Toumei Ningen no Hone

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Huh, now this is a manga I didn't expect to find. I just randomly stumbled across Bones of an Invisible Human while scrolling through AniList and found that it had a complete English scanlation. I decided to sit down and read it, thinking I'd kill some time...and read the whole thing in almost one sitting. Not gonna lie, this is actually a surprisingly heartfelt manga that tackles the subject of child abuse and patricide with sensitivity and nuance. The story centers on a young girl named Aya Kinomiya, whose life isn't exactly the best. Her father rules the household with an iron fist and frequently ... hits her mother. At one point, Aya wishes she could just be invisible...and to her surprise, her wish is granted! Aya somehow gains the ability to turn invisible, and she wastes no time putting it to use. When she gets older, she does the unthinkable: While invisible, she stabs her father in the middle of the street, murdering him in retaliation for all that he put her family through. But the deed brings her no respite, and guilt weighs heavy on her as she starts high school, convinced that she has no right to live a normal life. She contemplates turning herself in, but when some new friends enter her life, she begins putting it off more and more...

If you're worried that the girls on the covers being nude means that there'll be scenes showing the underaged female main characters nude in this manga, don't worry. Other than the covers, which never go past the top of the girls' chests, there's no nudity, sexualization, or ecchi scenes in this manga. I read the whole thing and checked. Just wanted to throw that out there. Anyway, onto the review! For a story that starts out with a murder, Bones of an Invisible Human is surprisingly grounded in its narrative approach. A lot of the manga focuses on just Aya, the time she spends at school, and the friends she makes. This isn't a story where Aya uses her powers willy-nilly and does whatever the heck she wants. But I think the story's more grounded approach here works, because it spends a lot of time characterizing Aya, fleshing her out, and focusing on her life after she does the deed and how it affects her, allowing the audience to care about her and see her not simply a criminal, but a normal, desperate teenage girl who had to make hard choices with no right answer, who's been through things no child should ever have to go through. The drama is always quiet and never leans into emo territory.

Because of the author's choice to make the narrative more grounded and down-to-earth, Aya as a main character really carries the story on her back. Yes, she did something horrible out of desperation, with the story making it clear that her bad home life has resulted in her being constantly in survival mode. She's constantly grappling with conflicting desires or whether she even deserves happiness or normalcy in light of what she did. But the story has her slowly, gradually change over the course of the manga, and how experiencing a life with guilt constantly hanging over her like a shadow, alongside navigating it with the support of her new friends, helps her evolve and change her perspective, making her a much more complex character. My only complaint is that I wish the other characters, such as Aya's family and friends, had received this treatment as well. As much as I like Kana and Shiori and the roles they play in Aya's life, they don't really have much to them other than their primary character traits, and I would have liked to learn their backstories or why they turned out the way they did. Even Aya's family doesn't have much to them, especially her older brother, who doesn't even so much as talk until the penultimate chapter.

Going back to the manga's reliance on subtlety and grace over exaggerated melodrama, even the art reflects the series' grounded nature. The art itself has a slight ruggedness to it that sells the kind of story its telling, though the linework itself is sharp and clean, with a lot of hard contrast in the shading. The character designs are deliberately simple, leaning far more on the realistic side of things, though the mangaka makes up for this by having the characters be much more expressive in subtle things like eye movements and posture, using those to communicate the characters' emotions and show us what they're feeling. For example, when Aya is invited to a friend's house, she asks said friend if it's okay for them to play video games with the friend's dad, and her friend says yes. Aya has a blank, confused expression on her face, which shows that something completely ordinary to us speaks volumes of what she was made to experience at the hands of her own father. I will say, Jun Ogino is a master at showing over telling, along with using panels that have no dialogue at all to great effect. Since the manga is only four volumes long, it's a breeze to read through, with the steady, deliberate pacing moving the story forward without rushing things.

One thing I'm sure that some readers will take issue with is the ending, where it stops right before a certain event that Aya talks about. Some may call it inconclusive, and it doesn't show what happens next. I personally had no problem with it because with how short Bones of an Invisible Human is, I didn't think that event would be the focus, and it's clear the manga is much more about Aya's arc than having a conclusive ending. To quote another review, the manga feels less like a fireworks show and more like a cold, winter night, even down to the ending, and considering the nature of the story, I think that's fitting. Some time ago, I read another manga about a girl contemplating killing her abusive father called May My Father Die Soon, only it doesn't have supernatural powers and the MC is both physically and sexually abused by her father. That manga doesn't have a full English scanlation yet, and from what I've read, while I respect what its trying to do, parts of it come off as pretty tasteless because of the fetishy, almost Male Gaze-y way the mangaka chose to draw the scenes where the MC is sexually abused by her father. Between that and Bones of an Invisible Human, I find I like Bones a little better by virtue of the fact that it treats the subjects of dometic and child abuse with more tact and sensitivity without the tasteless elements that May My Father Die Soon has.

Bones of an Invisible Human is a quiet, poignant, and surprisingly wholesome manga about a girl coming to terms with the decision she made and how it affects her life afterward. While it has its issues, I still found it an intriguing, thought provoking read, and I recommend it for those who like their crime stories to be more grounded and tackle sensitive issues with sensitivity and grace.

Toumei Ningen no Hone (The Bones Of An Invisible Person) drew me in primarily because of one chapter, I picked a random one to get a feel of the story and my first impression was that the mangaka new exactly when to stop talking and let the art tell the story.
The dialogue has meaning and weight behind it despite it having quite little in some chapters, but its that precision story telling that makes the story feel more sincere.

The art is very well drawn and the fantasy element is well fleshed out in a plot development way as apposed to being a means to an ... end to progress the story it felt like a real person experiencing the phenomena.

Metaphorically I feel the story is one of depression and how to overcome it, each character acts like a part of the author debating with themselves and non of it feels edgy or done to create drama. the whole thing just has a nice flow to it and its easy to read in one sitting.

Overall its a very well written story that floats on the line between sadness, melancholy and happiness. What these mean to the characters based on their world view and how to confront yourself. be that in the form of self punishment, aspirations or helping others.

Excellent. Heartbroken, melancholy warmth. Deftly navigates the situation it depicts. Fiction is metaphor made real, in here, the metaphor is more than real. I can feel mass. Ironic how it relates to disappearing from the senses. The emotions it tries to weave through don't always feel real, human communication breaks down so much easier than that, but it does not need to feel real. I cannot help but feel that my desire for it to go otherwise is a want to be cynical in the face of something that posits a reality where understanding could exist —concurrently with cruelty— fluid and yet blunt. My cynicism ... is no match for the heart this text has. The text tells a moving story beautifully.

On the art. It has been my unfortunate experience that manga with a strong bent towards exploring emotions and complex topics deliver despite the art. Here, the manga is made perfect by its phenomenal art. Whitespace. It isn't surprising that a text that deals so intimately with "wanting to disappear" relies on emptiness as its primary visual metaphor. But the way it deploys it is incredibly beautiful. Especially incredible given how much of it there is, framing the characters, highlighting panels, and maintaining the pace and mood. High-contrast illustrations. The art has incredibly high contrast; greys are relegated to the construction of backgrounds, with the characters being monochrome. It pulls you towards the characters, whose faces and bodies are beautifully —and confidently— drawn. The manga wants to make a statement by showcasing the characters' emotions, and it refuses to stand in its own way while it makes it.