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Jun 20, 2008 3:46 AM
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Not bad for only a 45 page one shot, they usually are 80...

Decent storyline, decent ending, nothing special to remember i guess except the back... lol :P
Jun 20, 2008 5:17 AM
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haha xD ~well i must admit it was cute xP and it's nice to waste my time on yet another shoujo oneshot ^^
Jun 20, 2008 5:48 AM
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I liked it. it's probably because I like bishounen guys :)
but the story was cute too.
Jun 20, 2008 8:05 AM
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pretty good story, the one shot was pretty well done and if it takes off then it can be developed into something nice.
Jun 20, 2008 10:19 AM
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Friendlysoul said:
Not bad for only a 45 page one shot, they usually are 80...


not true... >< Most Shoujo oneshots are long as a regular chapter 30-50pgs.
Jul 5, 2008 5:27 PM
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I thought it was pretty bad. The art isn't as good as the mangaka's other works, the characters are bland, the romance is off, and the characters don't really feel like they have motives (sorta like they're just reading off a script) .. The plot twists are pretty predictable. I didn't even think it was cute. This is probably just me though...
Jul 13, 2008 7:51 AM
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Crystal_Assassin said:
I thought it was pretty bad. The art isn't as good as the mangaka's other works, the characters are bland, the romance is off, and the characters don't really feel like they have motives (sorta like they're just reading off a script) .. The plot twists are pretty predictable. I didn't even think it was cute. This is probably just me though...


nah, i second that!
Sep 30, 2008 9:32 PM
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Friendlysoul said:
Not bad for only a 45 page one shot, they usually are 80...

80pages for a oneshot??! i've never seen that. usually they're around 40ish pages. equal to a shoujo chapter length..

anyway,this was a cute oneshot.. i guess i dont mind all the cliches, since it IS a oneshot.(plus i love shoujo cliches!) i'd read this again if i needed a quick shoujo fix.
Jan 19, 2009 1:41 AM
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It was alright. It would have been better if it was longer. There were just too many leaps and jumps to accept.
Mar 13, 2009 3:03 AM

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It somehow went from a cliched school love story to a cliche story about secret assassins, bodyguards, massive fortunes, and conspiracies.

Pure lunacy all the way, and consistently lousy.
Mar 17, 2009 10:52 PM

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Meh, I thought it was pretty good for a oneshot.
The plot was kind of interesting - although it was pretty fast and it jumped from one thing to another. But the characters were sweet and the art was relatively nice. It was pretty enjoyable in a sense :)



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Mar 18, 2009 7:05 AM

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The coloured cover reminded me CLAMP's artwork. Of course CLAMP is way better than Tsukuba Sakura.
Sep 28, 2009 1:26 AM

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the story is good.
but it is better if it is longer.


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Oct 31, 2009 2:57 PM
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I like it. It was really cute :) The ending was good enough for me, maybe if it was something lik : "10 years later" or something like that i would run like crazy and say OMG :)) _______________________
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Jul 19, 2010 7:00 AM

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i like the story..
but is that love will be with you tell you grow up ?!
Sep 9, 2010 5:55 AM

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I really enjoyed reading the manga! loving it, really. its really sweet and when he blushed in the end, that was adorable! i wished the story was longer! cause it didnt feel like love to me, seems more like gratitude. if the manga was longer, then maybe theyll really fall in love!
Jun 8, 2011 11:46 PM

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What started off as an adorable shoujo oneshot turned into some absurd, elaborate assassination attempt and ruined what promise it had. Blagh.
May 9, 2012 4:26 AM

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That was nice. Unuyama-kun is hawt! Haha! Too bad it's just a one shot.
Sep 28, 2012 10:11 PM

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lysssp said:
What started off as an adorable shoujo oneshot turned into some absurd, elaborate assassination attempt and ruined what promise it had. Blagh.

True. It was too sudden (though there were hints here and there) and extremely ridiculous imo
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YoungVagabond said:
It somehow went from a cliched school love story to a cliche story about secret assassins, bodyguards, massive fortunes, and conspiracies.

Pure lunacy all the way, and consistently lousy.


i felt the same way. all of a sudden on a date, the guy tries to kill him? seriously? what's up with that. and all this talk about a secret family... way too sudden.
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