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Jan 11, 2015 7:20 AM
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http://the-dent.deviantart.com/art/Kirito-Kun-485938280

What do you think.
Made with 1H, 2H, HB pencils
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Jan 11, 2015 7:22 AM
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That's really good although since its from the back I can't see how good you are at drawing his face if you know what I mean.
I've been here way too long...
Jan 11, 2015 7:46 AM
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It's nicely done but it's a bit dull. It's a boring, overdone pose done by him. I'm really digging the linework though, it's just lacking the originality.

I like it though.

Jan 11, 2015 2:55 PM
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Nice drawing but I'd be more impressed if it were original.
Jan 11, 2015 5:29 PM
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Ryugen said:
Nice drawing but I'd be more impressed if it were original.

Pretty much this. Also, I felt the outlines were too bold. Bring in more shadow and depth.
Jan 11, 2015 5:30 PM
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Nice. A bit too much contrast in the image tho.
Jan 11, 2015 7:09 PM
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mayukachan said:
Nice. A bit too much contrast in the image tho.
The contrast is what I really like about the drawing, if anything more contrast would be nice. With so much of Kirito being black everything that isn't black should pop.
Jan 11, 2015 8:39 PM
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ibearclaw said:
mayukachan said:
Nice. A bit too much contrast in the image tho.
The contrast is what I really like about the drawing, if anything more contrast would be nice. With so much of Kirito being black everything that isn't black should pop.

The main reason why i pointed that out is because it's a scan/photo of a pencil sketch so it has a lot of noise (graphic noise) already. increasing the contrast would emphasis the noise.
Jan 11, 2015 8:42 PM
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Your eagle drawing is really nice
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Jan 11, 2015 9:17 PM

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Now that you've got a feel for kirito, try doing a bust drawing of him with using reference but make it an original drawing. :) Also look up anatomy reference as you draw.

We've got a long running thread here for posting art and receiving critiques so maybe drop by (if you haven't already): http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=334&show=7200

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Jan 12, 2015 3:14 AM

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Looks pretty cool man, keep it up!

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