Option 2
(To clarify: I've watched the anime for it and checked up on the nuances in the endings between the anime and manga but otherwise they generally seem very close).
Again, I REALLY wanted to love this series, and between seeing the high ratings on ANN, reading Justin Sevakis' fantastic Buried Treasure article on it and being absolutely blown away by Part 1 (first 27 episodes, not sure what part of the manga it is), but once the core dynamic was lost, the series started to lose its perfectly tempered pacing and plot intricacy and things unraveled in various spots.
Starting with Part 2, my main problem with it is that there seems to be a deliberate lack of drive in the team almost as if the characters KNEW they had to wait until their final year so things would gain some urgency and the plot centered purely around Tatsuya's quest. The current third (forth?) years (namely Kuroki and Sachiko) seem like they have some subtle acknowledgement of where Adachi attends to go with the plot and it is kind of fatalistic and unceremonious how they are written out of the main story with them being eliminated from the League so early in the year, and then despite them having some melancholy that their big dreams of going to Koshien was crushed too, I sensed a bit of "oh well, it's Tatsuya's story" from them. It makes that chunk of the series just kind of advance and go through the motions without much weight to get you invested in things, everything just kind of happens. It doesn't even feel like they were weighed down by the big twist at that point either and had moved on, trying to kind of push forward and win, but still being bogged down by the looming self-awareness to the story's direction; if they would have emphasized the twist's impact more still into those later stages it would be digestible at least, but it didn't sit well with me.
Also there was the really contrived deal of getting Tatsuya to quit the boxing club to get him on the baseball team, because "reasons" really.
Then there's a certain someone who gets introduced who is a malignant tumor to the whole series and it is repulsive and unfathomable how someone such as him could be conceived in himself coupled with how fantastic, layered, flawed and relatable characters like Tatsuya, Kazuya, Minami, etc and their dynamics are in this particular series (again mostly in Part 1); he's one of the most deplorable characters I've seen in most media so far honestly. I'm of course talking about Yoshida. He starts out as this very passive and sincere guy but all he really does is follow around Tatsuya, idolize him, copy him, and then try to surpass him where he makes a drastic and really obnoxious shift to King of the Pricks, being a totally inflated narcissist and aggressively chasing after women, relentlessly trying to rub his nose in Tatsuya's face at EVERY. SINGLE. INSTANCE. And just being one of the most parasitic and soulless individuals ever. At this point too his presence starts to further fuel that notion of "this is Tatsuya's story, and we accept it" as we get to that time where Tatsuya and Yoshida do some practice pitching against Akio Nitta. Yoshida is able to strike him out while Nitta is able to hit Tatsuya's pitches, but for some bewildering reason, Nitta "senses" Yoshida is inferior and Tatsuya will be his main rival seemingly only through a kind of main character syndrome thing. Adachi does try to nip Yoshida in the bud at one point when he gives him the cruel fate of being sent away to South America when he wants to join a rival school and beat Tatsuya, and I liked that Adachi was totally crapping on his own monstrosity...until he had some sympathy and let him come back for the semi-finals; it really wasn't needed and that abrupt circumstantial closure would have been a much more fitting end to his stupid arc, but Adachi kind of half-assedly reignites the rivalry briefly before shutting it down again insignificantly which felt like a trivial exercise.
I'm jumping around a bit, but I'll just say Part 4 (and 3? Once Yoshida temporarily leaves) start to pick up some of the pieces, but feel a bit dragged out still and lack the intense and layered character dynamics of Part 1, but characters like Kashiwaba are still quite great; HE was a good love to hate character, and then he actually blossomed into someone sympathetic, we really could've just had him for the big jerk of the series honestly.
On another hand, I feel Minami's subplot is also a bit ultimately tacked on and suffers from some microcosms of the earlier complaints really. She gets idolized by all the other gymnasts, they go out of their way to push her more, they are kind of self-defeating at points, and Minami kind of gives up her separate, smaller dream just to see main character Tatsuya's through, and the way the gymnastics thing closed felt a bit muddled to me, I swear they said she could advance to the next tourney despite coming 5th in that smaller one, but she just kind of passes it by.
Speaking of muddled, the whole "Tatsuya is Tatsuya, not Kazuya" thing is very wishy-washy in my book, and it doesn't seem like they are explicitly going out of their way to separate them despite preaching it 95% of the time (a few times Minami was strangely doubtful, it was weird). Kazuya threw pure fastballs, Tatsuya throws pure fastballs. Kazuya was the ace Meisei pitcher everyone relied on, Tatsuya is the new ace Meisei pitcher everyone relies on, etc. Ideas of Tatsuya playing baseball for Kazuya, playing for himself and his own Koushien and playing only out of obligation and not liking baseball are kind of thrown around and it doesn't provide really steady ground as to what his true goals are, and so it starts to remove me a bit while taking out a bit of that emotional heft for how important the ending was. To close it out on that note, the ending was a bit abrupt - they essentially reach their goal (as to be expected) and that's pretty much it, there's no really big closure or final emotional punch at the very end it seems, it just kind of ends and it is a tad off-putting. As much as I don't like the general ending that much, I prefer the anime's rendition where the final episode has almost no dialogue and they breeze by scene to scene towards the end with very soft music and a wistful filter for the animation before that last step on the beach, it's very ethereal and dreamlike and at least creates a quaint little mood piece for that ending like reaching Valhalla or something, it was nice.
Essentially, the series had a great first quarter as a complex yet tempered and engrossing slice of life with lots of personality, gut-busting humour, charm and smaller dramatic moments that unleashed more power than you'd think capable from them and was an easy, EAAAAAAAAASY 10/10, but the rest of the series doesn't uphold those heights and consistency, wobbling around say, MAYBE 6-9, or more likely 7-9/10 for the rest of it in different areas, taking too many leaps and bounds to get to its main goal and sadly, I don't think I can quite validate Touch's greatness fully, so I say 'tis unremarkable :/. Hopefully H2 delivers for me though. |