Sep 25, 2023
6.9/10
For a romance manga, it’s safe to say that an author challenges their writing significantly more by writing an already established relationship than a premature one. Because of this degree of difficulty, most stories end up “flat” and boring due to there not being a goal or endpoint, rather the series is up to the author’s feelings and the publications. However, the author does a decent, only decent, job of creating a plot and purpose.
To put it simply, the plot seems to progress, but in reality, it follows the same formula or script where the fml has a change in emotion and the cycle repeats
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for whoever knows how many chapters. The character chemistry is okay, but it also isn’t anything noteworthy due to them only having moments of “father-daughter” romance.
Though the character writing and plot seems decent on the surface, it’s pretty shallow with nothing new happening.
There are some wholesome and cute moments in the manga, but that’s all there is.
Reading Rankings (Portnoy inspired + A Huang-Teizan Original)
10 - God’s penmanship
9 - Must-read. Drop everything else.
8 - Instant bookmark
7 - Entertaining
6 - Good to pass time
5 - Why are you reading this?
4 - Bad.
3 - Typical garbage.
2 - My head hurts.
1 - Retirement is a thought.
0 - “Did they even give you a story?!”
Reviewer’s Rating: 6
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