| Since I'm not able to create a Chapter discussion for chapter 7 I decided to do it Manually. Anyway I've expected that the guy would sacrifice himself in the end Miles away. This is pretty short but I think its great,I think the ending is Happy one and I'm glad they married and had a child together that's Good ending to me. It has its ups and down but ultimately the Message has been conveyed. Also how old are they anyway? That's why Osananajimi are always the best romance :3 |
 |
| I submitted the edit for the additional chapter. It was actually meh imo for the final chapter with the rush but the beginning had a good momentum going on. Just wish this series had more going on. I wouldn't mind an expansion of this. |
 |
Stark700 said: I submitted the edit for the additional chapter. It was actually meh imo for the final chapter with the rush but the beginning had a good momentum going on. Just wish this series had more going on. I wouldn't mind an expansion of this. Yep. Same additional chapters would have been ideal.It just cut to "Four years later" I guess the author just wanted to experiment a little. |
| |
Stark700 said: It was actually meh imo for the final chapter with the rush but the beginning had a good momentum going on. Just wish this series had more going on. I wouldn't mind an expansion of this. I agree too. This had good potential and could've gone on for a while more. Overall though, it's not that bad. |
 |
| Very fvcking fast paced. I was expecting some tragedy tbh. Im wondering if Hitomi's step dad already took Hitomi's virginity. Well wutever |
More topics from this board
Poll: » Taiyou no Hitomi Chapter 6 DiscussionStark700 - Dec 5, 2014 |
0 |
by Stark700
»»
Dec 5, 2014 8:16 AM |
|
Poll: » Taiyou no Hitomi Chapter 5 DiscussionVindstot - Nov 19, 2014 |
0 |
by Vindstot
»»
Nov 19, 2014 2:28 PM |
|
Poll: » Taiyou no Hitomi Chapter 4 DiscussionStark700 - Nov 16, 2014 |
1 |
by NeutralSide
»»
Nov 16, 2014 2:18 AM |
|
Poll: » Taiyou no Hitomi Chapter 3 DiscussionStark700 - Jun 10, 2014 |
1 |
by Vindstot
»»
Jun 10, 2014 11:02 PM |
|
Poll: » Taiyou no Hitomi Chapter 2 Discussiona1oner - Aug 7, 2013 |
3 |
by -Okami
»»
Apr 26, 2014 1:46 PM |