| (If this is in the wrong place, move it please.) Well, I just submitted another review, after a LONG time. My review of Chobits is a bit of a lackluster one and I've just noticed a few grammar errors in my Evangelion review. Otherwise, I'm looking to see how I can improve. |
| Here are my criticisms: The structure is too rigid, the opening exposition is unnecessary, the review should be framed around how you responded to the show and not what the show comprise. I am not a fan of reviews that go through characters, story, animation, sound... like a check list. I want to know why you spent a paragraph each describing the 4 characters; you described them but you didn't explain how they are important to the story, and more importantly how they affected your impression of the story as a whole. |
| My subjective reviews: katsureview.wordpress.com THE CHAT CLUB. |
| Well, I don't want too many spoilers in my reviews. I also want to present something "neutral" in sense. Giving both pros and cons. MAL's character limit also restricted things. |
DeadSnow24thOct 5, 2013 7:39 PM
| MAL has a character limit? Surprised I haven't hit it yet, as my reviews tend to be long. Well, I really liked your Eva review. Maybe talk a little more about the story, half of your review was describing the characters. |
| Another page to the history of the Fujaku. |
| Maybe it was just my phone. But I'll try to do better with future reviews. |
| Thread Moved. |
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| First off, there is no character limit when you are writing reviews on MAL. Second off, I find both of your reviews quite nice. What I would like to point out thought is the presentation. Try erasing a few lines in your review for Chobits and make it more like the Evangelion. |
| The Chobits one will be left alone. In a way, this would show (in the future), where I started from and how much I've changed. |
| I was only saying that you could remove some lines of space, not the content. |
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