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Sep 4, 7:32 AM
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Same as the previous episode - the writing in this episode is beyond bad, amateurish and tasteless.
Situations in which characters spew out sentences that are there just to be there, without having any intent to provide insight, or progress the story or anything else worth communicating to the viewer.

A disclaimer - I'm watching with original audio and subtitles in English. So, there is a chance something is lost in the translation, although it's hard to imagine what would be lost in sentences that got not place being said in the first place.

Example from this episode: Rintaro our boy, when surprised by what-her-name-I-like-cake as she stands above him when he is laying on a bench outside of the library, says something like: "Ms. Waguri! Weren't you just inside the library" (he saw her there, was too chicken to say hello, just watched from behind a book shelf like a creep, then left without saying a word to her).
Our male MC couldn't believe it that another person, all the while he was sitting (then laying) outside, stuff-my-face-cake girl got up and walked outside - just like he did a couple of minutes ago! This is some weird a$$ writing.

There's a part in their conversation in which Ms.-Waguri-I-am-cake says something to the extent "sorry I can't come, especially when you went out of your way to invite me". Now, if you watched the episode, you'd know that Rintaro way of 'going out of his way' to invite - was sending her a SINGLE TXT. What girl in any world - real or imaginary - would consider a single TXT as an effort worthy of the description of 'going out of the way'?

This show is still on air. It is already completely written, drawn and recorded. I wish it wasn't, and by some magical way - almost miraculous - the writers of the show would read my opinion and perhaps see something in what I'm saying. This is belittling towards their audience. There's no justification for such lazy attempts at writing, at filling time instead of making it interesting.

That's it.
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It’s time to ditch the text file.
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