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Hello,
This is my first time writing a fanfiction, and I'm looking for some opinions, maybe constructive criticism. :) It's going to be a lot of text, so it's not for the faint of heart.
This fanfiction was written with those who have read or watched the original work in mind.

Recommended for easier reading: A link to my fanfiction on fanfiction.net can be found here if you wish to read or follow it there.
Update [04 June 2016]: I have cleaned up all the older chapters (pre-60), fixing typos, grammatical errors and made some minor changes to the writing here and there.
-Charle has been changed to Carla.
-Lines by the mysterious voice are now in italics.

Many thanks to Iridium Rose for beta-reading chapters 61 and onward, helping me improve my work.

SUMMARY




CHAPTER 1
WELCOME TO FAIRY TAIL

CHAPTER 2
THE FIRST JOB

CHAPTER 3
GOOD MORNING, FAIRY TAIL

CHAPTER 4
UNCHAINED

CHAPTER 5
THE FLOW OF MAGIC
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Nov 19, 2015 12:11 PM
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CHAPTER 6
IT’S A TRAP

CHAPTER 7
A DAY OFF

CHAPTER 8
FIVE ADVENTURERS GATHER

CHAPTER 9
JOURNEY TO THE MOUNTAINS

CHAPTER 10
MOUNTAIN TOP RUMBLE
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CHAPTER 11
MEET TEAM NATSU

CHAPTER 12
A PLACE TO CALL HOME

CHAPTER 13
BATTLE OF FAIRY TAIL

CHAPTER 14
THE LIGHTNING GOES DOWN

CHAPTER 15
NATSU’S RESOLUTION
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CHAPTER 16
TOMB RAIDERS

CHAPTER 17
TRIO OF DESTRUCTION

CHAPTER 18
BANISH THE DARKNESS

CHAPTER 19
THUNDER LEGION’S INVITATION

CHAPTER 20
RESCUE MISSION
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CHAPTER 21
NIGHTMARE REPEAT

CHAPTER 22
FIGHT FIRE WITH ICE

CHAPTER 23
STEEL AGAINST SPARKS

CHAPTER 24
BAKE A CAKE

CHAPTER 25
TAMING THE DRAGON
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CHAPTER 26
THUNDER DRAGONS

CHAPTER 27
SQUIRRELS
NEW YEAR’S SPECIAL
FAIRIES IN THE SNOW

CHAPTER 28
OMINOUS CLOUDS

CHAPTER 29
THE OTHER WORLD
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CHAPTER 30
KEY TO EVERLASTING PEACE

CHAPTER 31
DRAGON CHAIN CANNON

CHAPTER 32
PUSH FOR VICTORY

CHAPTER 33
DEFEAT THE KING
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CHAPTER 34
RETURNING HOME

CHAPTER 35
SECOND CAT ON TEAM

CHAPTER 36
MORE SQUIRRELS

CHAPTER 37
GAJEEL’S TRAINING

CHAPTER 38
THE TRAINING CONTINUES
MilenninJun 6, 2016 3:37 PM
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I don't like fairy tail but I liked the first chapter of this .

Coming back to read the rest later .
Wohooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
Nov 26, 2015 7:40 PM

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I like what I've read so far ^w^. Keep up the good work!
Nov 27, 2015 8:10 AM

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CHAPTER 39
MAN VERSUS CAT

VALENTINE’S SPECIAL
PRINCE AND PRINCESS

CHAPTER 40
THE EXECUTIONER

CHAPTER 41
S-CLASS WIZARD SELECTION

CHAPTER 42
DRIP DROP
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Chapter 2 and 3 are good as well .Sorry if I don't read everything at once .

Again ,coming back for more tomorrow .
Wohooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
Nov 30, 2015 1:34 PM
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Keep it up!
Dec 3, 2015 2:48 PM

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Just asking but are you doing this purely for fun or to develop your writing as well ? Should I try and give my opinions on what a pro book should be like ?
Wohooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
Dec 5, 2015 5:15 AM

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I just finished reading this. Milennin, it was so well made! My goodness, I'm so looking forward to the next chapter! This is so awesome!!!
Dec 5, 2015 5:17 AM

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I'm not gonna read it (as I haven't watched enough FT yet) but I recommend uploading it on Fanfiction.net or Archive of Our Own. Makes reading easier as the layouts look better there.
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Crap I forgot about this .Reading some more before I go to sleep .

Edit : I'm on chapter 11 and it's still interesting .Good job so far !!
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Wohooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
Dec 14, 2015 10:20 PM

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I read the first two chapters and I'm liking it so far. I'll read more later c:
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CHAPTER 43
TENROU ISLAND

CHAPTER 44
TITANIA

CHAPTER 45
PROMISE

CHAPTER 46
INVASION

CHAPTER 47
A REASON TO LIVE
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CHAPTER 48
PLAYING WITH DOLLS

CHAPTER 49
REGROUPING

CHAPTER 50
FAIRY GLITTER

CHAPTER 51
ON THE OFFENSIVE
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CHAPTER 52
KNOCKING ON HELL’S DOORS

CHAPTER 53
DAYBREAK ON TENROU ISLAND

CHAPTER 54
VIOLENT WHISPERS
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CHAPTER 55
ACNOLOGIA

CHAPTER 56
SEVEN YEAR GAP

CHAPTER 57
THE NEW GUILD BUILDING
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CHAPTER 58
NUTTY SQUIRRELS

CHAPTER 59
ENTERING THE GAMES

CHAPTER 60
THREE MONTH TRAINING

CHAPTER 61
THE CHOSEN FIVE

CHAPTER 62
CAPITAL OF FIORE
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CHAPTER 63
TAKING RESPONSIBILITY

CHAPTER 64
LET THE GAMES BEGIN

CHAPTER 65
BAD NEWS GOOD NEWS
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This shit is better than the original story lmao
Jan 26, 2016 11:38 PM

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Recuvan said:
This shit is better than the original story lmao

Lol, not sure if I'd agree, but thanks. :)

CHAPTER 66
A TASTE OF ULTIMATE POWER

CHAPTER 67
SMALL IN SIZE HUGE IN SPIRIT

CHAPTER 68
THE STRONGEST TEAM
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Wow, you're clearly passionate about this. Obviously I haven't read all of the chapters, but I might plan to when I have time or when your chapters become popular, ha. You have really good punctuation, grammar, spelling, and vocab - clearly a master novelist hahaha. Good luck if you're still continuing this!

P.S Makarov is a beast!
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CHAPTER 69
CLASH OF THE DRAGON SLAYERS

CHAPTER 70
THE ECLIPSE PROJECT

CHAPTER 71
OPERATION RESCUE LUCY

CHAPTER 72
HELL PALACE
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Milennin said:
Recuvan said:
This shit is better than the original story lmao

Lol, not sure if I'd agree, but thanks. :)


Sadly, it is. Keep up the good work.
Jan 30, 2016 3:15 AM

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I think there are many other websites that would more appreciate your good work.

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ExTamplier said:
I think there are many other websites that would more appreciate your good work.

Yeah, I found out about fanfiction.net a while after I posted it on here. But since there seem a few people on MAL who read this, I don't want to just abandon this thread.

CHAPTER 73
THE GAROU KNIGHTS

CHAPTER 74
FUTURE MEETS THE PRESENT

CHAPTER 75
THE DRAGONS ARE COMING
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I've been keeping up with this since the first post I made here ^.^. And I've really loved how the story has developed. Please keep it up.
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Fuka-chan said:
I've been keeping up with this since the first post I made here ^.^. And I've really loved how the story has developed. Please keep it up.

Glad to hear it has managed to keep your interest so far. :)
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CHAPTER 76
ECLIPSE

CHAPTER 77
RESTORE THE PRESENT

CHAPTER 78
CALM AFTER THE STORM
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CHAPTER 79
HOME SWEET HOME

CHAPTER 80
RECLAIM THE PAST

CHAPTER 81
RACE TO THE FINISH
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CHAPTER 82
I’LL KILL YOU

CHAPTER 83
GOD POWER

CHAPTER 84
THE END OF AN ADVENTURE
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CHAPTER 85
INTO THE WILDERNESS

HALLOWEEN SPECIAL
HOUSE OF HORRORS

CHAPTER 86
RAGE

CHAPTER 87
LOST
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Please don't bump your thread with blank posts. I just had to remove like 15+ posts with nothing on it.
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Tyrel said:
Please don't bump your thread with blank posts. I just had to remove like 15+ posts with nothing on it.

They were chapter updates, but I cleaned them up some while ago, leaving them blank since I update the top posts with them for readability as well so the thread doesn't get clogged with double chapters.
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CHAPTER 88
REUNITED

CHAPTER 89
A NEW START

CHAPTER 90
LIGHTNING
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CHAPTER 42
DRIP DROP


ALTERNATIVE CHAPTER 42
ICE BREAKER

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CHAPTER 43
TENROU ISLAND


ALTERNATIVE CHAPTER 43
TENROU ISLAND

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CHAPTER 44
TITANIA


ALTERNATIVE - CHAPTER 44
SKY MAIDEN

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CHAPTER 45
PROMISE


ALTERNATIVE CHAPTER 45
THE SECOND ROUND

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wow nice story i am in chapter 5
and i am wondering whether to coontinue this or to continue the avatar arc in the manga
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Moemasu said:
wow nice story i am in chapter 5
and i am wondering whether to coontinue this or to continue the avatar arc in the manga

Thanks, but what do you mean by that? The Avatar arc is one of the newest arcs in Fairy Tail... this story begins somewhere between Phantom Lord arc and Battle of Fairy Tail arc, near the beginning of the series.
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Milennin said:
Moemasu said:
wow nice story i am in chapter 5
and i am wondering whether to coontinue this or to continue the avatar arc in the manga

Thanks, but what do you mean by that? The Avatar arc is one of the newest arcs in Fairy Tail... this story begins somewhere between Phantom Lord arc and Battle of Fairy Tail arc, near the beginning of the series.

i dont read two things at once...
so sometime i may switch in between.
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CHAPTER 46
INVASION


ALTERNATIVE CHAPTER 46
INVASION

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CHAPTER 47
A REASON TO LIVE


ALTERNATIVE CHAPTER 47
TIME TO SPLIT

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CHAPTER 48
PLAYING WITH DOLLS

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