Aug 3, 2018
The entry into this little wish fulfilling story is, well, uninspired.
Everything is easily accepted and not enough room is given to suspend our disbelief, and our boredom towards the events. It feels like a glimmering ball of presents for young minds searching for arousal. Not very flattering, and thus, annoying.
And some honorable people will feel disgusted by the clear deviancy incited here.
Having a perverted and nasty character is nice to see once in a while, it makes us wish to see him caught and punished.
His reactions to the new system that rules his life are, sadly, badly written and predictable in a bad way.
The twists
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in the story are nice, but if it asks you; "wait! it gets better soon.", then there is still work to be done.
You have to grit your teeth a bit, and then maybe you'll appreciate this new take on the "game system affects real life" wave ths piece of work tries to ride on.
The decent artstyle helps a lot.
Let's hope the story gets more appealing, and that the characters have some actual depth, instead of being stereotypical nutjobs.
Reviewer’s Rating: 6
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