Jun 27, 2024
6.7/10
This certainly had some potential in becoming a wholesome, grinning mess of a story, but I can’t lie, it’s a bit forced and cringe.
The cringe can be slightly excused from the characters being freshmen in high school, so their romance shouldn’t be the most mature, but boy, was the romance forced. There’s virtually no reason for the fmcs to be lovey-dovey with the main character; at best, you could defend the first sister, but the second sister was inserted for the sake of plot.
Besides for that massive flaw, the characters are mediocre — the main character is portrayed as too cool for sh*t, and
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it does become slightly annoying, since it seems forced, but he doesn’t ooze everywhere within the slightest touch of a female, so I guess there’s some upside.
I can’t state how bad the story is due to the fmcs being forced into a romance with the mc — it’s just annoying, since the author never bothered to develop a naturally forming romance, which adds so much to a story and character. This especially applies to the second sister, as she has no natural place in the story, and the writing degrades to forced cringe when she’s around.
I cant believe I’m saying this, but a romcom was basically ruined because the characters, who usually have some of the most leeway in a story to act as ridiculous as possible, were unnaturally bad. If you can rot your brain a bit and put aside the plot holes, then the story is pretty wholesome/cute.
Reading Rankings (Portnoy inspired + A Huang-Teizan Original)
10 - God’s penmanship
9 - Must-read. Drop everything else.
8 - Instant bookmark
7 - Entertaining
6 - Good to pass time
5 - Why are you reading this?
4 - Bad.
3 - Typical garbage.
2 - My head hurts.
1 - Retirement is a thought.
0 - “Did they even give you a story?!”
Reviewer’s Rating: 6
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