Jul 27, 2023
So this was sort of cute but it feels VERY incomplete. For one we don't see them get passed kissing, the summary made it seem like they would but nope it just focuses on the ML trying to make the MC fall in love with him before his 17th birthday which is in 1 month (at the start of the story)
THE FOLLOWING INCLUDES SMALL SPOILERS AS TO WHY IT FEELS INCOMPLETE *********
It felt incomplete because don't get to see their first time, them tell the ML's brother they are in a relationship which was brought up and we see the brother and their relationship
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(brotherly relationship) which made it seem like we would see his brother finding out about them and accepting them or maybe being a bit bratty or overprotective about his younger brother (the ML) finally growing up and getting their first boyfriend.
We also don't get to see their friends finding out especially the girls who were gossiping and making it such a big deal that you would assume they eventually find out and we get to see them deal with that.
Then the friend noticing something is going on between the MC and the ML makes it seem like he would find out and be supportive or something yet that didn't happen. We also don't get to see their first date or even how the MC handles smutty things. It really needed another volume to see all that.
Then there is the whole what college they go to, it is incomplete but the art is really nice!!! and there isn't anything unlikable about the ML.
Reviewer’s Rating: 7
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