Nov 13, 2024
This manga is barely enjoyable, with the constant reminder that it's just a self insert fantasy for the author, or the author writing a self insert fantasy for the readers.
There are some good parts, which is obviously the pacing of the relationship, in which they start dating and do lots of cute and diabetic stuff, which is nice to watch. It does feel like an actual relationship, not like other manga's, where they might take 50+ chapters to kiss once. The art style is good enough, as to where you can understand what is going on, even though the character designs might be uninteresting.
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If you can turn your brain off and just enjoy, it's a very cute, diabetic manga to easily get washed away by. It might sound good so far, but it does have quite a few flaws too.
The MC has quite literally no personality, no background, no characterization, nothing. His whole character is purely created through the FMC, which is an average "gyaru" who is actually just a normal outgoing girl. She influences the MC to actually start existing, since before she influences his character, he quite literally has nothing. No family, no friends, no hobbies, literally nothing. He does get into gaming with the FMC, but he didn't play games before meeting her, so the only actual thing we know about his character is that he watches anime. It's so obviously a self-insert it breaks the immersion whenever you are reminded of it, if you can even immerse yourself with how many times it reminds you that he is just an empty shell.
The pacing might seem good, but it felt extremely forced, with the little sister being some magical wingman that only appeared as a tool for them to get together as fast as possible. The confession is also rushed itself, following right after one of the first outright romantic moments, which would usually make them realise their feelings, not outright confess in the moment. It does subvert expectations, but not really in a great way. Reading it feels very rushed, and ruins the moment a little bit. The MC has a little inner conflict about it, but succumbs to the mangaka's will within one chapter. It was honestly boring that he just accepted that he had a girlfriend, and his character completely shifted towards an average boyfriend, who isn't awkward doing physical stuff with his girlfriend, even though he doesn't have any experience with anyone, male or female. Even though he is literally set-up to be a loner-type guy without any experience at the start of the manga, yet completely changes when the manga needs him to, to add more diabetic moments.
If you want to read a diabetic romance, this is fine. But don't expect any level of immersion or actual care for any of the characters, or any events going on in the story, since it all feels like one massive fan-fiction story. It's as if someone's daydream of a perfect girlfriend appearing to them and falling in love with them for no reason came true, as if it isn't the main concept of the other hundreds of cloned romance manga's nowadays. It is still executed very poorly, with no consistency to any of the characters, except maybe the FMC, who carries the show, like a poster girl.
Overall if you just want to relax and read some diabetes, this is what you want, but it doesn't have anything to offer, other than those cute moments, so if you want an actual good romance, this is unfortunately not it.
Reviewer’s Rating: 3
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