Dec 15, 2023
5.9/10
1,2,3,4… how many chapters until you decide enough is enough? I ask this question every time I pick up or continually read a webcomic, and it’s finally time to move on from this mediocre weird-fest of a story.
There’s a seemingly reoccurring trend in every webcomic: The author does not think ahead, so the plot is stagnant. In ten chapters, there are absolutely no signs of development or character backstory/exposition; this could be excused for, the short chapter lengths, but it’s still disappointing nonetheless.
This manga sets its mood prominently from the premise, but it fails to keep it — there is no consistency within
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the developments. At one moment, the author decides to play off the gimmick, eternally stuck in a perpetual plotless story, but there are rare occasions where the chapters are used to develop the characters or story — poorly — but the following chapter pretends the former chapter never happened.
This is yet another typical plotless webcomic, and I don’t see the merit in reading this, especially since the author has absolutely no direction for the story or the ability to stick to the premise.
Reading Rankings (Portnoy inspired + A Huang-Teizan Original)
10 - God’s penmanship
9 - Must-read. Drop everything else.
8 - Instant bookmark
7 - Entertaining
6 - Good to pass time
5 - Why are you reading this?
4 - Bad.
3 - Typical garbage.
2 - My head hurts.
1 - Retirement is a thought.
0 - “Did they even give you a story?!”
Reviewer’s Rating: 5
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