Jul 5, 2024
1.2/10
Now, this story is truly one of a kind (even though there’s an eerily similar story to this) due to how it makes me feel. Throughout my entire time reading the chapters, I couldn’t help but grimace at how f*cking atrocious every single character and plot development is. I am in sheer shock, and I feel obligated to congratulate the author since I didn’t think this was possible.
Where to start… the characters are certainly something. To get it out of the way, this male lead has got to be in contention for one of the worst and most insufferable deadbeat of a mc to
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exist; I’ve read a sh*t ton of stories, from emotionally inept romcoms to some of the most pathetic isekais, and this mc is very close to taking the cake.
When the mc isn’t reflecting on his past “coolness,” he just whimpers at the sheer look of a female and manages to create some of the most cringey, pathetic, I’m running out of words to describe this, moments possible. Oh, he also fantasizes about the opposite sex a bit too much, which surely goes perfectly well for character depth and conveyance. (I know he has trauma, but holy sh*t, I don’t care. This guy should not be excused, and he makes every traumatized mcs look bad.)
The fmcs are a bit of a trainwreck since they don’t make sense at all. I know it’ll be explained in some superficial and plot-tied way where the mc was some sort of hero and whatnot, but it’s hard to believe the writing and correlation into the story would be logical with how unsayable the mc is.
Plot sucks. Most of the plot points are just cliche and pathetic. Like the mc. God, I hate him.
I have never read such a story where I just want to put a 12 gauge barrel down my … ahem. Author, from the sincerest part of my heart, please retire.
Reading Rankings (Portnoy inspired + A Huang-Teizan Original)
10 - God’s penmanship
9 - Must-read. Drop everything else.
8 - Instant bookmark
7 - Entertaining
6 - Good to pass time
5 - Why are you reading this?
4 - Bad.
3 - Typical garbage.
2 - My head hurts.
1 - Retirement is a thought.
0 - “Did they even give you a story?!”
Reviewer’s Rating: 1
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