Hum, they surely got better now, but i think it's still a bit too light anyway :/ Because it's still kinda hard-ish to read >w</ So it would need to be even darker in my opinion..
I know that the more darker and the less the "gold" is gold, but it must be readable on the first place, so yes they need to be darker than this ;w;/
But we are almost there yet!
I think its good. but if possible i would like to the the info on card release dates and such. i will also need graphics with the newsletter so it will look nice
Hey sweety!
Well, overall they are good, but there's one thing i really need to point you out:
charas names are way too super-clear, they'd need to be with a darker color for the inside-name (or u could try leaving the color like that, but changing the border from white to dark. Although i think it's better the other option and leaving the border in white, cuz it makes it more.. dunno, like more focused on gold, cuz it gives the idea that sparkles)
So about banners:
Really a splendid job on them! I only have a couple of things to point out
- mouse's Misaki Mei loner banner, i know the original image was already flipped that way (because has been probably scanned in horizzontally, even if it was a vertical image), but unless the chara is layed down somewhere -> therefor it's normal for us to see him "horizontal", i'd say to flip those kind of images properly and show them "right" if u know what i mean. So basically u'd need to flip her image by 90°
- Tamaki's banners: did u make banners for her previously in the past? I remember she has the - <- before and after the name, are you sure she wants her banners without that thing? I know Akie does, but i dont know about other users having the - things.. So in order to avoid u to make the banners twice, i was just wondering, to make sure!
So did she ask for not having them in the banners maybe somewhen in the past, or is she ok like that anyways? :o
For the rest, really gokurosama dear!
Yes as u thought next bunch of pages will be:
- Category 42,43,44 [Photogenic, Golden Eyed]
And yes, you can do them like green eyes, cuz it would stick with a very nice theme and would make them very recognizable cuz they are all the same "type" of category (meaning all focused on eyes), so yep, i do agree!
As we did on green eyed, make sure that the gold in the eyes really look gold, rather than brown or any other non-allowed color (also do make some color-effects in cases the image doesnt turn out very yellow/gold once resized)
And like the last time, try to make the backup zoom-in for the eyes, the biggest possible!
ps: last page (44) is not fully "full" yet, so wait for it to be complete before to post it~
