Nisekoi alternative ending

_LorDNiCo_ said:
Haha, I really liked how you wrote this. I liked on how you used your imagination instead. I also wanted Raku to be with Onodera as well. But, that can only happen in our imagination.

xEzioAuditore said:

"Zwech in love :D"

MateuszB1987 said:


It should be:

"Zawsze in love" In Polish zawsze == forever.

Usagi said:
The law of anime is that best girl never wins.
The ending was as it should have been, worst girl wins as always.

acidbass92 said:

wrong again. the law of anime is that extra never wins.
nisekoi oneshot never had any of those girl include onodera. they were just a bunch of extra.

medaminexc said:

eww no onodera is much better. She is sweet, shy and really nice
let me fix something for ya

Only_Brad said:
The real ending is the best ending. Best girl won, the worse girl lost. It's literally perfect in eveory possible way.

Only_Brad said:


Ah yes the girl with no personality is the best. Lmao

Only_Brad said:


Still better than no personality

xEzioAuditore said:


It was the thing that I wanted to see at the end of the story. But no matter how we imagine, the orignal one has the biggest impact on our spirits.
I did let go from a big part of the bad feeling I felt when I've seen the end.

Thank you :)

WillHawkins said:
people complain about the ending although they’re normally not that mad about how poorly written it was they’re just sulking because their waifu didn’t win, even Chitoge fans acknowledge the ending was great, Chitoge should have won tho that was the main goal of the manga and anything else would have just made it worse

Only_Brad said:


Ah yes the girl with no personality is the best. Lmao

PigtaiIedSlime said:
You talk about "no personality" yet your choice is a cardboard cutout of one of the most over used character types in anime except without anything likeable.

xEzioAuditore said:
Hello people,
I'm a person who've read Nisekoi to the very end to see how it ends. And I was very furious.
I instantly made an alternative ending script in my head but today I plained to write it on MAL. I focused on moral choices. I wanted Raku to a decent person who make his promises true.

I hope you've enjoyed it.



Nisekoi from an objective POV sucks. But most of people (including me) read it to the end to see who's the promised girl. It would be better if Raku rejected Chitoge
Raku:" Chitoge, mm .. The 3years were something I would never forget but .."
Chitoge:"I know, I'm not the promise girl. But .. I really liked you since the cultural festival"

Raku:"I also like you Chitoge, but no more, you know that I liked Onodera from since we were little. And I loved her again few years ago. It's surely weird how love is such a cruel feeling, once you give it time. You would never get rid of it. I'm sorry Chitoge, I was very happy to find out that you've loved me. But Onodera is the girl I feel like I can give her all my time & passion despite the fact I love you both. Bye Chitoge"

Raku goes to Onodea
Onodera:"I was waiting for you Ichijo-kun, I've something I should've said before ..."
Raku:" It's a man's duty to confess first you know?"
Onodera shocked
Raku:" I've also liked you, 10y ago & from junior high. And if life cruel enough to seperate us again, I'll instantly fall in love with you once I see you again." :)
Onodera:" From juniour high? huh ... (taking a long breath) I love you Raku, I can't describe the happiness I'm feeling now"
Raku approching Onodera and opens the pendant. Both reading the letters for their future ones and laughing.

Here come the famous "Zwech in love :D"
Onodera making a weird face:"What's the meaning of that?"
Raku:"Ah, you don't know. My bad, but we have the entire life to spend together. We can speak about it later. But now .." Raku and Onodera Blush. And here come the kiss (without petals censoring !)

chapter 229 would be like: Chitoge becoming a model and driving Tsugumi with her.
Shuu x Ruri stills the same. Haru more happy for her sister. Raku becoming the boss and opening a huge japanease sweet shop were he can help Onodera and Haru managing it (He doesn't work that boring job). Marika finally finding someone like Raku in appearance (Like the princess who looks like Chitoge).

If you like it I can write an extended version of it. Because I jumped a lot of feeling/faces in my dialogue to make it short.

Please enjoy :)

Snow_dropindo99 said:
as a chitoge fan I prefer the actual ending than your one XD...I hope there will be a S3 I want to see Raku and Chitoge get married :)

Inlighted0Varsh said:
What the hell is this ?, This is so lame bro I mean read the title of this anime it is " Nisekoi" means "false love" and the Raku's false love is Chitoge Kirisaki. This doesn't even make sense.