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Shinji/Stay Night: A Zouken's Feel Route CYOA [F/SN + F/Z Spoilers + Plenty of Shinji Loving] (PLEASE GO TO FIRST POST FOR THREAD NAVIGATION) *UPDATED JAN 15*

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Nov 24, 2015 1:18 AM

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Ziiiiiiiiip

LOL.
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Illyasviel said:
Emiya Shirou: 0

Yeah you attacked him, destroyed his house and nearly kill him, and he still is neutral to you? Really? Well he still doesn't know about Sakura.

You're not very high on his priority list right now. He's busy trying to save the world and whatnot :P

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Will Gil come back btw?

Gil is love, GIl is life~
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Assaulting Trio member #3 was too far, I'm sorry Shinji-sama I may have to wish against your well being in the future.
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lequack said:
Comic_Sans said:

Will Gil come back btw?


He has to. We need shinji x gil yaoi.
YASSS
OneTrueEmiya said:
Illyasviel said:

Yeah you attacked him, destroyed his house and nearly kill him, and he still is neutral to you? Really? Well he still doesn't know about Sakura.

You're not very high on his priority list right now. He's busy trying to save the world and whatnot :P

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Will Gil come back btw?

Gil is love, GIl is life~
YAAAAAAAAAAAAASS
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@Comic_Sans oh no y arnt ppl dieing i need more ppl dieing rly gud plot avansement jus liek tokyo ghoul if erbudy dies amirite
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Day 7
Zouken's Feel
Near Side
Dis-Armed Servant





Ten years ago, a tragedy happened.

No, it was more than ten years ago for Emiya Shirou. For him, it is a distant memory. A distant, yet haunting memory.

It was where he was born, after all.

Without this tragedy, there would be no Emiya Shirou. Perhaps he would be someone else, in a school thinking about his latest crush or his life after high school. But he is Emiya Shirou. And he has a duty to save the world.

He sits on the bench, his body shivering from the morning chill. It would normally be laughable to him that he would be so vulnerable, but he has already taken that into account.

“The countdown’s started ticking, huh?” he asks rhetorically.

Saber materialises beside him, her eyes clouded with worry. “Praet-Shirou, what is going on?”

He smiles sadly in return and replies, “I was led astray by my emotions again. I shouldn’t have fought in that battle.”

“What are you talking about? We won the-”

“But at what cost?” Shirou shoots back gently, his Servant unable to find a reply.

He tilts his head to look at the grey sky and sighs, “I’m dying, Saber. And I’m not sure if I have enough time left to save you all.”

“Yeah, your body is weird, onii-chan.”

Shirou snaps to attention as the melodic voice reaches him. He sighs again as he notices the silver snow fairy that is walking towards them.

“Are you supposed to be out here alone, Illya?”

“How rude to ask a lady such a question, onii-chan,” Illya pouts as she squeezes herself between Shirou and Saber, her petit body nestling in their warmth. “I had to sneak past Sella and Liz to come here, you know. It wasn’t easy. Oooh, you’re so warm, Saber.”

“Naturally. I am the heart of Rome itself. I can withstand all types of cold weather,” Saber replies boastfully, eliciting a giggle from Illya.

Shirou looks at the two and feels his heart ache, as it did so long ago.

“I’m sorry for hurting Berserker so badly, Illya,” Shirou remarked.

Illya blinked in surprise. “Huh? I thought you would be angry at me for sending Berserker after you.”

“I can never be angry at you.” There is no hesitation in his voice. “You were the only one I had left in the end, after all.”

Illya almost stands up in shock. “Wha..? Shirou?”

A bitter chuckle, followed by a serene smile.

“Sorry, just memories from another time, another life.”

Illya frowns at the cryptic statement, but decides not to pursue it for now. She tugs Shirou’s sleeve and asks, “So, why are you dying?”

Shirou’s reply is too weird. He bursts out laughing, a pure sound that he has not released for far too long. “Ahaha…you’ve always been so direct, Illya.”

“Shirou is mean. Illya just wants to know what are those weird things in your body.”

Saber leans forward at this point, interested in her Master’s reply. “I also wish to know, Pr-Shirou."

Shirou nods and warms up his magic circuits. With a little push, he sends some energy through his right arm into his palm-

-and Kanshou is formed, one of the twin scimitars he favours. But it does not form with the customary green-blueish magical energy some may be used to seeing. Instead, the energy is red, and solid particles float to the ground before dissipating.

“Grain. This is why I am able to go beyond my limits.”

And as he dismisses the blade, a voice from behind him sounds out in surprise.

“Grain…?! Impossible. Who are you?”

Saber’s body stiffens, but Shirou places a hand on her shoulder, signalling her to calm down.

“I could ask you the same question, Lancer. Who are you?”

A dash of grey hair, a boyish face, a futuristic black battle-suit. Lancer materialises behind the trio.

“My apologies for not introducing myself, Master of Saber. I was certain until just now that you would not understand the time which I have come from, and hence I have no need to introduce myself.

“My name is Edem. Ado Edem.”


~~~




"…thank you, Shizuka-san. I’m here at Homurahara Academy, where two girls have been sexually assaulted by a person they described as ‘having long blue hair’. The authorities are now working hard to find the culprit and bring him to justice-“

You are in the living room, watching television while sipping on some of Zouken’s old whisky, when you come across the news channel. The broadcast leaves you absolutely dumbfounded.

Two girls?

You are very sure you only attacked one. Besides, you blackmailed her with naked pictures of her. You do not deserve to be in such a mess.

"-victims are by the names of Makidera Kaede and Mitsuzuri Ayako-“

WHAT.


”-current suspect is at large. Authorities have labeled one Matou Shinji to be the main suspect for raping the two girls.”



Whatwhatwhatwhatwhat. If this is being broadcasted nation-wide, your reputation would be ruined! How can you rule over Fuyuki now?

You resist the urge to pull out your beautiful hair. Why does fate treat you like this? Why would you be in trouble for taking a girl when Emiya probably has his own harem already? The world, you decide, really is unfair.

Oh well, you can’t do anything. If the authorities come, you can always call Kotomine and tell him to clean up the mess. For now, you should take putt those lovely photos you took yesterday…

…and the front door clicks open.

In walks your (new) best friend and your Holy Grail War companion.



“Oh hi Gil, where have you been?” you ask, remembering that he did not return last night.

He shrugs his left shoulder and replies, “I was busy cleaning up a mess some mongrel left.”

“Which mongrel?”

He hesitates for a moment, lingering in the doorway, before shutting the door gently and plopping himself on the sofa next to you. He opens a portal and brings out a glass of wine. He sips it casually as the whole mansion grows silent save for the broadcast on television. Then he sighs, “My arm.”




You are confused. His arm? But it’s his arm. How can that be a mongrel? He sees you are visibly confused, and downs the glass of wine in one gulp.



“My arm was disobeying me by not evading attacks, so I had it cut off. I replaced it with a prosthetic, but its uses are…limited.”

Oh. Oh. You understand now. So he got injured in battle and now he lost his “happy time hand”. No wonder he’s so angry.

He leans forward and grunts, his right arm slowly rising and his right hand slowly making a fist.

“…useless. But it is better than that which betrayed me.”



You cannot stand to see your best friend so unhappy though, so you decide to cheer him up.

“Hey Gil, let’s go have some fun today!” you propose, leaning forward as well, a grand idea forming in your mind.

“Hooh, what do you propose, Shinji?” he asks, his eyes showing slight interest.

“Let’s go play ‘Raid the Tohsaka Mansion’!” you exclaim, your voice tinged with excitement.



“Tohsaka huh? Yes, that will certainly be amusing,” Gilgamesh grins predatorily. “You know not of the irony in this act, Shinji, but if I agree to your proposal, I will certainly have a great time.”

You scratch your head. To be honest, you merely wanted to head over to have a taste of Tohsaka. You didn’t know there was some relationship between the Tohsaka household and your best friend. But oh well.

“Let’s go then. I’ll just grab my book,” you declare as your lift yourself off the sofa and walk towards the stairs leading to your room.

“Oh, one thing Shinji,” Gilgamesh calls out.

You turn around.

“There were some men outside who wanted to see you. I killed them.”

You blink.

“Ah, alright. I’ll ask Kotomine to clean it up.”


Gilgamesh seems to be very happy with your decision! You propose focusing on- (that is, spend most of your time doing before certain people come back?)

1. Raiding the house for valuables. Tohsaka loves her jewels, she must be rich.
2. Destroying the house. Now that you’ve destroyed Emiya’s house, it’s only fair to destroy hers too.
3. Rape Tohsaka. Well, there’s no law against it…right?


Also, the contrast between the two parallel storylines is deliberate. You aren't a hero, after all, so no need to concern yourself with saving the world~
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WISEUP!!



More information will come about Lancer soon.
Nov 24, 2015 6:01 AM

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I will be honest, I didn't expected that Lancer, that move has taken me by surprised, lol.

Btw, the contrast between the two chapter amused me very much, lol, so Illya is with Shirou and Gil has a new arm...

I choose option 3, I want some taste of Tohsaka's anus.
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Assuming Shinji will do Gil afterwards or vice versa

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>memories from another time, another life
>Ado Edem
Damn this is awesome.

Option 2.


tho, i kinda lean forward Tohsaka'a anus option too.....
Nov 24, 2015 6:23 AM
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Option 2.
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Option 2,
Don't want to engage a wounded Gilgamesh against this Lancer.
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Illyasviel said:
Option 2,
Don't want to engage a wounded Gilgamesh against this Lancer.


Rin is left all alone in her house, because Lancer sneaked out to stalk Shirou. The stars have aligned for Shinji, it seems :C
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Option 2

i need Gilgamesh Yaoi scene, not Tohsaka anus....
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OneTrueEmiya said:
Illyasviel said:
Option 2,
Don't want to engage a wounded Gilgamesh against this Lancer.


Rin is left all alone in her house, because Lancer sneaked out to stalk Shirou. The stars have aligned for Shinji, it seems :C



@author: admit that you're disappointed not to have your Shinji X Rin rape scene :x
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Option 2

i need Gilgamesh Yaoi scene, not Tohsaka anus....
Patience

We'll get it afterwards

Right, OTE?
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Nov 24, 2015 8:13 AM

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Option 3.
It's Shinji we're talking about. How can he not~?

Yaoi soon though right? B4 Gil loses any more limbs
Nov 24, 2015 10:29 AM

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Option 1; bitches love jewels
この世界には。。。秘密がある
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Option 1 .Come to me ,Rancaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Wohooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
Nov 24, 2015 1:20 PM

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Why not all 3?

but if you can only pick 1 then option 3. its more shinji like.

EDIT:spell check is retarded
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The peasant is bound by the king. The king is bound by the peasants and their kingdom. But the Viking is bound to nothing but themselves.


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Option 3
I need Tohsaka's defenseless anus
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2. Destroying the house. Now that you’ve destroyed Emiya’s house, it’s only fair to destroy hers too.

Day 7
Zouken's Feel
Near Side
Knightmare





You reach Tohsaka’s mansion. It is at the end of a row of western-style houses, an immense structure that stands tall against time. You have read about this residence before, in one of Zouken’s books. It was built centuries ago, around the time the first Fuyuki Holy Grail War started, by Tohsaka Nagato, who was said to be a student of the Kaleidoscope himself. It truly is a structure filled with history and regality.

All the more reason for you to destroy it.

“Gil, let’s destroy this place,” you say, pointing at the mansion.

“Hoh? How about the girl? I thought you were…fond of her?”



“Tohsaka? Oh, she’s nothing. All the beauties from the Clock Tower will come to me when I win this War. I’ll be a celebrity among magi!” you exclaim with fervour.

Gilgamesh shrugs his left shoulder. “I have no objections. Bringing the house down will be fun for me,” he says as he opens a golden portal next to you. A dazzling golden board drops next to you with a slight “clang”, before hovering off the ground by itself.



“Use this. I’m going to fly up there now,” he says. With a graceful leap, he jumps twenty metres into the air…and stays there, holding his left arm straight up.

You quickly climb on the board, and shakily hover near Gilgamesh.

*snap*



In a single instant, the Tohsaka mansion vanishes under a cloud of dust, numerous Noble Phantasms blasting anything below you and Gilgamesh into pieces. You watch in awe as your Servant demonstrates his immense power.

This, you decide, is the power of a King. And that is why you stand above even the likes of Emiya Shirou and Tohsaka Rin. With Tohsaka buried beneath the rubble, nothing stands between you and the Grai-

“What have you done?”

A calm voice.

Followed by an inhuman pressure that sends you flying off the board. As you fall to your death, you hear the voice speak emotionlessly.



“Knight Arm: S-”

You scream as the ground grows closer and close and-



And with that final scream, Matou Shinji dies.





Would you like to take advice from Kariya's Pit?
1.Yes
2.No
Nov 24, 2015 2:07 PM

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FOR FUCK'S SAKE PEOPLE I TOLD YOU TO VOTE FOR OPTION 3

Yes Kariya
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Comic_Sans said:
FOR FUCK'S SAKE PEOPLE I TOLD YOU TO VOTE FOR OPTION 3

Yes Kariya
The peasant is bound by the king. The king is bound by the peasants and their kingdom. But the Viking is bound to nothing but themselves.


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Kariya: Hello! Is everyone doing fine? Except Shinji-kun, of course.

Kariya: Welcome back to the paradise for all weak Masters, the Kariya Pit!



Kariya: ...

Kariya: ...

Kariya: ...

Kariya: ...

Kariya: I know, I know. This place is dreary. But I’m the only one doing this, and you keep dying anyway, so you have to bear with m-







Taiga: Welcome to the ever-sunny Taiga Dojo! I’m Fujimura Taiga, the instructor of this dojo for Masters who like dying painfully!



: Now then, since we’re taking a break before starring in the Heaven’s Feel movies, we’re here to help you!

: That’s right! This is your once-in-a-lifetime chance to experience how it is to be a main character!

: Gaooo, poor Shinji-chan, only having a worm pit as a help corner. You must feel even more jealous of Shirou-chan now.

: But Taiga, Shinji deserves it. He raped an innocent girl, you know.

: Uguu, that’s true.



: Alright, since we’re here, we’ll help you this once. Senior student?

: Haaai! Goldie-kun was too loud with his attack, so Lancer noticed you. You have to be sneaky, like a worm. Go back to the previous choice and pick another option!

: Maybe you’ll die again, but you’re Shinji, so no one cares~

: Gah, so cold! But she’s right, Shin-chan, not even the minor characters know who you are~

: Well then, that's it for this time!

: Say hi to onii-chan for me~


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option 3


Prepare for defenseless anus...
The peasant is bound by the king. The king is bound by the peasants and their kingdom. But the Viking is bound to nothing but themselves.


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Guys, we had to pick the option 3, is the true good end. I still pick option 3, btw.
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Once again

Option 3
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NO YOU WON'T FORCE ME TO TAKE OPTION 3.
Option 1!
Taiga told us to be sneaky, that won't be exactly the case if Shinji rape Tohsaka.
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Option 3

Day 7
Zouken's Feel
Near Side
Boy Meets Girl II: Heaven’s Hole





You reach Tohsaka’s mansion. It is at the end of a row of western-style houses, an immense structure that stands tall against time. You have read about this residence before, in one of Zouken’s books. It was built centuries ago, around the time the first Fuyuki Holy Grail War started, by Tohsaka Nagato, who was said to be a student of the Kaleidoscope himself. It truly is a structure filled with history and regality.

All the more reason to abuse her within it.

“Are you sure you don’t want a turn? Not every girl is like Tohsaka, you know,” you ask your best friend generously.

He shrugs his left shoulder, “I have no interest in low-quality goods. She isn’t worthy of my seed. It seems she is alone for now. Maybe her Servant is out on a scouting mission?”

Well, that’s just absolutely perfect.



“Let’s get this show on the road, Gil,” you laugh as you push open the gates and enter the residence.



Gilgamesh trails behind you. His strides match yours, but his feels…cautious. But what is there to worry about?

You kick down the front door and stroll into the mansion as if it is yours.



As you walk in, you are hit by what feels like a wall of magical energy.

“Hoh? What’s this?” Gilgamesh says, his body not impeded in the least unlike yours as he walks in front of you. “Someone is gathering magical energy from the leyline.”

You suddenly recall that the Tohsaka mansion is built on a leyline, meaning its residents can, at times of emergency, retrieve great amounts of magical energy. But even so, you are confident as you steel your resolve and continue into the house. Your Servant is Gilgamesh, King of Heroes. Nothing in the modern world can stop him.

“Come, Shinji,” Gilgamesh beckons you over to him. “The energy is coming from the basement.”

“The basement?” you ask. You didn’t know that Tohsaka had a basement like yours.

“Ah yes. That was where Tokiomi summoned me,” Gilgamesh states, smiling wistfully. “It was a night of fate indeed, for the world to be under my rule once again.”




Tokiomi? Night of fate? You don’t understand what he is talking about, but you nod anyway. It’s respectful to agree with your best friend, after all.

As you follow Gilgamesh around the wooden staircase and down a corridor to the basement steps, you breathing becomes laboured. The air around you is saturated with prana. But you see Gilgamesh unaffected by it at all, and you have no choice but to grit your teeth and soldier on.

As you walk into the dark basement, you squint your eyes, trying to make out objects stored in it. Papers strewn around, a megaphone-like device, a few tables and several trinkets.

And standing in the middle of the mess is the heiress, Tohsaka Rin.





“Matou Shinji. Did you really think it would be that easy? I knew you were coming,” Tohsaka says in a flat voice, tilting her head with an air of indifference.

You give her your best grin in response.



“I thought it was be the fake priest at first, but you were too noisy,” she continues, her eyes focused not on you, but the Servant beside you. “And you brought your Servant with you too. Are you Gilgamesh?”

“Yes, I am. What of it, girl?”

“I heard you just now. You know my father’s name. Why?”

“Why, I was summoned here, in this very basement, girl,” Gilgamesh states plainly, his fingertips tracing the edge or a wooden table near him.

Tohsaka nods to herself and says, “I see. I suppose you betrayed him then.”

“Hah! He swore his loyalty to me and I did nothing of the sort to him. I was never on his side,” he retorts, his voice full of mirth.

You do not understand what they’re talking about. But you don’t need to. There’s only one thing you came for, after all.

“Come, Tohsaka. If you don’t put up a fight, I might consider treating you well,” you propose as you step forward.



A firm hand grips your shoulder at once. “Stop, Shinji,” Gilgamesh says. “Look at the floor.”

And you see something remarkable.





The ground beneath you starts to glow red with prana.

“A…summoning circle?” you mutter as you back away. “But why is it so large?”

“It’s not a summoning circle, Shinji. She’s modified it to explode the instant she releases her magical energy,” Gilgamesh explains.

He steps forward, and stares straight at Tohsaka.



“You’ve got guts, girl. Those who threaten me end up in pieces.”



Tohsaka narrows her eyes, her voice calm as ever as she replies, “Not this time, Gilgamesh. If you attack me, I will vaporise this entire house. You may survive it, but your Master? He’ll be as dead as Assassin.”

“Hoh? You know about that too?” Gilgamesh raises his eyebrows, clearly intrigued. “You really are observant, girl.”

“Naturally. I am the Second Owner of Fuyuki. I have to know all about this War.” she says, her eyes drilling into Gilgamesh’s. “Oh, and-



"Beschütze mich, Getreide aus der Zukunft Held."

The whole mansion creaks under the pressure of magical energy as a bounded field is raised.

“Now you can’t kill me immediately with your portals. You can only control portals near your body.”

“Really? Gilgamesh asks softly as he takes a step forward.

More than twenty Noble Phantasms appear behind him.



“Are you saying that you, a mere mongrel, can survive a King’s attack?”

“You know it yourself, King of Heroes. This bounded field will slow you just enough for me to kill your Master,” she shoots back, as defiant as ever.



“Tch,” Gilgamesh makes an annoyed sound. Slowly, he dismisses his Noble Phantasms one by one as he takes a step back, standing next to you. You feel apologetic to him for being in his way, but you also few angry towards Tohsaka for not submitting to you like that other girl.

Time for your trump card.

“Tohsaka, think about it this way. Even if you kill me, you won’t be able to stop Gilgamesh from killing your precious Shirou,” you say. You hide the trembling in your legs by walking over to a nearby table.

Tohsaka sighs. “I knew it was going to come to this. I won’t be a burden for Emiya-kun, not when he’s putting his life on the line for us.”

She raises her arm, and you leap back, preparing to open your Formalcraft book.

“Don’t bother, Matou. Let’s make a deal. If your Servant lets me go, I’ll use up my Command Seals and exit this war. But you must sign a geas to never interfere with whatever Emiya-kun is planning.”



“A bold proposition, girl,” Gilgamesh says. He turns to look at you. “Shinji, it’s your life, so it's your choice. I will accept whatever decision you make.”

You are unsure of how to answer. On one hand, if you accept, you could potentially catch Tohsaka with her guard down and take her down - and if you need to, kill her. On the other hand, declining immediately could be hazardous to your health. She could just decide to kill herself all of a sudden, taking you along with her. But she seems to have planned all this, so it could be a trap. But it can’t be, since you are Matou Shinji and no one can out gambit you...

“Well?” Rin asks. “What is your answer, Matou?”



You-

1. Accept for now but the moment she lets down her guard, render her helpless/kill her. It’s about time you took her down a few pegs.
2. Decline immediately. Tohsaka is dangerous, it might be a trap. You can’t let your guard down.



Quick note: The reason why there isn't a choice to comply with Tohsaka without defiance is that if you sign the geas, you won't (well, Shinji thinks he won't) be able to stop Emiya from winning the Grail.
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uhh....option 2
The peasant is bound by the king. The king is bound by the peasants and their kingdom. But the Viking is bound to nothing but themselves.


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Option 1.
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Option 1.
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Option 2.

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Option 1, because it might be a bad ending. Please don't kill of Rin.
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No sex for Shinji :(

2 I guess
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Option 1. I want to see what happens if Shinji tries that.
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'Ello guys! Sorry for the delay, I've been a tad busy, but it'll be out in just a while! As compensation though, have a little look into Emiya-kun~

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Don't worry, we are patient people ^^
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Once upon a time, there was a boy who wanted to be a hero.

He trained his body, used what little magecraft he knew and helped whoever he came across. But he was weak. In a world of magecraft and supernatural elements, he was restricted to helping others in small matters. But one night, everything changed.

A lance. A pair of falchions. A red jewel. Blood, so much blood. The crimson lance approaches him, only to be deflected by a strong blow from an invisible sword. A blonde swordswoman from an ancient legend. His journey begins.

At first, it appears to go well. Working with the girl and her archer to fend off the black giant, confronting the chain-wielding Servant, fighting in the temple against the woman with a purple cloak. He catches the ire of the archer, but his skills improve at an inhuman pace. The girl he works with is kind, and teaches him more about magecraft. And the silver fairy he meets in the park brings joy into his desolate lifestyle. He learns about his lineage, and a sister he never had enters his life. Perhaps, just perhaps, he can become the hero he always wanted to be.

But it is not to be. The golden Servant makes his move early. He approaches the swordswoman with overwhelming force. She is taken from the boy just like that, in exchange for the others’ lives, and he feels an unbearable pain in his chest. He grows to understand that he cannot be the hero he wants to become. As if to make matters worse, the archer defects, deciding to side with the caster and the teacher. And before he knows it, the golden Servant appears again. This time, the sister is his target, but the black giant interferes, and the siblings barely avoid death once again.

Even as they escape, they realise how dire their situation is. Together with the girl, they are three humans in a war meant for monsters.

That night, the boy sits in the dimly-lit park with his sister. They sit unmoving in the darkness, knowing that even if they hide in their houses, they would be killed without any issue. Even so, the boy decides to fight.

And his sister, seeing that there is no way to convince him otherwise, vows to support whatever he does.

Strength returns to his body. He faces a choice that could lead to his ruin.



Is it even a choice? He already knew from their first meeting in the park that he will do whatever he can to protect her. He does not discard his ideal to save people, but he places her safety above everything else. If it comes down to it, he will destroy the entire world to save her. And so he cannot let her die, or let her watch him die. They must survive.

The boy takes the first step. He works with the haughty girl to figure out the archer’s identity. They confirm who he is by confronting him, and the sister speaks up, defending her brother from his future self. His future self, no matter how jaded, is unable to harm a single hair on her head, and gives in. He breaks his contract with the caster, and lays waste to her base in one fell swoop. Then, they confront the golden Servant and the tainted knight of victory. The archer works with his master to bring down what was once his first love, proving that skill can overcome sheer power.

The boy, having received a gift from the girl, brings down the king in a fight within a fake world. His sister faces the priest, and ends that remnant of the past with a silver sword. The archer reminds the boy of what he must not do, and sacrifices himself to take down the corrupted grail.

It is a miracle that they have survived, but as if mocking their measly war, a ritual is completed ahead of schedule. The world dies, and the crystal spider awakens. Mankind begins to die, but some manage to survive the first wave of death. The boy is one of the lucky ones, but his sister isn’t.

She makes him promise, that he will survive no matter what. It is a final request from an older sister to a younger brother. It is a promise he cannot break, even if he has to discard billions of lives. So he does, adapting to the future’s harsh conditions while watching everyone around him dies. He cannot take it anymore. He cannot do anything, but he knows someone who can. So he approaches the girl from the past, the only other surviving member of the war. She agrees, knowing that saving one person from a desolate future is better than none.

And so the hero, who wanted to save everyone, is saved by everyone.

He realises he has reached the other side of his journey when he wakes up on wooden floorboards. He vaguely recognises the place; it was his home before his fate was changed forever. His body feels experienced, and the alien substance of the future is in him. Even so, as he touches his face, he realises it is not the calloused face of a veteran, but the soft cheeks of a child. He walks over to the side of the manor, where a silver moon hangs in the night sky. Two figures sit side by side. One is a man who is about to die. Another is a boy who has taken on his dying wish. There is no hesitation as he kills his other self, but as he notices the wide eyes of the supposedly dead man, he breaks down into tears.

The man says nothing, does nothing. He does not know who this other child is, but he can see his haunted eyes. He knows there is a reason for his vile act, and that reason must be so great that he has to kill an innocent child. He knows all too well.

So, with his dying breath, he commands him.

“Succeed.”





Day 7
Zouken's Feel
Near Side

Brave Shine


There is no other way. You have to agree with her, or you’ll be blown to pieces. And if that happens, you’ll die without winning the war, without being king, and most importantly, without having a harem.

You have to agree for now, and then wait until she drops her guard...

“Fine, Tohsaka,” you growl as your gnash your teeth in frustration. “I’ll agree to your terms.”



“Oh? Looks like you have a brain after all,” Tohsaka says as she beams in fake delight. “Here, catch.”

She throws the geas scroll across the room, and it lands near your feet. And while she does so, she is still on guard, unwilling to give even a single inch to you.



But you’re Matou Shinji, and you’re no ordinary fool. You reach down with your right hand, bending your back slightly, and -








Ziiiiiiip


unleash your secret move.

“…I am the worm of my pit.”

Two screams. One is that of righteous feminine outrage. Another is a “Now, Gil!”, issued with desperation and madness in a single gamble for survival.

Your Servant acts immediately. Twenty golden portals appear.



Though he cannot summon his portals too far away, the blades that shoot out are still capable of reaching her in a second. The first sword that is shot out is a violet broadsword. For a moment, it hangs in the air, as if blocked by something, but there is a sound resembling glass breaking, and it proceeds to blast straight towards Tohsaka-

-and the roof of the basement collapses as a being exuding pure murder drops into the room, right in front of your Servant’s attack. The weapons sent flying towards him are batted away like flies, and for a fraction of a second, everyone is speechless.

Then your Servant speaks up, his voice extremely soft.



“Shinji. We leave. Now.”

Before you can register what is happening, a golden portal appears in front of you, and you are pushed into it.

As you are swallowed by the darkness within it, you can briefly hear a few voices.

“-ight Arm-”
“-et again, mongrels-”
Anfang-


And then, pure silence.

When you wake up, it’s nighttime and you’re back at the Matou Manor, and Gilgamesh is nowhere to be seen. You-
1. Wait patiently in the house, he’ll be back soon.
2. Go outside to find him.


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OneTrueEmiyaNov 25, 2015 4:37 PM
Nov 25, 2015 5:28 PM

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This is amazing OP

All props of the world to you

Option 2 ofc, Shinji needs to find his boytoy
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Option 1, like the coward you are.
Nov 25, 2015 7:26 PM

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“…I am the worm of my pit.”
BAHAHAHA. +1

I choose Option 2.
Nov 25, 2015 8:15 PM

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Lol. I guess shinji is suprisingly well endowed since rin didnt laugh at his genius move.

Option 1
The peasant is bound by the king. The king is bound by the peasants and their kingdom. But the Viking is bound to nothing but themselves.


Nov 25, 2015 8:30 PM

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Updated OP to include directory, since it can be hell to navigate this thread. Off to sleep now~
Nov 25, 2015 10:11 PM

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This is the greatest thing I have ever read.

Option 1.

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Option 1.
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Need to increase Gilgamesh point.

option 2
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