There’s no more disappointing feeling than yet another webcomic wasting its premise, since the story sucks absolute ba dong a dong. Of course, this is no different and is equally as disappointing with every chapter.
The plot of this manga is pathetic to even call it a plot; it seems the author loves making a step forward in the right direction each chapter, progressing the fmc and adding other character, be he/she proceeds to walk backwards for the hell of it. In other words, the plot does not progress — it has been the same concept/premise/storyline in each chapter.
The characters in this manga, besides for not getting an ounce of explanation or progression, are all ridiculously heliocentric/dependent off of the story’s premise. Every side character that gets added only serves to aid in the humor or make the fmc blush, which speaks to how one-dimensional the story is.
There’s some bright spots here and there with the occasional humor from the character dynamic, but it’s also nothing great — a short smile is the most you’re going to get out of me — a somewhat unique concept has yet again been ruined by the lack of storytelling.
Reading Rankings (Portnoy inspired + A Huang-Teizan Original)
10 - God’s penmanship
9 - Must-read. Drop everything else.
8 - Instant bookmark
7 - Entertaining
6 - Good to pass time
5 - Why are you reading this?
4 - Bad.
3 - Typical garbage.
2 - My head hurts.
1 - Retirement is a thought.
0 - “Did they even give you a story?!”
