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Apr 6, 2024
8.0/10
This manga is low key genius: The combination of the always stale dungeon master trope combined with a half-committed main character makes the story’s directive so much more enjoyable and suspenseful than the traditional take on the “hand-held dungeon master who gets supported by the dragon waifu fmc” in every chapter.
Surprisingly, this manga’s plot is great — of course, there are some ridiculously “poorly-written” developments here and there, but it tends to add to the manga’s atmosphere and enjoyment by not taking itself too seriously at times; in other words, it adds a bit of necessary comedy to the story. However, don’t be fooled,
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the plot is not one-dimensional, as the author laid out potential plot points beyond the first arc/opening chapters.
The plot of this manga was treated with eons of more care and seriousness than the actual characters — barring the mc, most of the characters have been plot-driven — one goal/purpose — and others are only there to add some comedy/useless drama or chemistry within the mc’s interactions. Though it’s not bad or annoying to read, it is a step down in writing.
Do not be fooled by your usual expectations of a trashy dungeon master manga with a dragon waifu, as this one takes itself a bit more seriously, and it has been written with a small care for the future, making this manga leagues ahead of its peers.
You guys know this is just my opinion, right?
Reading Rankings (Portnoy inspired + A Huang-Teizan Original)
10 - God’s penmanship
9 - Must-read. Drop everything else.
8 - Instant bookmark
7 - Entertaining
6 - Good to pass time
5 - Why are you reading this?
4 - Bad.
3 - Typical garbage.
2 - My head hurts.
1 - Retirement is a thought.
0 - “Did they even give you a story?!”
Reviewer’s Rating: 8
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Mar 24, 2024
7.2/10
At this manga’s core, it is nothing but pure wish-fulfillment with some of the most sporadic and random plot lines/points ever, but I can’t say that it isn’t remotely enjoyable, since it’s just a lot of untraditional cuteness between the mc and fmc dynamic.
The mc and fmc don’t have the greatest depth — no matter how hard the author tries with the mc — nor do they have the most noble reasons in pursuing/liking each other, but their developments, albeit forced, are wholesome.
As for the plot, the sequence of chapters/events in the chapters are unpredictable and not in a good way. The author tends
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to throw curveballs to add characters or development into the story, making it quite nauseating/overwhelming to read; yet, the story still retains a bit of intrigue from its more “deep” plot points in the mc.
Not a very complex or well-written slice of life romance manga, but it services as something untraditional in the wish fulfillment industry, and that’s good enough for me.
You guys know this is just my opinion, right?
Reading Rankings (Portnoy inspired + A Huang-Teizan Original)
10 - God’s penmanship
9 - Must-read. Drop everything else.
8 - Instant bookmark
7 - Entertaining
6 - Good to pass time
5 - Why are you reading this?
4 - Bad.
3 - Typical garbage.
2 - My head hurts.
1 - Retirement is a thought.
0 - “Did they even give you a story?!”
Reviewer’s Rating: 7
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Mar 24, 2024
5.8/10
Woah. This manga really tried to simulate a fever dream as its reading experience — Cliche tropes, big boob fetish, wack humor, and heaps of character/plot flaws.
The plot of this manga is not good: Not only does the story follow the same basis of “kicked out of the party” trope, but it tries implementing flashbacks to add more character depth, but it fails miserably due to how boring/uninspired each character archetype is — Weak-minded/bashful mc, heroines that fall in love with the mc for no reason, etc. Needless to say, everything was forced onto the story, and it wasn’t interesting.
I could try writing more
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and fluff up this review, but it really wasn’t impressionable due to how basic the storyline seemed to be, and the only personality and memorability this manga has is its characters with excessively big boobs.
You guys know this is just my opinion, right?
Reading Rankings (Portnoy inspired + A Huang-Teizan Original)
10 - God’s penmanship
9 - Must-read. Drop everything else.
8 - Instant bookmark
7 - Entertaining
6 - Good to pass time
5 - Why are you reading this?
4 - Bad.
3 - Typical garbage.
2 - My head hurts.
1 - Retirement is a thought.
0 - “Did they even give you a story?!”
Reviewer’s Rating: 5
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Mar 17, 2024
6.7/10
Eh, idk how to feel about this manga, since it’s your typical “fmc constantly diminishes the loser mc, and he slowly fixes himself, but the fmc actually loves the mc for some apparent reason” that makes your emotions twisted and confused within each passing chapter.
For one thing, the plot of this manga is “deep,” as there are a lot of potential plot points to unveil as the story progresses — especially regarding the fmc — but it all seems exaggerated for the sake of plot and borderline unrealistic — as if the concept wasn’t already. Though, most of the content/progressions of the story is about
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the same with the manga’s trope, which makes the story stagnant and resemble filler for the sake of filler.
The characters aren’t great due to how dramatic their personalities were made to be, and their chemistry is borderline wholesome (?) if you were to put aside all of the toxic traits and attributes within their developments. The characters aren’t bad, but they seem a bit extreme for what the plot should/could have portrayed.
Definitely not my cup of tea, but there’s not much to hate on this manga except for it being one of those conflicting psychological mangas where you can’t tell if you love or hate each lasting minute of it.
You guys know this is just my opinion, right?
Reading Rankings (Portnoy inspired + A Huang-Teizan Original)
10 - God’s penmanship
9 - Must-read. Drop everything else.
8 - Instant bookmark
7 - Entertaining
6 - Good to pass time
5 - Why are you reading this?
4 - Bad.
3 - Typical garbage.
2 - My head hurts.
1 - Retirement is a thought.
0 - “Did they even give you a story?!”
Reviewer’s Rating: 6
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Mar 17, 2024
7.1/10
Welp, we all know why we are here and reading this piece of.. work… PLOT. Man, this manga sure does have some great plot, and it makes this experience completely worth all of the flaws within the characters and how silly some of these developments have been.
The plot of this manga is about what you’d expect from a manga involving a breast correction skill — a lot of the developments have been forced here and there to have the mc be able to sue his ability — but the plot is surprisingly sound in its goal/aim, as the mc doesn’t have a busted ability
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that causes him to be op; instead, it’s just breast correction.
As for the other characters, they all act silly in their own way, falling right for the mc due to his ability for no other reason. Not much to say about them besides for abiding by their role as haremee/erotica candidates
Definitely not the best manga out there — it’s a silly and fun read, so take that how you will. C’mon. Breast correction.
You guys know this is just my opinion, right?
Reading Rankings (Portnoy inspired + A Huang-Teizan Original)
10 - God’s penmanship
9 - Must-read. Drop everything else.
8 - Instant bookmark
7 - Entertaining
6 - Good to pass time
5 - Why are you reading this?
4 - Bad.
3 - Typical garbage.
2 - My head hurts.
1 - Retirement is a thought.
0 - “Did they even give you a story?!”
Reviewer’s Rating: 7
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Mar 17, 2024
6.6/10
Delinquent school mangas have been such a seemingly rarely executed trope that you can’t help but feel a little bit giddy whenever they appear, but it is a short-lasting feeling, since they are often disappointing in numerous aspects and ways due to the mechanisms of cliche plot points and forced developments, which are especially apparent in romance-centered ones, no less than a harem.
It’s apparent in the first chapter that this manga doesn’t and will never have the best plot with the most natural developments, and to add to that, the development of the romance/cute moments between the mc and fmc have been borderline some
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of the worst pieces of development in a romcom with how unnecessary and forced they are — especially the fanservice.
Barring realism, since this has occasional flashes of sense, the characters of the manga are simply cliche and embarrassing to read but in a good way (?). The dynamic of the main cast is pretty entertaining if you were to put aside all of the plot holes and nuances that comes with writing a delinquent or romance-based story. As for the “villains” and side characters, who will surely not fall in love with the mc and are all not female, they follow the same script we’ve seen a dozen times regarding the harem genre.
A moderately decent read that has flashes of giddiness and smiles within the chapters, but the sheer amount of stupidity also cancels out some of the fun. If plot is a determining factor for your enjoyment, I’d dodge this bullet, but fanservice and cute interactions enjoyers will surely enjoy this. As for me, I’m in the middle.
You guys know this is just my opinion, right?
Reading Rankings (Portnoy inspired + A Huang-Teizan Original)
10 - God’s penmanship
9 - Must-read. Drop everything else.
8 - Instant bookmark
7 - Entertaining
6 - Good to pass time
5 - Why are you reading this?
4 - Bad.
3 - Typical garbage.
2 - My head hurts.
1 - Retirement is a thought.
0 - “Did they even give you a story?!”
Reviewer’s Rating: 6
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Mar 12, 2024
3.2/10
I can’t believe my eyes; seriously, this kind of story is what was common back in 2018 with the most trashy plot, characters, and power-balancing multiplied by two in dumbness. Needless to say, this story was nothing but a mess.
The plot of this manga is some work of art with how cliche it is, and how there is absolutely zero struggle or challenge for the mc in sight. I’m not kidding, literally everything is spoon fed to the mc, and it isn’t remotely enjoyable due to how overpowered and nonchalant he is during the entire process; it also doesn’t help he’s like “oh, I’m
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so worthless…”
Besides for the mc, every other character is equally as bad and dumb, since they are only their for the amusement of being belittled and upholding the mc to an even greater position; with that, women appear out of nowhere, and an infant can guess where those relationships are going.
2018 was a fun year, but mangas back then do not age well at all, and this is somehow even worse than its counterparts.
You guys know this is just my opinion, right?
Reading Rankings (Portnoy inspired + A Huang-Teizan Original)
10 - God’s penmanship
9 - Must-read. Drop everything else.
8 - Instant bookmark
7 - Entertaining
6 - Good to pass time
5 - Why are you reading this?
4 - Bad.
3 - Typical garbage.
2 - My head hurts.
1 - Retirement is a thought.
0 - “Did they even give you a story?!”
Reviewer’s Rating: 3
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Mar 12, 2024
7.7/10
Misunderstanding mangas are either really funny or really annoying, and this falls under the “really funny” category despite the same depreciating jokes on the mc.
The plot of this manga isn’t anything new with the same-old scenarios and thoughts of characters for some executed humor, but I can’t lie, this is incredibly enjoyable.
The character dynamic of the pervertedness of the mc and the lax heroines makes this manages a bit different from all of its counterparts, and it’s strangely memorable.
Not much to say about this, since it follows the classic “misunderstanding” plotline and characters, but it does not become remotely annoying due to its rather
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unethical humor.
You guys know this is just my opinion, right?
Reading Rankings (Portnoy inspired + A Huang-Teizan Original)
10 - God’s penmanship
9 - Must-read. Drop everything else.
8 - Instant bookmark
7 - Entertaining
6 - Good to pass time
5 - Why are you reading this?
4 - Bad.
3 - Typical garbage.
2 - My head hurts.
1 - Retirement is a thought.
0 - “Did they even give you a story?!”
Reviewer’s Rating: 7
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Mar 1, 2024
4.1/10
What in the world… isn’t this just the premise of SAO but genuinely horribly written? Absolutely, and I love/hate every second of it.
I’m going to be blunt: this manga is one jumbled mess regarding the pacing and plot — not only is the first chapter just a rushed clusterf*ck of an introduction, but the plot gets so derailed by chapter 2 and 4 — events happen for the sake of it without much explanations, and everything screams forced. Added to that, there’s some seriously unnecessary fanservice with the cliches and plot holes, making it hard to find any serious enjoyment from the chapters.
Characters
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are about as mediocre and generic as it gets — especially the mc. He’s your typical protagonist that is too much of a good boy for his own good. Along with that, the side characters are just.. interesting. I don’t know what you should expect from a manga that inserts a little sister into the plot for no apparent reason, but the characters are just piss poor in terms of writing.
SAO never had the best plot or interesting characters, but at least it reached the bare minimum in both qualities, which this story did not do.
You guys know this is just my opinion, right?
Reading Rankings (Portnoy inspired + A Huang-Teizan Original)
10 - God’s penmanship
9 - Must-read. Drop everything else.
8 - Instant bookmark
7 - Entertaining
6 - Good to pass time
5 - Why are you reading this?
4 - Bad.
3 - Typical garbage.
2 - My head hurts.
1 - Retirement is a thought.
0 - “Did they even give you a story?!”
Reviewer’s Rating: 4
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Mar 1, 2024
6.2/10
Yeah… no. I’m not going to say much about this manga, since it’s literally your generic carbon-copy manga about a sheltered, op mc who explores the world, shocking “masters” and gathering a harem in the most cliche and unoriginal way possible.
All of the characters are either subpar or bad: They are only there for some “fun” moments with the usual reactions to the mc’s powers, and they are all shallow to the tee.
Plot is mediocre at best, since there has not been one thing unique about any bit of the storyline, but I will say, the execution of the mc’s “healing” ability is
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pretty cool, but that’s as far as it goes, since he knows no struggle, and there really isn’t much of a point to the story besides for some light-hearted adventuring fun.
Nothing tremendously bad, since it follows all of the cliches, but for that same very reason, it isn’t anything noteworthy or memorable.
You guys know this is just my opinion, right?
Reading Rankings (Portnoy inspired + A Huang-Teizan Original)
10 - God’s penmanship
9 - Must-read. Drop everything else.
8 - Instant bookmark
7 - Entertaining
6 - Good to pass time
5 - Why are you reading this?
4 - Bad.
3 - Typical garbage.
2 - My head hurts.
1 - Retirement is a thought.
0 - “Did they even give you a story?”
Reviewer’s Rating: 6
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