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Sep 17, 2023 8:07 AM
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And thus ends yet another ill-fated WSJ series. It had an interesting premise and I enjoyed the unique setting of the first chapter, but sadly the plot construction and character work left a lot to be desired. However, I think the ending is still pretty neat and it makes me wonder what the longterm for this series could have been.

Still, this will go down as another below average manga in the 2-4/10 range and marks the second failure on the mangaka's part to break into WSJ. I wish him all the best for the future, but maybe he should try as part of a duo moving forward.
Steel Ball Run anime when?
Sep 17, 2023 8:20 AM
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It's was a good epilogue anyways.
A little message and it's good for me.
Sep 17, 2023 9:36 AM
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Well that sure was an epilogue. Ironic that mr. Strong Heart died of hear problems. Better luck next time for the mangaka
Sep 17, 2023 9:59 AM
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A decent ending for a series that has probably the worst chapter of jump in recent memory. This series started with a good first chapter and it was all downhill from there. Sad to see what it became but this epilogue was a nice cap. He wont let them get him down and hopefully he does retry.
Sep 17, 2023 11:20 AM
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ShiroiRyu said:
It's was a good epilogue anyways.
A little message and it's good for me.

Agreed. It was fine, maybe a 6/10 for me. Had promise, but just couldn’t make its mark and went into too much using powers. The message they were promoting was good though and fighting for family is a nice motive too. Wish the author best and can land something next time.
Sep 17, 2023 4:00 PM
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Now whaddya know
This chapter was actually... dope
Sep 17, 2023 6:06 PM
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I think this caught a lot more flak than it really deserved, but still can't deny that it was rough, and while it's been a while I do recall enjoying Bone Collection more than this. Back with that I thought he should stick more to comedy too.
Sep 18, 2023 5:08 AM
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Fantastic final chapter. Felt like the author giving himself some motivation, especially with the final pages. Much like the cobbler, he will be back stronger with his next work.
Sep 18, 2023 5:10 AM
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Fantastic final chapter. Felt like the author giving himself some motivation, especially with the final pages. Much like the cobbler, he will be back stronger with his next work.

Wait, I didn't realize he had another failed manga. 3rd time may be the charm. He needs to work on his storytelling and characters. A big fault was the villains who were kinda lame. Especially the guy who came back from war.
Sep 18, 2023 3:16 PM

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As others have said, a surprisingly decent chapter for a... not so decent manga.

Better luck next time!
Sep 18, 2023 9:06 PM

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What a surprisingly good ending. It made me a little emotional.
I hope this author can publish a manga with better success sometime.

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