Kono Oneesan wa Fiction desu!?
Is this Girl for Real!?

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Everything is great until the ending that is just horrible im sorry but if you like good romance i do not recommend reading this manga, it literally throws all character development out the window for a last minute substitution of a character that could have been written out of the series and it wouldn't have changed the story a bit. Why the author had the need to ruin a great story with such a failure of an ending is beyond me this is one of those stories that had the potential to be one of the most enjoyable love stories but ruins the entire thing ... in the end.

It gets off to a really bizarre start in all the things that you might be used to, taking a horribly wrong turn. I think that's a good idea in general, but it was executed poorly in this manga. I'm one for the chaos of everything that seems great in theory going wrong, but the manga handled in a very lazy way.

You see the main female character naked very early on, and I'm a fan of treating nudity as something human, but you only see her naked. the lead male character is probably the exact opposite of what anyone else would do in any ... similar situation. These are the two major components of the dream come true gone wrong for any teenage cisgender heterosexual boy that would love to spend a lot of time with the sexy heterosexual cisgender lady. this went down the very run of the mill path of "for some reason the male character's parents are gone from the house and for some reason this grown woman has to live with this teenager."

Feelings are developed, but then awkwardly addressed and or not addressed at all which leads to passive aggressive and petty behavior. Not so much jealously, which is common fair in these kinds of things between the other female characters. It was refreshing to see that, to say the least. and on the other hand, if you're not into everyone always having this happy-go-lucky slapstick romance with a fairy tale ending, this might be your thing. It also airs on the side of caution of being too dramatic and the characters taking themselves too seriously most of the time. Honestly, that is my thing, but otherwise the characters and events are very uneventful. For the theme and what they decide to do with the characters, the manga is too long.

One word: Disappointing.

I'm a casual reader who happened to be in a phase of shota plot craving so when this one popped out on similar manga on 'Puppy Lovers' (somebody please take it down), I decided to check it out. Cover has a shota in it so I proceeded to binge-read and waste my good sleep schedule on this.

The first parts were pretty decent. It was actually good until the last chapters hit me hard with conclusions out of nowhere. It was really unexpected you'll be asking yourself why? how? and you want your wasted time back.

Art was good though, chapters are pretty ... repetitive like you can summarize 5 chapters into 1. It has interesting characters not until it blew up in the end. It felt really forced and rushed.

TL;DR; The only way I can desribe this is if someone gave you a blowjob, and just you are nearly busting a nut she stops , well this manga is like that. It's that fucking baaaad.

The character designs and are awesome though. The story keeps you going flipping pages hoping something might happen , but none until the end , and suprise - you got blue balls.

Stay away from this for your own sake.

Holy fucking shit the prompt still says please write a longer review , I don't know what else to add I'm efficient and I've conveyed the message enough without spoiling shit MAL ... what else do you fucking want.

What started out as something I thought I could eventually read a couple of times to stave off the boredom and loneliness ended with me nearly destroying my whole house. Rather, I only destroyed some bones and muscles in a couple of idiots who thought they could try and mug me without getting trouble. Normally I don't write reviews and this probably shows through now but I just have to say it. This story had a great premise, but honestly was one of the worst endings I have ever had the pleasure of seeing.

As I have already said, the story was pretty good with only ... a few inconsistencies that I could overlook, but then it immediately started to feel rushed and it hurt me to know the worst route was selected.

The Art style itself was solid and consistent with the characters having a life-like feel to them for me, it was also rather pleasant at times to just look at.

The Characters could have done with a bit more work but that is the same everywhere you go.

But overall I think that it was a waste of my time and anyone else's time who has read it already.

But still if you don't believe me then read it yourself and be stuck with the thought you could have done it better.