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Dec 3, 2012 10:21 PM
#21
Name of thread: The hero returning alive: Chapter 1 Name of involved Characters: Hai (Demise) Shadow (Yoko) URL Link to thread:http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=521673&redirect=1#post0 Hai: 80 sp Shadow: 80 sp |
BillzorDec 4, 2012 10:21 AM
"If you can't accept the worst - what else will you accept?" "People like to tell me darkness is the absence of light, so i tell them - darkness can only be found in the presence of light" - Amane Chiyo |
Dec 4, 2012 9:19 PM
#22
name: I want to be the best i can be (eoisode a chance incounter) involved characters: Chikusa, Raysha, Rikudo, Naoru http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=503015&show=100 [starting on page six] Chikusa: 100 Raysha: 100 Rukudo: 120 Naoru: 120 |
TaizenKyoDec 10, 2012 4:05 PM
I miss rping here..... |
Dec 10, 2012 12:53 PM
#23
Name a chance meeting Involved charecters raysha and hiro http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=525366 Raysha: 70 Hiro: 70 |
TaizenKyoDec 10, 2012 4:38 PM
Dec 10, 2012 1:04 PM
#24
Name: Between us Brothers Involved Characters: Rikudo & Naoru Chapter 3 Rikudo - 90sp Naoru - 120sp ~Shadow |
Shadow543Dec 11, 2012 1:59 AM
Dec 11, 2012 1:12 AM
#25
Name of thread: Azmaria's Story Chapter 2: The Rescue Name of involved Characters: Azmaria (Jyenh) Fei; Kurou; Aion (temporary story NPCs) URL Link to thread: http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=505051&show=20 ~You can just post the link without the [url] brackets and MAL with automatically hyper link it. If you wanted to URL something else, like Azmaria's Story Chapter 2: The Rescue Then you type -> [ url=http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=505051&show=20]Azmaria's Story Chapter 2: The Rescue[/url ] Without the spaces. Azmaria - 100sp ~ Shadow |
Shadow543Dec 11, 2012 2:19 AM
"I come for all who grow, crawl, and walk. I am the perfect hunter. In the end, I am the victor." |
Dec 13, 2012 8:04 PM
#26
Name of thread bandit at large strike of the deadly assassin Name of involved characters raysha (me) kirachi ,village chief (temporary npc) URL link to the thread http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=510013&show=0 Raysha - 140sp (+50 time bonus) ~ Shadow |
Shadow543Dec 15, 2012 5:33 PM
Dec 14, 2012 3:09 PM
#27
Name of thread: Azmaria's Story Chapter 3: Preparation Name of involved Characters: Azmaria (Jyenh) Fei; Kurou; Aion (temporary story NPCs) URL Link to thread: Posts #29-#34 Azmaria - 70sp ~ Shadow |
Shadow543Dec 15, 2012 5:30 PM
"I come for all who grow, crawl, and walk. I am the perfect hunter. In the end, I am the victor." |
Dec 17, 2012 4:38 AM
#28
Name of thread: The Mystery of the sensory kunoichi Name of character involved: Miyuki, Chikuma (NPC) Link to thread: http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=513625 (Episode 2, Post# 7+) Miyuki: 80 |
TaizenKyoDec 17, 2012 7:05 PM
"Just like a person holding a sword trying to protect something. That maybe one's life, or place in society, or reputation, things that one loves, things that one believes; it matters not if it's good or bad, the will to 'protect it' does not change."- yoruichi |
Dec 22, 2012 10:31 PM
#29
Name of thread: The hero returning alive. Name of character involved: Demise (Haissem), Yoko (Shadow), Miki (NPC) Link to thread: (Episode 2, Post #20-37, not finished)http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=521673&show=20 Hai - 180 sp Shadow 130sp |
baxter09Dec 22, 2012 11:15 PM
"If you can't accept the worst - what else will you accept?" "People like to tell me darkness is the absence of light, so i tell them - darkness can only be found in the presence of light" - Amane Chiyo |
Dec 26, 2012 1:04 AM
#30
Name of thread: Between Us Brothers Name of characters involved: Rikudo & Naoru Link to thread: Chapter 4 Name of thread: Count Your Chickens... Name of characters involved: Naoru Link to thread: Count Your Chickens Between Us Brothers Rikudo - 50sp (CONGRATULATIONS ON 6000SP) Naoru - 100sp Count Your Chickens... (...before some cunt steals them.) Naoru - 30sp (Mostly because of the chickens and the fact I liked the theme) (Editors Note: Wat did I just read...?) ~Shadow |
Shadow543Dec 27, 2012 11:31 PM
Dec 27, 2012 10:20 PM
#31
Name of the thread: The Problems With Having a Team Name of Characters Involved: Isao(panda) Haruka(Tali) Link To Thread:(Episode 2 Tali and Panda are done. Jimmy and Nyabn are still going) http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=513917&show=40 Isao - 180sp Haruka - 140sp *vomits* ~Shadow |
Shadow543Dec 27, 2012 11:28 PM
Dec 28, 2012 9:41 PM
#32
Name of the thread: Survival 101 Name of Characters Involved: Hiro (Artemis - Shin_Sekai) Kaori (NPC) Link To Thread:http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=526652 (Story not finished due to character changes. Marking based on present story.) TO THE CHUNIN EXAMSSSSSS Hiro (Artemis) - 120sp ~Shadow |
Shadow543Jan 1, 2013 12:26 AM
"If you can't accept the worst - what else will you accept?" "People like to tell me darkness is the absence of light, so i tell them - darkness can only be found in the presence of light" - Amane Chiyo |
Dec 29, 2012 12:12 AM
#33
Name of thread: The Awakening (Closed Thread) Name of involved Characters: Blitz (Zanta) URL Link to thread: http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=538290&show=0#post1 Very nice 'Awakening' I look forward to seeing Blitz in action. Random. Capitals. All. Over. The. Place. Random. Punctuation. ARAARARARHGHGHAWALJLGHSL *Foams at the mount* Blitz - 50sp ~Shadow |
Shadow543Dec 31, 2012 11:48 PM
[center]"Gentlemen, all I ask for is war. A war so grand as to make Hell itself tremble. Gentlemen, I ask you as fellow brothers in arms, what is it you really want? Do you wish for further war as I do? Do you wish for a merciless, bloody war? A war whose fury is built with iron, and lightning, and fire? Do you ask for war to sweep in like a tempest, leaving not even ravens to scavenge from this Earth?!" - The Major. |
Dec 29, 2012 12:35 AM
#34
ki hut(open) ki*as of now* http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=537392 I cannot mark this thread in good conscious in relation to the standards set by the other members of the club. Please take a look at the other threads in the club and that have been handed in inside this thread if you wish to see why. 'This is a club for hardcore RPers' - TaizenKyo ~Shadow |
frogotenJan 4, 2013 3:06 PM
..... :'( |
Dec 29, 2012 3:15 PM
#35
Name of thread: A Formidable Memory [Character Arc] Name of involved Characters: Shion (Main Character) URL Link to thread: http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=530914 Good writing Rai, I enjoyed reading it. Bunny-rai-bonus activate! Shion - 150sp (+50 Rai bonus) ~Shadow |
Shadow543Dec 31, 2012 11:42 PM
Jan 2, 2013 11:22 PM
#36
Thread Name: The Deadliest of Sins Characters: Etsuko Yamaguchi URL: http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=531888 SP Awarded: 500 Full breakdown of each post: 1- 4/5= 40 SP. One point shy of a full mark because the bulk of the post consisted of a flashback, not that it’s necessarily a bad thing. On a side note, who would've thought torture could be so beautifully written? 2- 4/5=40 SP. No complaints about the writing however, there isn’t a clear purpose as to why Etsuko was sent on the mission. Is it personal or was she sent by the village? It does let the reader speculate some as to why it unfolded that way. 3- 5/5= 50 SP. A good blend between the past and present, tying your character’s emotions to the situation she faced. Although short, it had the sense of being “complete”. 4- 3/5 = 30 SP. This post was a little hard to follow for me especially during the flashback. There were also very minor grammatical hiccups. 5- 3/5 = 30 SP. While simple to read, it just raised a few questions. Why does a Genin have such a connection? Why did Etsuko state that she will not go to the Death village then end up going? Maybe I’m being picky, but the post felt too ambiguous. Chapter 1 Total: 190 SP 6- 5/5 = 50 SP. I guess that explains my questions from before? (lol) Clear, cut, and straight to the point. 7- 3/5 = 30 SP. Not much going on aside from observation and reminiscing. Also the last bit about the bar confused me. Exactly what happened in the last sentence? 8- 4/5 = 40 SP. I felt the battle was a tad short and would’ve expected a little more dialogue between the two. 9- 4/5 = 40 SP. I could’ve done without the flashback but it was good comic relief and shed some light into her already darkened past. I enjoyed the riddle part! 10- 5/5 = 50 SP. Quite possibly the most enjoyable post in the thread. I definitely see an evolution of sorts from Etsuko and the clone, she eerily reminds me of a little sister from Bioshock (random video game reference). Chapter 2 Total: 210 SP 11- 3/5 = 30 SP. I felt like this was more of a transition than an introduction to another chapter. It could have been combined with the previous post. 12- 3/5 = 30 SP. A little stagnant until the end where things really started to pick up. 13- 4/5 = 40 SP. Another fight I would have liked to have seen further developed, especially being that she wields a katana. Chapter 3 Total: 100 SP Overall a good read. I will be asking to join you in the thread sometime in the future~ |
MotionBlueJan 3, 2013 7:37 AM
Hey you! Yes you! Do you like: Dragon Ball? |
Jan 3, 2013 6:47 AM
#37
Name of thread: Team 2-Orime: A Meeting Between Two Souls Name of involved Characters: Hyuga Shion (Main), Naoru (Toxic's chara, Artemis (Shin's chara) URL Link to thread: http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=531444 Syrai: 400 SP Unrated: 200 SP Shin: 70 SP Detailed breakdown of each post: 1-(Syrai) 3/5 = 30 SP. Great use of music to fit the post, I thought it was a perfect match. On the other hand, for an intro post, it’s a little weak in a sense that this doesn't really show what/who/ your character is or their purpose which I’m sure it will be revealed later. 2- (Unrated) 2/5 = 20 SP. You don’t have to describe your characters features if you posted a picture in the character thread (I did a little lurking) unless it’s related to fighting or plot driven. Pretty simple post. 3- (Syrai) 4/5 = 40 SP. Good use of dialogue to retort back. Just a few minor hiccups hurts this post by a smidge. 4- (Unrated) 3/5 = 30 SP. Pretty standard response. 5- (Syrai) 3/5 = 30 SP. Gonna give it a standard score for the dialogue and a bit of action towards the end. 6- (Unrated) 2/5 = 20 SP. The wording could use some revising. The part where Naoru falls from the tree feels like a run on sentence. Try using more commas and spaces between each action so it doesn’t read like a soup of words. 7- (Syrai) 5/5 = 50 SP. Good transition from mere dialogue to the plot moving forward. 8- (Unrated) 3/5 =30 SP. Never leave a lady alone! All jokes aside, there’s no need to explain why your character takes a certain action unless it has something to do with a particular ability. (Hiding in the tree) 9- (Syrai) 2/5 = 20 SP. This post felt like it was dragging things a bit. If the enemy is coming why not follow with their actually appearance or an attack/action? You could have added this to the previous post. 10- (Unrated) 2/5 = 20 SP. Also feels like its dragging a little. '' I see then shouldn't be a problem, if they can't use potentially destructive jutsu... I will always play as the greatest of half's, regardless of the situation.'' (I don’t quite get what you mean.) 11- (Syrai) 1/5 = 10 SP. Feels redundant and could have also been a part of the previous post. 12- (Unrated) 1/5 = 10 SP. More or less the same as above. Also, Hastily wait? That’s quite the contradiction you have going there….. 13- (Syrai) 3/5 = 30 SP. Good transition to break from the redundancy. Solid post. 14- (Unrated) 1/5 = 10 SP. Wanted to see a little more back and forth, and it was a fairly short post. 15- (Shin) 1/5 = 10 SP. A fairly weak introduction post for your character. What was the point of her even being there in the first place? 16- (Syrai) 5/5 = 50 SP. Excellent post! A good balance between action and dialogue and your tactically engaging the enemy and not posting a one hit kill. 17- (Unrated) 1/5 = 10 SP. There could have been so much more interaction between your character and Shin’s. The post just seems unfinished. 18- (Shin) 1/5 = 10 SP. I understand it’s a response, but add a little more substance to it. Back and forth dialogue just doesn’t cut it. 19- (Syrai) 4/5 = 40 SP. Just a few grammatical hiccups hurt this post. 20- (Unrated) 1/5 = 10 SP. I guess it’s hard to really add much when you are locked in a battle with one opponent, but there’s certainly more that can occur besides a one liner. 21- (Shin) 3/5 = 30 SP. Better, just a tad bit short. 22- (Syrai) 4/5 = 40 SP. Minor grammatical hiccups but much like the previous post, very good. 23- (Unrated) 3/5 = 30 SP. Better, there is more of a balance between dialogue and action. 24- (Shin) 1/5 = 10 SP. She couldn’t done a lot more than just shout at Artemis to stop. Just feels unfinished. 25- (Syrai) 4/5 = 40 SP. Solid post and normally I would just go with the base score of 3 but I know how it is to move the story forward so I’ll add more SP for that. 26- (Unrated) 1/5 = 10 SP. Don’t be afraid to use Syrai’s npc’s to have a conversation with your character, you can develop your posts further instead of writing them like a step by step guide. 27- (Shin) 1/5 = 10 SP. Nothing much going on except for the arrival of your character at the manor. 28- (Syrai) 2/5 = 20 SP. Not bad, just too heavy on the dialogue. Doesn’t feel like the episode/chapter is finished too which kinda leaves my head scratching a little. You guys should communicate more between your characters in order to build a more coherent story. Keep up the good work! Name of thread: Hyuuga Family Secrets (Syrai-super-happy-fun-SP-thread) Name of involved Characters: Hyuga Shion (Main) and Hyuga Miki/Mami (Shadow) URL Link to thread: http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=535596 |
MotionBlueJan 3, 2013 11:13 AM
Jan 3, 2013 12:24 PM
#38
Name of thread: The Mystery of the sensory kunoichi Name of characters involved: Miyuki Url to thread: http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=513625 (Episode 3) 80 SP |
TaizenKyoJan 3, 2013 1:34 PM
"Just like a person holding a sword trying to protect something. That maybe one's life, or place in society, or reputation, things that one loves, things that one believes; it matters not if it's good or bad, the will to 'protect it' does not change."- yoruichi |
Jan 3, 2013 10:08 PM
#39
Name of thread: Getting the gear to be Great.... Name of involved Characters: Blitz (Zantaboan) URL Link to thread: http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=541092 I wanted to give a bit more with how well you are writing, but the contents of the thread don't really allow. I hope this is enough to keep you going past the initial start up phase ^^ Blitz - 50sp ~Shadow |
Shadow543Jan 7, 2013 4:07 AM
[center]"Gentlemen, all I ask for is war. A war so grand as to make Hell itself tremble. Gentlemen, I ask you as fellow brothers in arms, what is it you really want? Do you wish for further war as I do? Do you wish for a merciless, bloody war? A war whose fury is built with iron, and lightning, and fire? Do you ask for war to sweep in like a tempest, leaving not even ravens to scavenge from this Earth?!" - The Major. |
Jan 4, 2013 4:39 AM
#40
Name of thread: Chapter 4: Unawares Name of involved Characters: Azmaria (Jyenh) & Fei (NPC) URL Link to thread: http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=505051&show=20 You missed the bonus points for putting a YT video of Amaranth in when you mentioned it. Edit it in now and I cut you. Azmaria - 40sp ~Shadow |
Shadow543Jan 7, 2013 4:12 AM
"I come for all who grow, crawl, and walk. I am the perfect hunter. In the end, I am the victor." |
Jan 4, 2013 10:00 AM
#41
Name of Thread: Clash of the Elements Characters Involved : Kasei (bax), Rayasha (miku) link: http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=535876&show=0 Kasei: 80 Rayasha: 80 My name is Psynergi, i approve of this message~ |
PsynergiJan 4, 2013 10:06 AM
Jan 13, 2013 7:27 AM
#42
Name of thread: Blitz Follows Trouble so Follow Blitz Name of involved Characters: Blitz(Zantaboan) URL Link to thread: http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=545511&show=0#post1 Nice to see some action. Still not used to your writing style though. Blitz - 100sp ~Shadow |
Shadow543Jan 16, 2013 3:31 AM
[center]"Gentlemen, all I ask for is war. A war so grand as to make Hell itself tremble. Gentlemen, I ask you as fellow brothers in arms, what is it you really want? Do you wish for further war as I do? Do you wish for a merciless, bloody war? A war whose fury is built with iron, and lightning, and fire? Do you ask for war to sweep in like a tempest, leaving not even ravens to scavenge from this Earth?!" - The Major. |
Jan 13, 2013 7:50 AM
#43
Name of thread: I want to be the best i can be Ep 4 (starting at post 158 i think) Involved characters: Ruseo and fallen_saint Url: http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=503015&show=140 I would have liked to see more description on most of the posts. Just adding one or two sentences can make a big difference. I have to thank you Rus, for doing a thread with Fallen to get him started in the RP. Chikusa - 80sp Makura - 100sp (+20 for first thread bonus) ~Shadow |
Shadow543Jan 16, 2013 3:45 AM
I miss rping here..... |
Jan 16, 2013 1:25 AM
#44
Name of thread: "The Cobra Unit" Story Thread [Invite Only] Name of involved characters: Chuugo Chiaki (Bill), Nande Genkotsu (Kyo), Yukiko Mochizuki (Motion) Url: http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=502481&show=80#msg18674820 You idiots are crazy. So fucking crazy. Especially the boss. Fuck she's crazy. CRAZY. *Brands you all with Crazy* Also probably one of the best threads I have read. Chiaki - 500sp Nande - 500sp (-100sp for making the club motto "Blame Shadow" +100sp for that one night we spent together in Paris.) Yukiko - 500sp ~Shadow |
Shadow543Jan 21, 2013 7:22 PM
Jan 16, 2013 6:34 AM
#45
Name of thread Trent topic Name of involved charecters raysha (me) zero (Trent) URL http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=545063 (sorry if I'm posting this instead of trent wasnt sure if he knew to do this ) It was rather flat to read and didn't do much to create any feeling, apart from a few of the better posts (mainly Miku). To me it looked as if it was just the bare minimum, which may be standard in other clubs, but we are always trying to improve here and to create more detailed RP and stories. Trent - looks like you have a solid idea about RP, which is good. I would just like to see more depth and quality in your posts. Description and the like. Even if it's just one or two more sentences. Also, please work a little on grammar and paragraphing, you are good in general, but some posts just make my head hurt trying to read and understand them properly. Miku - Good work overall, I would have liked to see you take a little more lead with some larger posts to try and evoke more detail from Trent, but you did well regardless (keeping in mind you are still learning yourself, I probably shouldn't be expecting you too, but I like to hope ^^). You have some really good moments, and some disappointing one line posts, but the quality of your RP seems to be improving steadily which is all we can ask for. Keep up the good work! Zero - 60sp Raysha - 80sp ~ Shadow |
Shadow543Jan 20, 2013 7:49 PM
Jan 24, 2013 3:38 PM
#46
Name of thread: Southern Mountain Herb Collecting Punis-Task Go! Name of involved Characters: Takezo Kensei (Psy) Yukikaze Shiroyuki (Talia) Psy Mulander (NPC) URL Link to thread: http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=548887&show=0 PSY-SAMAAAAAAAAAAAAA~ Kensei - 120SP Yuki - 150SP (+30 PSY-SAMAAAAAAAAAAAAA~ bonus) PSY-SAMAAAAAAA - 9000+ PSY-SAMAAAAAAAAAAAAA'S ~Shadow |
Shadow543Jan 26, 2013 8:28 PM
"Somewhere, something incredible is waiting to be known" -Carl Edward Sagan |
Jan 25, 2013 3:11 PM
#47
(Hope this one is better thatn the last chapter) thread: i want to be the best i can be Episode 5: The Evil Man, A Young Kunoichi In Danger! (post 238 on page 12) Character: Chikusa, Blitz, Makura at the end Url: http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=503015&show=220 It definitely was better than the last chapter. Good work Rus. You put a lot of effort into driving the thread. Also, company can be a big factor too. I think that RP'ing with Zant and Fallen did well to bring out the better sides in all of you. Good work so far Fallen, hope you keep it up and get better, you may end up getting to RP with me~ (It's a punishment, ask Panda) Same to you Zant, good to see you doing a group thread rather than just solo stuff, but that doesn't mean I'm letting you stop your solo stuff ^-^ Chikusa - 250 Blitz - 200 Makura - 150 ~Shadow |
Shadow543Jan 26, 2013 9:05 PM
I miss rping here..... |
Jan 25, 2013 5:18 PM
#48
Name of thread Trent topic Name of involved charecters Zero (me (trent), raysha (Miku), Snow (Snowman) Hikaru (Flame) URL http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=545063&show=40 chapter 2 page 3 post 4 and onwards for know For Trent, Snow (to a lesser extent) and Flame. -> http://myanimelist.net/blog.php?eid=62607 Trent - Your RP seems to have gotten worse, if anything. Remember, quality beats quantity. Half of your posts were not able to be marked because they did not meet the minimum requirements for the club. Flame - What I said to Trent, partially. But also, try to be aware of the circumstances of the thread. Your posts were completely irrelevant to the rest of the thread. Snow - Not too bad. I would say you could use with some lessons in structure. It would make your posts a lot better if they were easier to read and set out in a legible manner. But overall, not bad. Which is actually quite good compared. Have a cookie. *Gives snow a cookie* Poor Miku. Poor, adorable Miku. You try so hard. *Cuddles* Zero - 30SP Miku - 100SP Snow - 50SP Hikaru - 10SP ~Shadow |
Shadow543Jan 26, 2013 9:37 PM
Jan 26, 2013 2:03 PM
#49
Name of thread: Kensei's Adventures in Horrorland and What He Saw There. With Belle. Somehow. Name of involved Characters: Kensei (Psy) Belle, somehow (Ender) Various NPC's (Talia) URL Link to thread: http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=527464 With Belle. Somehow. What the hell ender. Otherwise, strong finish. The last page was probably better than the other two combined. Even though set-up was needed. I am a very simple person. Tali - 1GB of Furry Porn of your choice. (Since I can't give NPC's SP apparently. Or give you SP for DM'ing) Kensei - 200SP Belle - 10SP ~Shadow |
Shadow543Jan 26, 2013 10:11 PM
"Somewhere, something incredible is waiting to be known" -Carl Edward Sagan |
Jan 30, 2013 7:55 AM
#50
Name of thread: Sibling Rivalry: Shiro and Saeko Test Their Skills Name of involved Characters: Shiro (Hoshi) and Saeko (Kaos) URL Link to thread: [url=http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=530878]http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=530878 Random generic comment - because I have nothing. Shiro - 100sp Saeko - 100sp ~Shadow |
Shadow543Feb 15, 2013 8:43 PM
Feb 6, 2013 10:31 AM
#51
SP awarded for Chunin Exams Test 2 Thread: Yoko vs Isao and Shion Yoko: 200 Isao: 200 Shion: 200 |
Feb 6, 2013 3:20 PM
#52
SP awarded for Chunin Exams Test 2 Thread: Chikusa VS Luna - http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=547427 Chikusa: 150 + 50 boobie-bonus~ Luna: 150 + 50 boobie-bonus~ This fight had a satisfying amount of fanservice. If i was allowed to give more then 200, i would give another 50 in pure fanservice-bonus :3 |
"Somewhere, something incredible is waiting to be known" -Carl Edward Sagan |
Feb 6, 2013 4:08 PM
#53
Sp awarded for exams~ thread: http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=547429 Nande - 100 Etsuko - 100 Naoru - 100 |
Feb 7, 2013 1:19 AM
#54
SP Awarded for Chuunin Exams Test 2 Thread: http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=547423 Miyuki: 140 Shiromaru: 160 Kensei: 170 Akurei: 170 + 30 multikill bonus. |
Feb 7, 2013 8:37 AM
#55
SP Awarded for Chunin Exams Test 2 Thread: Kasei and Belle vs Saeko and Salali Kasei: 100 Belle: 100 Saeko: 100 + 50 Face Smashing Bonus Salali: 100 |
Did you know every time you sigh, a little bit of happiness escapes? ~Senjougahara Hitagi |
Feb 7, 2013 2:02 PM
#56
If Hoshi had been paying attention, he would have realized that I've replaced him as judge... Demise: 140 + 40 gender confusion bonus Azmaria: 160 +40 Genjutsu Battle bonus Yukiko: 160 + 40 Patchy the Ninja Pirate bonus Chiaki: 140 +40 Ch-ch-ch-chia~ bonus Judges comments: Always good to see this level of teamwork and that genjutsu is finally being utilized. Ninjutsu had gotten bland. :P Commentators comments: Needs more face punching... |
Feb 15, 2013 8:40 PM
#57
SP Awarded for Chunin Exams Test 2 Thread: Raysha vs Sage Raysha: 100 Sage: 100 |
"If you can't accept the worst - what else will you accept?" "People like to tell me darkness is the absence of light, so i tell them - darkness can only be found in the presence of light" - Amane Chiyo |
Feb 15, 2013 8:48 PM
#58
~Updated~ |
"If you can't accept the worst - what else will you accept?" "People like to tell me darkness is the absence of light, so i tell them - darkness can only be found in the presence of light" - Amane Chiyo |
Feb 25, 2013 9:22 AM
#59
Thread: http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=503015&show=306 Episode 6:Power Gained Through Sin! Are The Results Worth The Price!? Warning: very long and lots of story little fighting Participants: Ruseo: 160 (you've gotten much better) Sound Oracle: 160 (I am legitimately impressed) Miku: 160 (Holy balls, girl! Please work on your quotations, otherwise you've gotten pretty good. Keep it up :3) BB: npc...cannot grade. In case I'm wrong: 150 Lucky Mei: 160 (Jingle bells! Go to hell! Bitch get outta mah way! x3) Admin Comment: Not a bad chapter by any means. A few happenings seemed a little too convenient but what can you do? ~ Talia-Morisane |
TamoballMar 6, 2013 4:37 PM
I miss rping here..... |
Feb 27, 2013 9:02 PM
#60
Thread: Contact Participant Yukio(Sound_Oracle):60 Admin Comments: Sorry, I got bored after a few posts but gave you something for your time. |
TamoballMar 6, 2013 4:41 PM
Mar 3, 2013 10:52 AM
#61
Thread: The Lost World Episode: Guests Arrive Participant Chikusa(Ruseo): 150 Yukio(Sound_Oracle): 150 Soren(VisionZA): 150 Riku(LuckyMei): 150 (Mmh!) Raysha(MikuIzumi): 150 Admin Comments: Free sp for everyone, pretty much. Courtesy of Baxter. ~ Talia-Morisane |
TamoballMar 6, 2013 4:48 PM
Mar 6, 2013 7:58 PM
#63
Name of thread: Team 13 Formed Name of involved Characters: Orochi Uchiha URL Link to thread: http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=566915 170sp (please don't rush me...) ~Talia |
TamoballMar 12, 2013 7:41 PM
No matter what blade you possess, it is impossible to cut a single flower that blooms in the wilderness that has become my home. ~Unknown |
Mar 9, 2013 8:16 PM
#64
Name of thread: Test of Strength Name of involved Characters: Raysha (Miku), Orochi (Me) URL Link to thread: http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=568575 20sp Each |
baxter09Mar 13, 2013 11:07 AM
No matter what blade you possess, it is impossible to cut a single flower that blooms in the wilderness that has become my home. ~Unknown |
Mar 11, 2013 12:43 PM
#65
Thread: Soren and Susanna : A Bloody Tale Chapter : 1. Learning Jutsu URL Link to thread : http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=567875 Participants Soren(VisionZA) : **NPC**Susanna(Talia) Soren: 130sp~ Susanna: A night with Kasei :P A good read and Vision it seems like you have a lot of potential. Keep up the good work~ Talia: Dream on, Baxtard :P |
TamoballMar 16, 2013 5:30 AM
stop lookin for a sign(ature) and move along |
Mar 14, 2013 1:17 PM
#66
Name of thread: Lion on the Loose! Team 13's first mission Name of involved Characters: Orochi (me) URL Link to thread: http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=568957 Orochi: 120 A few events seemed a little too convenient to me, but it wasn't bad by any means. And what's up with everyone and their mother-in-law having a sharingan lately? The lady just being highly skilled would have been believable enough. A few unnecessary details can ruin a narrative and ones enjoyment of said narrative. Work on that a bit and you'll go sky high with your writing. ~Talia~ |
TamoballMar 16, 2013 5:30 AM
No matter what blade you possess, it is impossible to cut a single flower that blooms in the wilderness that has become my home. ~Unknown |
Mar 19, 2013 7:54 AM
#67
Name of thread: Mission Failed! Team 13 Disbanded! Name of involved Characters: Orochi (me) URL Link to thread: http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=570713 Orochi: 80sp +20sp "Creative Liberty" Bonus Seems like you got something going here. Although your writing style appears wierd at times, it works to your advantage becouse you rarely use your "voice" when writing. The story itself looks promising, looking forward to the next one! The Creative Liberty bonus is for doing something that i see very rarely these days, which is the act of using regular Village-npcs to further the story. I like seeing this, people using barmaids, guards, anbu, rice-peddlers, kids, carpenters and hoodlums that not only help you push your story ahead but also helps show that the village is a living place with people other then just us. Ganbatte! -Psy |
PsynergiApr 6, 2013 4:40 AM
No matter what blade you possess, it is impossible to cut a single flower that blooms in the wilderness that has become my home. ~Unknown |
Mar 20, 2013 12:41 PM
#68
Thread: Soren and Susanna : A Bloody Tale Chapter : 2 : Hunting that which sleeps in the Fog URL Link to thread :http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=567875 Start : Page 2 Post#33 End : Page 4 Post#67 Participants Soren(VisionZA) : **NPC**Susanna(Talia) ____________________________________________________ Soren: 120 +20 DM Bonus +20 Omgwtflololol "finally-a-bloody-mist-test"-thread Bonus Great read, you do indeed have talent Vision. Keep nurturing that! In the meantime, try and choose more carefully and scarcely where to use Bold writing. Its generally used to highlight something, not for entire paragraphs xD Apart from that, great job! -Psy |
PsynergiApr 6, 2013 4:36 AM
stop lookin for a sign(ature) and move along |
Mar 22, 2013 11:08 AM
#69
Name of thread: The lonely swordsman Name of involved Characters: Hitori (me) URL Link to thread: http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=572851 _______________________________________ Hitori: 60sp +10sp "Wierd style" Bonus +20sp Omgwtfawesome "Kunai-necklace" Bonus You have a very unique writing style that i have never seen before. At first it seemed awkward to read, but getting used to it i could tell there was something profoundly interesting about this writing style. Keep it up! -Psy |
PsynergiApr 6, 2013 4:46 AM
I am the bone of my sword Steel is my body, and fire is my blood. I have created over a thousand blades, Unknown to death, nor known to life. Have whitstood pain to create many weapons, Yet, these hands will never hold anything, So, as I pray: Unlimited Blade Works And though I had slain a thousand foes less one, The thousandth knife found my liver; The thousandth enemy said to me, 'Now you shall die, Now none shall know.' And the fool, looking down, believed this, Not seeing, above his shoulders, the naked stars, Each one remembering. |
Apr 4, 2013 5:21 AM
#70
Name of thread: The master Name of involved Characters: Hitori (me) URL Link to thread: http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=577949 _____________________________________________ Hitori: 40sp +10 "Training thread" Bonus +10 "Not-so-gentle fist" Bonus This one was much shorter then the other one, and its a shame since its a training thread. Training threads are a good way to earn Sp, and doing a training thread this short is wasting SP ^^ That said, i really like how you incorporated Lightening-Release chakra into the Gentle fist. If that thing didnt paralyze you before, getting zapped every time you are hit will definately do the trick! :) -Psy |
PsynergiApr 6, 2013 4:56 AM
I am the bone of my sword Steel is my body, and fire is my blood. I have created over a thousand blades, Unknown to death, nor known to life. Have whitstood pain to create many weapons, Yet, these hands will never hold anything, So, as I pray: Unlimited Blade Works And though I had slain a thousand foes less one, The thousandth knife found my liver; The thousandth enemy said to me, 'Now you shall die, Now none shall know.' And the fool, looking down, believed this, Not seeing, above his shoulders, the naked stars, Each one remembering. |
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