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This one shot was a nice read. The concept could have gone further, but I don't blame the author for trying to make an end that could get his one shot made into a series. The art style was up to par with some of the bigger titles, by that I mean it was clean, clear, concise and had interesting character designs. Overall, its worth a read.

Story 5/10
The major thing holding it back was that it's a one shot otherwise it could have gotten a better score. There where slightly too many concepts that weren't fully explored/explained for it to have a good score ... here. You could see that there where many concepts to be explored and it would have worked fine had it been continued.

Art 7/10
Overall the art is one of the good points of this one shot. It was a clean, clear, concise while retaining enough detail to give it a good feel. This style that would have made it possible to have been continued as a series.

Character 6/10
The characters where fun and simple, but yet again since it was a one shot it becomes much harder to have some good character development or presentation. I liked Sara Tanjuro as a character, nice and funny with a possible cool side in combat. However, the other characters didn't stand out all that much.(well there was also that teacher with the weird hairdo but we didn't see him much.)

Overall it gives a nice one shot that had some decent potential.

Story:
The premiss of the story is very interesting. A world where angels have gone crazy and demons are actually more helpfull for mankind. So a group of fallen angels, or demons, have United to save humans from angels and the so called Venus. That said, the author clearly wanted a longer series to develop his ideas. I hope he could spark some interest and got the chance he wanted to make something bigger.

Art:
The art didn't impress me. The main characters are very ordinary. Specially Satan. That said, the angels are very cool. I also liked the idea the author had for the weapons. The ... clothes are also boring and bland. The scenery is almost non-existant.

Character:
The only development we get is for two characters. They get to know each other. It's the start of a friendship. The past of the main character is explained, but we can't really say that there was enough development to make them charming or interesting.

Enjoyment:
All in all, it is a cool concept, but for a oneshot on its own is just pointless. It's like having only the first chapter of a very long series like Naruto or Dragon Ball.

Overall:
If you don't mind reading the first chapter of a long series that will never be completed, just go for it.

Well, I can hear your guys hate that I’m doing another one shot but they are easier to read. I really did like the story line for this one, pretty much mixing supernatural action’s with love and courage undertones. The bad thing about this… IT COULD BE LONGER! They have such a great story that this could be made that much longer and actually have a series maybe to play around with but they don’t! They leave it on a cliff hanger. To me, that’s just lazy creating. If you have a story that is short, then don’t make it as good as this to ... the point that the reader is going to want to read more. That makes it lose stars in my thought.

The artwork is alright, basically average actually. We have Sara with his white spiky hair that makes him look like his the child of Yugi from Yugioh and Allan from D.Gray Man.