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Allow me to confess that this is not a bad read, but execution and short duration won't exactly put it on top with some of the finer examples.

The necessary pace for conveyance of such a story is avoided for the sake of quick culmination. The thrill is there, albeit it is questionable how well you'll be able to immerse yourself next to such predictability.

Characters quickly jump into their situational and predetermined roles. There are minor traces of deeper characterization, but are only seen under scrutiny and even as such remains mediocre.

Art doesn't really supplement the positive points of this work. Verily, it ... is detailed and does its job as far as minor aspects are concerned, but in no way does it add to the story. Facial expressions tend to be stoic and unintentionally comical; sort of creates a humorous vibe that has no place in it.

It is cruise-control work in a sense that heavily relies on its end to dumbfound the reader. Problem is that it basically screams atypically-typical finale from the very start, and as such could make one remain unfazed.