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Oct 9, 2023 3:57 AM
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https://medibang.com/mpc/episodes/e92310090217423940024400790/

I made a webcomic and I decided to share it here. I really really want to see your thoughts about it. It's kinda silly but I hope its enjoyable.
Depends on the weapon, and the man.
Oct 9, 2023 4:46 AM
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lol I liked the flashback with the fireflies it was sweet and how it merged well with the present action. It's always cool when there's a parallel of a past thing and present thing which are similar in some ways and completely different in others.

Art style is actually very pleasant, not grating or irksome like some others. Storytelling is quick and to the point although obviously I have 100% no idea whats going on being the first one I read. I'd be interested in knowing more for sure from this.
Oct 9, 2023 11:05 AM
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Reply to Shishio-kun
lol I liked the flashback with the fireflies it was sweet and how it merged well with the present action. It's always cool when there's a parallel of a past thing and present thing which are similar in some ways and completely different in others.

Art style is actually very pleasant, not grating or irksome like some others. Storytelling is quick and to the point although obviously I have 100% no idea whats going on being the first one I read. I'd be interested in knowing more for sure from this.
@Shishio-kun Thanks man, I really appreciate your reply and taking your time to read my stuff. I'm genuinely humbled by your kind words. It really means a lot to hear that you found the storytelling and also the art style pleasing. Thank you for reading!
Depends on the weapon, and the man.
Nov 5, 2023 1:07 AM
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I love the design of the snail man. The panel where he's standing over the guy in the rain is amazing.

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Nov 5, 2023 5:23 AM
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I love the design of the snail man. The panel where he's standing over the guy in the rain is amazing.
@DreamWindow

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Nov 10, 2023 3:39 PM
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You snailed it dude.

Wait I've got another one..

That was... hard as snails.

H E H E

Loved the lil pauses and facial expressions, it's this weird stuff that'd I'd totally watch if it were animated, sadly I'm a bit lazy when it comes to reading things c:

Nov 11, 2023 7:05 AM
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Definitely enjoyable, nice work. Love how the fireflies surrounding him on the latest episode shifted to the missile scene.
I especially like Episode 3, "it looks like my ex-wife" had me laughing and the introduction to the detectives was good. Hope to read more! :)
Nov 11, 2023 3:12 PM
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It's really good caught me off guard though
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Dec 12, 2023 3:52 AM
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Hey guys, I really, really appreciate all your awesome feedback—it made me blushy tomatoes. Hoping the skies will bless you all!! If life doesn't get much busier, I'll be back drawing!!!
Depends on the weapon, and the man.
Dec 24, 2023 10:40 PM
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You have talent in making creative perspectives!
Dec 25, 2023 7:42 PM

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the series have potential. but why the japanese sound effects?
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Dec 27, 2023 12:57 PM
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lol I liked the flashback with the fireflies it was sweet and how it merged well with the present action. It's always cool when there's a parallel of a past thing and present thing which are similar in some ways and completely different in others.

Art style is actually very pleasant, not grating or irksome like some others. Storytelling is quick and to the point although obviously I have 100% no idea whats going on being the first one I read. I'd be interested in knowing more for sure from this.
It's great that you enjoyed the flashback scene with the fireflies! The way it connected with the present action added a beautiful depth to the storyline. Having parallels between past and present scenarios that are both similar and different can be intriguing, right?

The art style seems to complement the story well and doesn't feel overwhelming, which is always a plus. Even though this is your first read and you're a bit in the dark about the plot, it sounds like you're definitely curious to explore more about this story. Keep digging in, and it might unfold some fascinating narratives as you progress!
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It's great that you enjoyed the flashback scene with the fireflies! The way it connected with the present action added a beautiful depth to the storyline. Having parallels between past and present scenarios that are both similar and different can be intriguing, right?

The art style seems to complement the story well and doesn't feel overwhelming, which is always a plus. Even though this is your first read and you're a bit in the dark about the plot, it sounds like you're definitely curious to explore more about this story. Keep digging in, and it might unfold some fascinating narratives as you progress!
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Oct 6, 10:38 AM

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I still think about this and re-read this chapter a lot. This good stuff should be pinned.
Oct 6, 5:12 PM
Nostalgia Rules!

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I once had an infestation of snails in my front yard back some years ago, so I can confirm they can indeed be punks! >.<

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