[Very little spoilers about only one of the chapters, but it's not a big deal]
!!!!!!!!!!This is a review of the FIRST VOLUME ONLY. I don't know if this gets better later or not!!!!!!!!!
This was basically fanfiction written by a man who's never written fanfic before and for which i had to PAY TO READ
Some characters were kinda.... ooc??? not entirely, but their characteristics were either watered down or way too exaggerated. You could tell hori didn't write this.
Not to mention that you have the opportunity to write whatever you want with the characters and yet you dedicate A LOT OF PAGES to mineta and kaminari
hunting down girls. really???? I'd much much much MUCH rather read midoriya fanboying on that hero exposition he went to. or iida and tokoyami having fun in the park. or like, ANY other character doing anything. mineta was extra annoying in this, way more than he ever was in the original works (which is already saying a lot!!!)
So... there were some moments that I liked, but I feel like the writer needs to practice a lot more before this can actually become good.