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Sep 26, 2013 7:37 PM
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Sep 27, 2013 5:09 PM
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So this is my manga idea for my story "The Magicians Book"

In this I'll explain everything that I thought of and explain certain points clearly in spoiler tags, I'll add some images as i go on.

Anyway, let's go.

The story goes around the life of our protagonists Toshiro Hikari. His parent's were world class magicians, known around the world. During one of their tricks they suddenly disappeared leaving Toshiro alone to be an orphan.

So as he grows, he studies "magic" tricks living with his cousin and his family.Throughout school he's seen as a complete outcast, teased for his interest in magic. Though he can't do much, his cousin loos out for him since he's a senior, even saving Toshiro in a fight between bullies.

Toshiro upset from being weak and being tease decides to go visit his parents grave where he sees another person there who tells him , he will be a great magician one day, and gives him hope. Toshiro with hope in his heart decides to go visit his old home to see if he can find out what happened to his parents and finds a book, but the things written in the book aren't your everyday magic tricks.. these well spells and Toshiro was a son of two Mages.

After finding the book, he soon practises in magic which soon attracts the attention of the M.E.U (Magical Enforcement Units) who take Toshiro to the land of magic, to the magic world to the world's biggest school of magic Mahou Tsukai Academy. Before he goes he tells his cousin farewll, and to his surprise Kona is a son of a Forbidden Scroll Mage and says he'll meet him soon.

Toshiro is soon evaluated though he seems to be a weak mage he is the son of the world's strongest mages and the holder of the 2nd Forbiden Scroll

Forbiden Scrolls


Toshiro is put into a class of regular mages until finalization has been determined to see if he's qualified to join the class of Forbidden Scroll Mages,there he'll meet friends, kids like him who were treated different for loving magic which gives him another reason to fight, after a while he's put in the class of Forbidden Scroll Mages.

Ounce a student, he's introduce to the other class of Forbiden Scroll Mages are gathered to train to be the best mages, only the best will rule. Some are there for power, some are there to represent their families, some have no choice. And they're all more powerfully than Toshiro.

As the new kid it's not an easy ride especially the kid without a assistant. Due to joining late Toshiro is stuck with Azami Miyazaki , due to her personality, no one chose her predicting she wasn't ready for this. But Azami was an excellent fighter and swordsman and like other assistants possessed a special trait, Toshiro the eager and determined mage with the shy but deadly swordsman. Their journey begins

After some training and relaxing, Toshiro and Azami realize their not much different, both treated differently for bring themselves, both wanting to become stronger. To that Toshiro promises Azami they'll become stronger together. And they'll be the strongest ever.

The school is now getting ready for the Winter Exams a competition to see who the sgrongest, cleverest, and best mages in the entire school are. During these exams there will be one on one battles between mages, and two v two battles between forbidden scroll mages, if they can win. Just because a mage isn't apart of the Forbidden Scroll doesn't make them weak.

Before the battles begin Kona approaches Toshiro telling him about his parents and their past and why he didn't tell him about magic and the dangers but Toshiro understands..

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That's enough anymore would just be spoiler.. So you get the story now correct? If need I'll provide a detailed description of character personalities and whatnot.
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Sep 27, 2013 5:17 PM
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You should totally do that.

I've done story ideas ect. ect.

I'd love to help.

I assuming the one who tells him those words at the grave is important in the future.
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Sep 27, 2013 5:20 PM
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Diran-kun said:
You should totally do that.

I've done story ideas ect. ect.

I'd love to help.

I assuming the one who tells him those words at the grave is important in the future.


Yes, he really is. :0
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Sep 28, 2013 3:56 AM
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Ok so I edited the plot :0
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Sep 28, 2013 7:12 AM
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err well I already posted this once, but I just scribbled this down on a whim in a thread about ideas for anime:



Also have some relevant facts about the setting, character details and stuffs on my comp but it's all unfinished and just done spontaneously.
Sep 28, 2013 7:21 AM
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A young boy, Hiroshi Sajagami, woke up in bed with both of his legs severed. He had a wire connecting his pelvis to the roof. The one responsible is a female organism taking the form of a human. Her name is Mary Myo. Hiroshi can't move. He will forever remain in his room with Mary.


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Sep 28, 2013 7:28 AM
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Diran-kun said:
A young boy, Hiroshi Sajagami, woke up in bed with both of his legs severed. He had a wire connecting his pelvis to the roof. The one responsible is a female organism taking the form of a human. Her name is Mary Myo. Hiroshi can't move. He will forever remain in his room with Mary.


I win all the awards.


That actually sounds good.
Sep 28, 2013 7:36 AM
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_Chimo said:
Diran-kun said:
A young boy, Hiroshi Sajagami, woke up in bed with both of his legs severed. He had a wire connecting his pelvis to the roof. The one responsible is a female organism taking the form of a human. Her name is Mary Myo. Hiroshi can't move. He will forever remain in his room with Mary.


I win all the awards.


That actually sounds good.


Mary wouldn't be a Loli, though. It wouldn't suit her. Hiroshi is probably between the age of 7-15.

Also, can you access the HB forums? I can't get through at all.
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Diran-kun said:
_Chimo said:
Diran-kun said:
A young boy, Hiroshi Sajagami, woke up in bed with both of his legs severed. He had a wire connecting his pelvis to the roof. The one responsible is a female organism taking the form of a human. Her name is Mary Myo. Hiroshi can't move. He will forever remain in his room with Mary.


I win all the awards.


That actually sounds good.


Mary wouldn't be a Loli, though. It wouldn't suit her. Hiroshi is probably between the age of 7-15.

Also, can you access the HB forums? I can't get through at all.


You should actually write this, it'd be interesting to read.

Yeah, they offline right now. Been off and on for the past few days, the amount of people on the forum has quadrupled since the new forum was released. (Server overload)
Sep 28, 2013 7:45 AM
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_Chimo said:
Diran-kun said:
_Chimo said:
Diran-kun said:
A young boy, Hiroshi Sajagami, woke up in bed with both of his legs severed. He had a wire connecting his pelvis to the roof. The one responsible is a female organism taking the form of a human. Her name is Mary Myo. Hiroshi can't move. He will forever remain in his room with Mary.


I win all the awards.


That actually sounds good.


Mary wouldn't be a Loli, though. It wouldn't suit her. Hiroshi is probably between the age of 7-15.

Also, can you access the HB forums? I can't get through at all.


You should actually write this, it'd be interesting to read.

Yeah, they offline right now. Been off and on for the past few days, the amount of people on the forum has quadrupled since the new forum was released. (Server overload)

protip: http://www.isitdownrightnow.com/
how to check if it's just you or if a site is actually down
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New HB Forum Layout > MAL's current layout

Endless scrolling wins it. Still don't like their list layout, though.

I was having a full Imouto/Loli discussion as well before it went down.

I might actually write it, but I have next to no ideas. It would probably be a parody with no actual meaning to anything.
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HaXXspetten said:
_Chimo said:
Diran-kun said:
_Chimo said:
Diran-kun said:
A young boy, Hiroshi Sajagami, woke up in bed with both of his legs severed. He had a wire connecting his pelvis to the roof. The one responsible is a female organism taking the form of a human. Her name is Mary Myo. Hiroshi can't move. He will forever remain in his room with Mary.


I win all the awards.


That actually sounds good.


Mary wouldn't be a Loli, though. It wouldn't suit her. Hiroshi is probably between the age of 7-15.

Also, can you access the HB forums? I can't get through at all.


You should actually write this, it'd be interesting to read.

Yeah, they offline right now. Been off and on for the past few days, the amount of people on the forum has quadrupled since the new forum was released. (Server overload)

protip: http://www.isitdownrightnow.com/
how to check if it's just you or if a site is actually down


I know that.

Diran-kun said:
New HB Forum Layout > MAL's current layout

Endless scrolling wins it. Still don't like their list layout, though.

I was having a full Imouto/Loli discussion as well before it went down.

I might actually write it, but I have next to no ideas. It would probably be a parody with no actual meaning to anything.


Don't forget the IM threads, posts come up without having to refresh.
Their lists are getting revamped, along with a Manga and VN list.

Also, if you do write it, don't make it silly; it would ruin everything. Can't have that tension between chapters.
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Hopefully the lists are good.

I'll probably write a prologue later. Yeah, IM is awesome.

It would be good if you could help improve it if I post it later.
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Diran-kun said:
Hopefully the lists are good.

I'll probably write a prologue later. Yeah, IM is awesome.

It would be good if you could help improve it if I post it later.


They have a preview, which I don't have a link to... I'll have to ask David for it on Skype.

I don't know much when it comes to writing, the only novel I've re-read multiple times is the Hunger Games series... But, sure. I could try to pitch in ideas.
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Sure, thanks.

Well, out of all my subjects, English is the only one I'm not in the bottom set for.

I'll take a shot at it later, but I suck at novels.
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Diran-kun said:
Sure, thanks.

Well, out of all my subjects, English is the only one I'm not in the bottom set for.

I'll take a shot at it later, but I suck at novels.


Do you have a Skype? It would be easier to talk that way.
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_Chimo said:
Diran-kun said:
Sure, thanks.

Well, out of all my subjects, English is the only one I'm not in the bottom set for.

I'll take a shot at it later, but I suck at novels.


Do you have a Skype? It would be easier to talk that way.
Yeah. I'll just sign in.

I don't think this can be serious and good at once.

My username is TWDaryl.
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HaXXspetten said:
err well I already posted this once, but I just scribbled this down on a whim in a thread about ideas for anime:



Also have some relevant facts about the setting, character details and stuffs on my comp but it's all unfinished and just done spontaneously.


I like it.. :0

So I'm curious will this has some Yuri? :0
Do you need an illustrator? Or can you draw?
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CallMeKurisuchan said:
HaXXspetten said:
err well I already posted this once, but I just scribbled this down on a whim in a thread about ideas for anime:



Also have some relevant facts about the setting, character details and stuffs on my comp but it's all unfinished and just done spontaneously.


I like it.. :0

So I'm curious will this has some Yuri? :0
Do you need an illustrator? Or can you draw?


Yuri is good.
Also, you can draw. :o
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_Chimo said:
CallMeKurisuchan said:
HaXXspetten said:
err well I already posted this once, but I just scribbled this down on a whim in a thread about ideas for anime:



Also have some relevant facts about the setting, character details and stuffs on my comp but it's all unfinished and just done spontaneously.


I like it.. :0

So I'm curious will this has some Yuri? :0
Do you need an illustrator? Or can you draw?


Yuri is good.
Also, you can draw. :o


Yes but I don't have any pictures up yet, I'm exceptionally well. :0 I've developed a style that's similar to Ken Akamtsu.
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Well, here you go.

It's horrible and a mess.

It's pretty cringeworthy.



Chapter One would take place 5 years prior to these events.
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Diran-kun said:
Well, here you go.

It's horrible and a mess.

It's pretty cringeworthy.



Chapter One would take place 5 years prior to these events.


Pretty ok... it is kinda confusing. :0
I'll reread it though, add more.

Anyone have anymore insight on my manga idea? :0 I highly appreciate it.
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It is really confusing.

I can't really make it clear who's talking with narration, and I didn't want narration the the prologue.

Here's a re-post with who's saying what next to their lines.

Of course, all the narration is Hiroshi's thoughts. He only has one line in speech.

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Sep 28, 2013 2:42 PM
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CallMeKurisuchan said:
_Chimo said:
CallMeKurisuchan said:
HaXXspetten said:
err well I already posted this once, but I just scribbled this down on a whim in a thread about ideas for anime:



Also have some relevant facts about the setting, character details and stuffs on my comp but it's all unfinished and just done spontaneously.


I like it.. :0

So I'm curious will this has some Yuri? :0
Do you need an illustrator? Or can you draw?


Yuri is good.
Also, you can draw. :o


Yes but I don't have any pictures up yet, I'm exceptionally well. :0 I've developed a style that's similar to Ken Akamtsu.

Yuri is always phun, not sure that would really fit the theme though. Think it'd make more sense to leave it at shoujo-ai.

and no, my artistic talent is basically zero :/
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Just going to bump this thread. :0
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