U so laid back Kousoku11 said: Had I not finished watching Oldboy just a few moments ago, I'd probably cringe a bit more at what Korrvo was doing to Jack. Nevertheless, it's always lovely to see a yandere in action. Although it did hurt my immersion when I realized that when Jack mumbled Lime_'s name out loud, it would have come out as "Lime Underscore". Remember i have the names saved so there's bound to be some discrepenses now and again. Everyone seems to think what Korrvo is doing is pretty extreme, I must write some dark stuff then because that scene is nothing compared to some of the ideas Ive had/may implement. |
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Lime_ said: Aww, don't blame him. All the poor guy wanted was some love.Korrvo why you so mean :[ poor Jack - everything was going so fine before you had to jump in: |
☕ Truth be told, I'm quite proud of my house blend. To attain my flavor and fragrance, I use five different types of coffee beans. ☕ |
Korrvo said: Lime_ said: Aww, don't blame him. All the poor guy wanted was some love.Korrvo why you so mean :[ poor Jack - everything was going so fine before you had to jump in: I would give Korrvo some love but we are just too similar, it would be uninteresting for the both of us and Kousoku has already been claimed by Heredity and UPC is still trying to get it on with Heredity since their last....incident that one time. JD is for Lupa onry. Can anyone love such a crazy guy as Korrvo? my answer is always yes, because its sexy as fucking hell to have a hot crazy guy in your story get it on with someone. Korrvo u so crazeh hawt. |
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Kibura_Iburasa said: I wouldn't say "extreme", but it's still rather painful. As of now, it would take a lot for me to describe something as "extreme" (like that one painful scene from Higurashi involving Shion, for example (speaking of which, y u no watch 2nd season?)), which is partly why I'm now curious to see what exactly is going to happen in the future chapters that you keep hinting at.Kousoku11 said: Everyone seems to think what Korrvo is doing is pretty extreme, I must write some dark stuff then because that scene is nothing compared to some of the ideas Ive had/may implement.Had I not finished watching Oldboy just a few moments ago, I'd probably cringe a bit more at what Korrvo was doing to Jack. |
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| What's with all the malfic lately? And why aren't I a creepy hobo in any of them? |
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Objurgo said: Because someone finally decided to post an ongoing series, which then spawned an AU yaoi story a few days later.What's with all the malfic lately? And why aren't I a creepy hobo in any of them? As for the second question... who knows? Perhaps you just haven't caught the interest of either of the authors. |
Kousoku11Apr 12, 2014 5:51 AM
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Objurgo said: Not hawt enoughWhat's with all the malfic lately? And why aren't I a creepy hobo in any of them? |
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NarTaco said: In the yaoi world everyone needs to be hawtUnoPuntoCinco said: Objurgo said: Not hawt enoughWhat's with all the malfic lately? And why aren't I a creepy hobo in any of them? Hobos aren't meant to be hot. |
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UnoPuntoCinco said: NarTaco said: In the yaoi world everyone needs to be hawtUnoPuntoCinco said: Objurgo said: Not hawt enoughWhat's with all the malfic lately? And why aren't I a creepy hobo in any of them? Hobos aren't meant to be hot. It is true. |
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NarTaco said: C'mon, suspend your disbelief a little.That's contradicting the meaning of a hobo, but if you insist. He could be one of those sane homeless people who still have a sense of hygiene. |
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| so am i in it or what |
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| Shit is about to go down, next chapter it seems. Korrvo said: "I don't need your consent but I welcome it" Signature worthy quote, here. Kousoku11 said: NarTaco said: C'mon, suspend your disbelief a little.That's contradicting the meaning of a hobo, but if you insist. He could be one of those sane homeless people who still have a sense of hygiene. Oh, the oxymoron. |
| Proud founder of The Official Anti-Ging Freecss Fan Club Join now! Kellhus said: GuusWayne said: there is a limit to the suspension of disbelief And it's the fan that did it. Not the smoking porn reading rubik cube genius rape ape with a magic boat. |
| so when will i be in it or what? |
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beavis2323 said: so when will i be in it or what? You will be in the last chapter, getting raped by 2 elephants, while being forced to lick a blobfish. Happy? |
SetsukoHara said: beavis2323 said: so when will i be in it or what? You will be in the last chapter, getting raped by 2 elephants, while being forced to lick a blobfish. Happy? is good enough will i be a trap? |
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| Too much guro. My journey ends here. |
NarTaco said: Kibura_Iburasa said: UnoPuntoCinco said: NarTaco said: In the yaoi world everyone needs to be hawtUnoPuntoCinco said: Objurgo said: Not hawt enoughWhat's with all the malfic lately? And why aren't I a creepy hobo in any of them? Hobos aren't meant to be hot. It is true. That's contradicting the meaning of a hobo, but if you insist. I'd be a dirty and misunderstood but actually a cool guy that everone comes to love once taken in by the protagonist |
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Sapewloth said: ReadKousoku11 said: NarTaco said: C'mon, suspend your disbelief a little.That's contradicting the meaning of a hobo, but if you insist. He could be one of those sane homeless people who still have a sense of hygiene. Oh, the oxymoron. It's possible. EDIT: But since the person would want to be the kind that isn't all too clean, it doesn't seem to matter... |
Kousoku11Apr 13, 2014 3:00 AM
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| Gonna try to get round to writing the next chapter once I stop been so hungover. BLEGH Ckan said: Too much guro. My journey ends here. You'll be back. |
SpooksApr 13, 2014 8:35 AM
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| So apparently im unbanned now, unless someone changes their mind again. The now long awaited next chapter is wip. (did you miss me?) |
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JD2411 said: My one criticism is that outside of me and Lupa all the users are nobodies on the forums Depends who you're asking. |
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JD2411 said: Lol nope?This is actually pretty funny My one criticism is that outside of me and Lupa all the users are nobodies on the forums Anyway welcome back Kibu-chan. Wondered where you went, actually: why were you banned? |
SapewlothApr 23, 2014 9:50 AM
| Proud founder of The Official Anti-Ging Freecss Fan Club Join now! Kellhus said: GuusWayne said: there is a limit to the suspension of disbelief And it's the fan that did it. Not the smoking porn reading rubik cube genius rape ape with a magic boat. |
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