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Nov 21, 2013 8:18 AM
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Hey, i was wondering if some people could check this out for me and tell me your thoughts on it. This is my Clannad Amv, the song is Carolina Liar - Show me what i'm waiting for.

Since i don't have a proper channel up and running yet and am using google + i was looking for some third party opinions, self judging isn't usually the best way to go.
Thanks!!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=H8jtFmeZhQo

Mod Edit: Made title descriptive.
LunaNov 25, 2013 9:40 AM
Nov 21, 2013 8:30 AM
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Love the coloring effect, as I am a big fan of the glow video fx.
Great job on transitions, though the flash transition at 32ish seconds should have been shorter, it was hard to see exactly what was happening. just shorten them a bit more next time, and you hit the bell chimes perfect!
when the song starts picking up, I would have liked it being a bit more faster paced, but I guess it is because I edit to faster pace songs :/
I suggest using Raws or extract MKVs to avoid the subtitles, and then using editing to make your own at the part.
God Dammit
I do the cry cry.
Great job though! I want to see more of your work!!
Nov 21, 2013 8:35 AM
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Zelot said:
Love the coloring effect, as I am a big fan of the glow video fx.
Great job on transitions, though the flash transition at 32ish seconds should have been shorter, it was hard to see exactly what was happening. just shorten them a bit more next time, and you hit the bell chimes perfect!
when the song starts picking up, I would have liked it being a bit more faster paced, but I guess it is because I edit to faster pace songs :/
I suggest using Raws or extract MKVs to avoid the subtitles, and then using editing to make your own at the part.
God Dammit
I do the cry cry.
Great job though! I want to see more of your work!!


Thanks for the feedback! I'll check out what you've said and improve next time round.
Nov 25, 2013 8:19 AM
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Hey, i thought i'd ask you guys about my corrected amv, i would ask friends but since they're friends they might not give their 100% honest opinion

What would give give this video out of 10??
?/10

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z5GLUULxxpI

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LunaNov 25, 2013 9:38 AM
Nov 25, 2013 9:30 AM
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Honestly I would give this a 6/10, Its not my thing, but that doesn't mean that its bad.
Nov 25, 2013 9:41 AM
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★★★★★

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Nov 25, 2013 10:15 AM
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Again the colors look great! I wish I had the patience to find a good color corrector (I believe that is how you are adjusting the colors..)
Transitions are always good! Just as I said earlier though, the glow/flash transitions make it much harder to see the what is actually happenin (Unless you are trying for that? Certain editors like doing this, and I am also doing this on one of my current projects)
A part that happened was when the Tsuchikage summoned Madara and you put a lot of these glows in that should have been less strong.
Good effort though, and great edit on this somewhat bland fight!
I did see some great improvment!
7/10
ZelotNov 25, 2013 10:34 AM

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