May 19, 2018
This was a story I wasn't expecting much. I've heard countless stories with the same plot before that sound interesting. But once you read it, You realize the story isn't good at all.
Thankfully this story manages to actually be fairly entertaining. It's by no means the next big thing. But there is a charming feeling as the family slowly grows.
The Elf girl is probably the best part if not the Dragon girl. They both manage to be the right amount of adorable without being obnoxious
Only thing I don't like Is how the world is explained with Slavery and everything. Normally In stories with Slavery
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as part of It. I prefer them not to go into to much detail about how dark It is and everything. I do feel the story could've gone without all the depressing things like sacrifices.
I think the story would've also been a touch better If it had the MC come across bandits with the Main female lead being a captured slave.
Finally I feel that the MC should've been a Demon King since the start with no Demon Council or anything. Just imagine that a couple thousand-year-old Demon King feared throughout the land. That he can't communicate with one girl
From what little art there is, It's actually pretty good.
Overall, This is a pretty good story and I hope this gets more recognition
Reviewer’s Rating: 8
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