Jun 13, 2024
I gave it a 6, but the true core is more complicated than that.
Some aspects deserve a 7-8, and it's not that there are other aspects of 4-5 that drive it to a mean average of 6, but that the first 11 chapters are a pleasant mix of light ecchi and surprisingly wholesome interactions, and then things take an odd turn in 12-14, with 15 seeing some of that and a turnover to the ending arc. It's this overall imbalance and storycrafting jerkiness (in the sense of position, speed, acceleration, jerk, snap, etc.) that comes out at the fore of the elements — the
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composition as a whole rather than the parts that it comprises — that I came away with, rather than the enjoyment of each development or arc, without the time to savor or digest the goings on.
In short, it ended up lacking focus, telling a larger story that seems to have been crammed for time in the last several chapters. Had it remained light ecchi, or been expanded a few (or many) more chapters, then either would have been at least a solid 7. As it stands though: not bad; not good, but not bad.
Reviewer’s Rating: 6
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