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Hey, buddy. I reported your review of Mondaiji, because it was more of a rant than a review. There are numerous problems with your review, and your grammar has nothing to do with it.
1. Be nice. Well, not literally, but don't be nasty. Be indifferent. Calmly display the problems with the anime in a professional manner. Since you didn't like it, you could always throw in some sarcastic humor or shots here and there, but don't make it the entire focus of the review.
2. Explain more. You only state what's wrong with the anime and what it does to affect your opinion of it. Think of the audience. Will your opinions reflect the audience's? And what would qualify as such? Go into detail with the problems of the anime. So it's bad. Why? What makes it bad? Is this a technical problem or a personal problem? Like my sixth grade English teacher always told me: "Tell me more! Tell me more! Tell me more!"
3. Okay, so your grammar was a bit of an issue. But that's easily fixable. And if you need any assistance with it, I'll gladly proofread any future reviews you may write up.
I apologize for the inconvenience, and it may be frustrating to know that your first review may not be on the site for much longer, but that doesn't mean you're banned from writing reviews in general. Just keep working at it, and you'll become a credible writer in no time.
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[spoiler][b]BUENAS!
Te envío este mensaje para informarte de nuestra presencia aquí en MyAnimeList, como un nuevo club para todo Hispano hablante fan del anime y manga, y para invitarte a hacer parte de nuestra acojedora comunidad, obviamente si se presenta de vuestro interés. Tenemos Juegos, Debates, Noticias, Proyectos, Member Cards y varias ediciones de cards para los miembros. Siéntase libre de pasar un rato con nosotros! Te estaremos esperando! ^O^
Saludos!!
Federación Latino - Americana.[/b]
1. Be nice. Well, not literally, but don't be nasty. Be indifferent. Calmly display the problems with the anime in a professional manner. Since you didn't like it, you could always throw in some sarcastic humor or shots here and there, but don't make it the entire focus of the review.
2. Explain more. You only state what's wrong with the anime and what it does to affect your opinion of it. Think of the audience. Will your opinions reflect the audience's? And what would qualify as such? Go into detail with the problems of the anime. So it's bad. Why? What makes it bad? Is this a technical problem or a personal problem? Like my sixth grade English teacher always told me: "Tell me more! Tell me more! Tell me more!"
3. Okay, so your grammar was a bit of an issue. But that's easily fixable. And if you need any assistance with it, I'll gladly proofread any future reviews you may write up.
I apologize for the inconvenience, and it may be frustrating to know that your first review may not be on the site for much longer, but that doesn't mean you're banned from writing reviews in general. Just keep working at it, and you'll become a credible writer in no time.
Anyway i respect your opinion.