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Oct 19, 2012 9:34 AM
#1
This is where you post completed threads that you want graded. All threads need to be graded in order for the involved characters to receive SP and grow stronger. Once the thread is graded, and SP rewarded for your endeavors, you are free to assign those SP to whatever stat you like. The requests for grading threads will follow this format: Name of thread: Name of involved Characters: URL Link to thread: When your thread has been graded, an admin will edit your request in Bold writing to indicate that the thread has been graded while informing you of the SP gain to the involved characters. Example: Name of thread: His first live performance Name of involved Characters(and usernames): Kensei (Psynergi) and Kerushii (Ender) URL Link to thread: http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=293021 Thread has been graded. Both parties receive 50Sp -Graded by Psynergi |
TaizenKyoOct 31, 2012 1:26 PM
"Somewhere, something incredible is waiting to be known" -Carl Edward Sagan |
Oct 31, 2012 1:50 PM
#2
Name of thread: A Machi For Two Name of involved Characters(and usernames): Saya and Shinji (Sozu), Akurei (Kantarell) and Haruka (Talia) URL Link to thread: http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=502405 Sozu - 80sp Kant - 80sp zero - 10 sp |
baxter09Oct 31, 2012 4:58 PM
-INSERT EPIC QUOTE HERE- |
Oct 31, 2012 2:11 PM
#3
Name of Thread: Between us Brothers Name of Involved Characters: Rikudo Tendo (Npc) & Naoru Firesong (Main character) URL... Link to Thread: Chapter 1 Rikudo - 90 SP Naoru - 90 SP |
TaizenKyoNov 1, 2012 12:50 PM
Oct 31, 2012 5:30 PM
#4
Name of thread: I Want To Be The Best I Can Be, Prologue and Episode 1 Name of involved characters: Prologue- Chikusa, Episode 1- Chikusa and Raysha Url: http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=503015 Chikusa: 120 Raysha: 60 |
TaizenKyoNov 1, 2012 1:07 PM
I miss rping here..... |
Oct 31, 2012 5:32 PM
#5
Name of Thread: Tale of a lonely kunoichi - up to post 32 Involved characters - Chikusa and Miyuki Url: http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=503211&show=20 Chikusa: 70 Miyuki: 70 |
TaizenKyoNov 1, 2012 1:11 PM
I miss rping here..... |
Nov 1, 2012 11:37 AM
#6
Name of thread: Team Thread/Story Arc (Episode 1) Involved Characters: Yukiko Mochizuki (MotionBlue), Nande Genkotsu (TaizenKyo), Chuugo Chiaki (Billzor) Url: http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=502481&show=0 Kyo: 185 Motion: 180 Bill: 170 Way I graded - Calculate the length of each post of each individual - Divided the total length with the total number of posts of that individual - +60 "Bonus SP" (20 Sp for Uniqueness/ 20 for Quality/ 20 for flow) - +60 "Time SP" (Only for Arcs with multiple default characters/ Team threads) (+10 per participants x1 per week to finish episode (Maximum 2 months/ 8 weeks)) |
Hoshi_RyuNov 2, 2012 7:22 AM
Nov 2, 2012 6:25 PM
#7
Name of thread: Demise Flashback - A Father’s Love; A Daughter’s Discovery (It's not an incest porno I swear) Name of involved Characters: Demise Tsukumiya URL Link to thread: http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=509963 Demise: 90 SP |
TaizenKyoNov 3, 2012 5:12 PM
"A sentence is like skirt length. The shorter the better, but it has to cover all of the important bits" - Some guy, learnt from Tali |
Nov 7, 2012 11:00 PM
#8
Name of thread: Team 'itonami' Story arc: Chapter 1 - The ties that bind Name of involved Characters: Psy (Psy, duh, NPC) Kasei (Bax) Saeko (Kaos) Belle (Ender) Shiromaru (Hoshi) Kensei (Psy) URL Link to thread:http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=502319&pages=4&show=60#msg18216063 Im not gonna grade it myself, i have a principle of never grading my own threads. So Tai, im entrusting you with this one ;3 Kasei: 170 Saeko: 170 Belle: 140 Shiromaru: 170 Kensei: 150 |
TaizenKyoNov 8, 2012 4:20 PM
"Somewhere, something incredible is waiting to be known" -Carl Edward Sagan |
Nov 9, 2012 12:11 PM
#9
Nov 13, 2012 12:03 PM
#10
name of thread: I want to be the best i can be episode 2 name of invovled characters: Chikusa, Raysha link: http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=503015 Chikusa: 80 Raysha: 80 |
TaizenKyoNov 13, 2012 3:58 PM
I miss rping here..... |
Nov 18, 2012 10:46 PM
#11
Name of thread: Nande Flashback Arc: The Final Successor Name of involved Characters: Nande Genkotsu (TaizenKyo) URL Link to thread: >>Click<< Dat was sum delicious shoto-sama~ 200sp (Story) +40sp(Shoto-bonus) Graded by Le Capitan Psynergi de la Norwega~ |
PsynergiNov 22, 2012 9:54 AM
Nov 20, 2012 8:22 PM
#12
Name of thread: Team 'Kidousei' Story-arc Name of involved Characters: Demise (Hai), Yoko (Shadow), Isao (Panda), Hiro (Shin). URL Link to thread: http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=502557&show=0 Haissem: 190 Shadow: 240 ipanda: 190 Shin:160 |
MotionBlueNov 21, 2012 3:03 PM
"A sentence is like skirt length. The shorter the better, but it has to cover all of the important bits" - Some guy, learnt from Tali |
Nov 22, 2012 11:22 AM
#13
Name of thread: The Problem With Having A "Team" Ep1 Crossroads Name of involved Characters: Isao(panda) #12(Motions chara) URL Link to thread: http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=513917 motion: 80sp Panda: 80sp Fairly short episode but the posts were really good and pretty long as well~ both of your characters also seem to be interesting which made it a good interesting read <3 Panda you have improved a lot since when you first started out ^^ Motion...what is there to say about you? Other than you stole on the drink again you twat >.> |
baxter09Nov 22, 2012 2:32 PM
Nov 23, 2012 8:22 AM
#14
Name of thread: One's own purpose: Shiromaru Ryujin's Chronicles Characters Involved: Shiromaru (Hoshi_Ryu) URL link to thread: http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=519979 160 sp |
MotionBlueNov 24, 2012 9:13 AM
"In the ninja world, those who break the rules are trash, that's true, but those who abandon their comrades are worse than trash." ~ Kakashi Hatake |
Nov 29, 2012 1:04 AM
#15
Name of thread: Azmaria's Story: Ch.1- Slain Legend Characters Involved: Azmaria (Jyenh) and Amane (motion) URL link to thread: [url]http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=505051&show=0[/url] Azmaria - 200sp (50 for content, 50 for story, 100 for time) Motionblue - A basket of baked goods to be delivered by a little girl in a red hood. ~Shadow |
Shadow543Nov 30, 2012 9:43 PM
"I come for all who grow, crawl, and walk. I am the perfect hunter. In the end, I am the victor." |
Nov 29, 2012 3:26 AM
#16
Name of thread: "Team Boss" Story Thread (Episode 3) Characters involved: Nande (Kyo), Yukiko (Motion), Chiaki (Bill) URL link to thread: [url]http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=502481&show=40#msg18241601[/url] Kyo: 200 Motion: 200 Bill: 200 |
Hoshi_RyuNov 29, 2012 1:03 PM
Nov 29, 2012 4:48 PM
#17
Name of thread: The mystery of the sensory Kunoichi Characters involved: Miyuki (me, brandon) URL link to thread:[url]http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=513625[/url] just a side note. could have been longer. but i don't have much time to post and i need sp for the exams coming up so i'm handing in what i can 120 SP |
TaizenKyoNov 29, 2012 5:57 PM
"Just like a person holding a sword trying to protect something. That maybe one's life, or place in society, or reputation, things that one loves, things that one believes; it matters not if it's good or bad, the will to 'protect it' does not change."- yoruichi |
Nov 30, 2012 8:46 PM
#18
Name of thread: Return of the Demon Characters involved: Kasei URL link to thread: http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=525430 60Sp |
Hoshi_RyuNov 30, 2012 8:50 PM
Dec 1, 2012 12:46 AM
#19
Name of Thread: Between us Brothers Name of Involved Characters: Rikudo Tendo (Npc) & Naoru Firesong (Main character) URL... Link to Thread: http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=288282... Chapter 2 Both: 150 SP |
TaizenKyoDec 1, 2012 10:55 AM
Dec 1, 2012 11:32 AM
#20
Name of thread: Team 'itonami' Story arc: Chapter 2 Name of involved Characters: Psy (Psy, duh, NPC) Kasei (Bax) Saeko (Kaos) Belle (Ender) Shiromaru (Hoshi) Kensei (Psy) URL Link to thread: http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=502319&pages=6&show=100#msg18693570 Kasei: 190 Saeko: 190 Belle: 220 Shiro: 190 Kensei: 100 ~Shadow |
Shadow543Dec 3, 2012 4:55 PM
"Somewhere, something incredible is waiting to be known" -Carl Edward Sagan |
Dec 3, 2012 10:21 PM
#21
Name of thread: The hero returning alive: Chapter 1 Name of involved Characters: Hai (Demise) Shadow (Yoko) URL Link to thread:http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=521673&redirect=1#post0 Hai: 80 sp Shadow: 80 sp |
BillzorDec 4, 2012 10:21 AM
"If you can't accept the worst - what else will you accept?" "People like to tell me darkness is the absence of light, so i tell them - darkness can only be found in the presence of light" - Amane Chiyo |
Dec 4, 2012 9:19 PM
#22
name: I want to be the best i can be (eoisode a chance incounter) involved characters: Chikusa, Raysha, Rikudo, Naoru http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=503015&show=100 [starting on page six] Chikusa: 100 Raysha: 100 Rukudo: 120 Naoru: 120 |
TaizenKyoDec 10, 2012 4:05 PM
I miss rping here..... |
Dec 10, 2012 12:53 PM
#23
Name a chance meeting Involved charecters raysha and hiro http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=525366 Raysha: 70 Hiro: 70 |
TaizenKyoDec 10, 2012 4:38 PM
Dec 10, 2012 1:04 PM
#24
Name: Between us Brothers Involved Characters: Rikudo & Naoru Chapter 3 Rikudo - 90sp Naoru - 120sp ~Shadow |
Shadow543Dec 11, 2012 1:59 AM
Dec 11, 2012 1:12 AM
#25
Name of thread: Azmaria's Story Chapter 2: The Rescue Name of involved Characters: Azmaria (Jyenh) Fei; Kurou; Aion (temporary story NPCs) URL Link to thread: http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=505051&show=20 ~You can just post the link without the [url] brackets and MAL with automatically hyper link it. If you wanted to URL something else, like Azmaria's Story Chapter 2: The Rescue Then you type -> [ url=http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=505051&show=20]Azmaria's Story Chapter 2: The Rescue[/url ] Without the spaces. Azmaria - 100sp ~ Shadow |
Shadow543Dec 11, 2012 2:19 AM
"I come for all who grow, crawl, and walk. I am the perfect hunter. In the end, I am the victor." |
Dec 13, 2012 8:04 PM
#26
Name of thread bandit at large strike of the deadly assassin Name of involved characters raysha (me) kirachi ,village chief (temporary npc) URL link to the thread http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=510013&show=0 Raysha - 140sp (+50 time bonus) ~ Shadow |
Shadow543Dec 15, 2012 5:33 PM
Dec 14, 2012 3:09 PM
#27
Name of thread: Azmaria's Story Chapter 3: Preparation Name of involved Characters: Azmaria (Jyenh) Fei; Kurou; Aion (temporary story NPCs) URL Link to thread: Posts #29-#34 Azmaria - 70sp ~ Shadow |
Shadow543Dec 15, 2012 5:30 PM
"I come for all who grow, crawl, and walk. I am the perfect hunter. In the end, I am the victor." |
Dec 17, 2012 4:38 AM
#28
Name of thread: The Mystery of the sensory kunoichi Name of character involved: Miyuki, Chikuma (NPC) Link to thread: http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=513625 (Episode 2, Post# 7+) Miyuki: 80 |
TaizenKyoDec 17, 2012 7:05 PM
"Just like a person holding a sword trying to protect something. That maybe one's life, or place in society, or reputation, things that one loves, things that one believes; it matters not if it's good or bad, the will to 'protect it' does not change."- yoruichi |
Dec 22, 2012 10:31 PM
#29
Name of thread: The hero returning alive. Name of character involved: Demise (Haissem), Yoko (Shadow), Miki (NPC) Link to thread: (Episode 2, Post #20-37, not finished)http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=521673&show=20 Hai - 180 sp Shadow 130sp |
baxter09Dec 22, 2012 11:15 PM
"If you can't accept the worst - what else will you accept?" "People like to tell me darkness is the absence of light, so i tell them - darkness can only be found in the presence of light" - Amane Chiyo |
Dec 26, 2012 1:04 AM
#30
Name of thread: Between Us Brothers Name of characters involved: Rikudo & Naoru Link to thread: Chapter 4 Name of thread: Count Your Chickens... Name of characters involved: Naoru Link to thread: Count Your Chickens Between Us Brothers Rikudo - 50sp (CONGRATULATIONS ON 6000SP) Naoru - 100sp Count Your Chickens... (...before some cunt steals them.) Naoru - 30sp (Mostly because of the chickens and the fact I liked the theme) (Editors Note: Wat did I just read...?) ~Shadow |
Shadow543Dec 27, 2012 11:31 PM
Dec 27, 2012 10:20 PM
#31
Name of the thread: The Problems With Having a Team Name of Characters Involved: Isao(panda) Haruka(Tali) Link To Thread:(Episode 2 Tali and Panda are done. Jimmy and Nyabn are still going) http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=513917&show=40 Isao - 180sp Haruka - 140sp *vomits* ~Shadow |
Shadow543Dec 27, 2012 11:28 PM
Dec 28, 2012 9:41 PM
#32
Name of the thread: Survival 101 Name of Characters Involved: Hiro (Artemis - Shin_Sekai) Kaori (NPC) Link To Thread:http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=526652 (Story not finished due to character changes. Marking based on present story.) TO THE CHUNIN EXAMSSSSSS Hiro (Artemis) - 120sp ~Shadow |
Shadow543Jan 1, 2013 12:26 AM
"If you can't accept the worst - what else will you accept?" "People like to tell me darkness is the absence of light, so i tell them - darkness can only be found in the presence of light" - Amane Chiyo |
Dec 29, 2012 12:12 AM
#33
Name of thread: The Awakening (Closed Thread) Name of involved Characters: Blitz (Zanta) URL Link to thread: http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=538290&show=0#post1 Very nice 'Awakening' I look forward to seeing Blitz in action. Random. Capitals. All. Over. The. Place. Random. Punctuation. ARAARARARHGHGHAWALJLGHSL *Foams at the mount* Blitz - 50sp ~Shadow |
Shadow543Dec 31, 2012 11:48 PM
[center]"Gentlemen, all I ask for is war. A war so grand as to make Hell itself tremble. Gentlemen, I ask you as fellow brothers in arms, what is it you really want? Do you wish for further war as I do? Do you wish for a merciless, bloody war? A war whose fury is built with iron, and lightning, and fire? Do you ask for war to sweep in like a tempest, leaving not even ravens to scavenge from this Earth?!" - The Major. |
Dec 29, 2012 12:35 AM
#34
ki hut(open) ki*as of now* http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=537392 I cannot mark this thread in good conscious in relation to the standards set by the other members of the club. Please take a look at the other threads in the club and that have been handed in inside this thread if you wish to see why. 'This is a club for hardcore RPers' - TaizenKyo ~Shadow |
frogotenJan 4, 2013 3:06 PM
..... :'( |
Dec 29, 2012 3:15 PM
#35
Name of thread: A Formidable Memory [Character Arc] Name of involved Characters: Shion (Main Character) URL Link to thread: http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=530914 Good writing Rai, I enjoyed reading it. Bunny-rai-bonus activate! Shion - 150sp (+50 Rai bonus) ~Shadow |
Shadow543Dec 31, 2012 11:42 PM
Jan 2, 2013 11:22 PM
#36
Thread Name: The Deadliest of Sins Characters: Etsuko Yamaguchi URL: http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=531888 SP Awarded: 500 Full breakdown of each post: 1- 4/5= 40 SP. One point shy of a full mark because the bulk of the post consisted of a flashback, not that it’s necessarily a bad thing. On a side note, who would've thought torture could be so beautifully written? 2- 4/5=40 SP. No complaints about the writing however, there isn’t a clear purpose as to why Etsuko was sent on the mission. Is it personal or was she sent by the village? It does let the reader speculate some as to why it unfolded that way. 3- 5/5= 50 SP. A good blend between the past and present, tying your character’s emotions to the situation she faced. Although short, it had the sense of being “complete”. 4- 3/5 = 30 SP. This post was a little hard to follow for me especially during the flashback. There were also very minor grammatical hiccups. 5- 3/5 = 30 SP. While simple to read, it just raised a few questions. Why does a Genin have such a connection? Why did Etsuko state that she will not go to the Death village then end up going? Maybe I’m being picky, but the post felt too ambiguous. Chapter 1 Total: 190 SP 6- 5/5 = 50 SP. I guess that explains my questions from before? (lol) Clear, cut, and straight to the point. 7- 3/5 = 30 SP. Not much going on aside from observation and reminiscing. Also the last bit about the bar confused me. Exactly what happened in the last sentence? 8- 4/5 = 40 SP. I felt the battle was a tad short and would’ve expected a little more dialogue between the two. 9- 4/5 = 40 SP. I could’ve done without the flashback but it was good comic relief and shed some light into her already darkened past. I enjoyed the riddle part! 10- 5/5 = 50 SP. Quite possibly the most enjoyable post in the thread. I definitely see an evolution of sorts from Etsuko and the clone, she eerily reminds me of a little sister from Bioshock (random video game reference). Chapter 2 Total: 210 SP 11- 3/5 = 30 SP. I felt like this was more of a transition than an introduction to another chapter. It could have been combined with the previous post. 12- 3/5 = 30 SP. A little stagnant until the end where things really started to pick up. 13- 4/5 = 40 SP. Another fight I would have liked to have seen further developed, especially being that she wields a katana. Chapter 3 Total: 100 SP Overall a good read. I will be asking to join you in the thread sometime in the future~ |
MotionBlueJan 3, 2013 7:37 AM
Hey you! Yes you! Do you like: Dragon Ball? |
Jan 3, 2013 6:47 AM
#37
Name of thread: Team 2-Orime: A Meeting Between Two Souls Name of involved Characters: Hyuga Shion (Main), Naoru (Toxic's chara, Artemis (Shin's chara) URL Link to thread: http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=531444 Syrai: 400 SP Unrated: 200 SP Shin: 70 SP Detailed breakdown of each post: 1-(Syrai) 3/5 = 30 SP. Great use of music to fit the post, I thought it was a perfect match. On the other hand, for an intro post, it’s a little weak in a sense that this doesn't really show what/who/ your character is or their purpose which I’m sure it will be revealed later. 2- (Unrated) 2/5 = 20 SP. You don’t have to describe your characters features if you posted a picture in the character thread (I did a little lurking) unless it’s related to fighting or plot driven. Pretty simple post. 3- (Syrai) 4/5 = 40 SP. Good use of dialogue to retort back. Just a few minor hiccups hurts this post by a smidge. 4- (Unrated) 3/5 = 30 SP. Pretty standard response. 5- (Syrai) 3/5 = 30 SP. Gonna give it a standard score for the dialogue and a bit of action towards the end. 6- (Unrated) 2/5 = 20 SP. The wording could use some revising. The part where Naoru falls from the tree feels like a run on sentence. Try using more commas and spaces between each action so it doesn’t read like a soup of words. 7- (Syrai) 5/5 = 50 SP. Good transition from mere dialogue to the plot moving forward. 8- (Unrated) 3/5 =30 SP. Never leave a lady alone! All jokes aside, there’s no need to explain why your character takes a certain action unless it has something to do with a particular ability. (Hiding in the tree) 9- (Syrai) 2/5 = 20 SP. This post felt like it was dragging things a bit. If the enemy is coming why not follow with their actually appearance or an attack/action? You could have added this to the previous post. 10- (Unrated) 2/5 = 20 SP. Also feels like its dragging a little. '' I see then shouldn't be a problem, if they can't use potentially destructive jutsu... I will always play as the greatest of half's, regardless of the situation.'' (I don’t quite get what you mean.) 11- (Syrai) 1/5 = 10 SP. Feels redundant and could have also been a part of the previous post. 12- (Unrated) 1/5 = 10 SP. More or less the same as above. Also, Hastily wait? That’s quite the contradiction you have going there….. 13- (Syrai) 3/5 = 30 SP. Good transition to break from the redundancy. Solid post. 14- (Unrated) 1/5 = 10 SP. Wanted to see a little more back and forth, and it was a fairly short post. 15- (Shin) 1/5 = 10 SP. A fairly weak introduction post for your character. What was the point of her even being there in the first place? 16- (Syrai) 5/5 = 50 SP. Excellent post! A good balance between action and dialogue and your tactically engaging the enemy and not posting a one hit kill. 17- (Unrated) 1/5 = 10 SP. There could have been so much more interaction between your character and Shin’s. The post just seems unfinished. 18- (Shin) 1/5 = 10 SP. I understand it’s a response, but add a little more substance to it. Back and forth dialogue just doesn’t cut it. 19- (Syrai) 4/5 = 40 SP. Just a few grammatical hiccups hurt this post. 20- (Unrated) 1/5 = 10 SP. I guess it’s hard to really add much when you are locked in a battle with one opponent, but there’s certainly more that can occur besides a one liner. 21- (Shin) 3/5 = 30 SP. Better, just a tad bit short. 22- (Syrai) 4/5 = 40 SP. Minor grammatical hiccups but much like the previous post, very good. 23- (Unrated) 3/5 = 30 SP. Better, there is more of a balance between dialogue and action. 24- (Shin) 1/5 = 10 SP. She couldn’t done a lot more than just shout at Artemis to stop. Just feels unfinished. 25- (Syrai) 4/5 = 40 SP. Solid post and normally I would just go with the base score of 3 but I know how it is to move the story forward so I’ll add more SP for that. 26- (Unrated) 1/5 = 10 SP. Don’t be afraid to use Syrai’s npc’s to have a conversation with your character, you can develop your posts further instead of writing them like a step by step guide. 27- (Shin) 1/5 = 10 SP. Nothing much going on except for the arrival of your character at the manor. 28- (Syrai) 2/5 = 20 SP. Not bad, just too heavy on the dialogue. Doesn’t feel like the episode/chapter is finished too which kinda leaves my head scratching a little. You guys should communicate more between your characters in order to build a more coherent story. Keep up the good work! Name of thread: Hyuuga Family Secrets (Syrai-super-happy-fun-SP-thread) Name of involved Characters: Hyuga Shion (Main) and Hyuga Miki/Mami (Shadow) URL Link to thread: http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=535596 |
MotionBlueJan 3, 2013 11:13 AM
Jan 3, 2013 12:24 PM
#38
Name of thread: The Mystery of the sensory kunoichi Name of characters involved: Miyuki Url to thread: http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=513625 (Episode 3) 80 SP |
TaizenKyoJan 3, 2013 1:34 PM
"Just like a person holding a sword trying to protect something. That maybe one's life, or place in society, or reputation, things that one loves, things that one believes; it matters not if it's good or bad, the will to 'protect it' does not change."- yoruichi |
Jan 3, 2013 10:08 PM
#39
Name of thread: Getting the gear to be Great.... Name of involved Characters: Blitz (Zantaboan) URL Link to thread: http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=541092 I wanted to give a bit more with how well you are writing, but the contents of the thread don't really allow. I hope this is enough to keep you going past the initial start up phase ^^ Blitz - 50sp ~Shadow |
Shadow543Jan 7, 2013 4:07 AM
[center]"Gentlemen, all I ask for is war. A war so grand as to make Hell itself tremble. Gentlemen, I ask you as fellow brothers in arms, what is it you really want? Do you wish for further war as I do? Do you wish for a merciless, bloody war? A war whose fury is built with iron, and lightning, and fire? Do you ask for war to sweep in like a tempest, leaving not even ravens to scavenge from this Earth?!" - The Major. |
Jan 4, 2013 4:39 AM
#40
Name of thread: Chapter 4: Unawares Name of involved Characters: Azmaria (Jyenh) & Fei (NPC) URL Link to thread: http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=505051&show=20 You missed the bonus points for putting a YT video of Amaranth in when you mentioned it. Edit it in now and I cut you. Azmaria - 40sp ~Shadow |
Shadow543Jan 7, 2013 4:12 AM
"I come for all who grow, crawl, and walk. I am the perfect hunter. In the end, I am the victor." |
Jan 4, 2013 10:00 AM
#41
Name of Thread: Clash of the Elements Characters Involved : Kasei (bax), Rayasha (miku) link: http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=535876&show=0 Kasei: 80 Rayasha: 80 My name is Psynergi, i approve of this message~ |
PsynergiJan 4, 2013 10:06 AM
Jan 13, 2013 7:27 AM
#42
Name of thread: Blitz Follows Trouble so Follow Blitz Name of involved Characters: Blitz(Zantaboan) URL Link to thread: http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=545511&show=0#post1 Nice to see some action. Still not used to your writing style though. Blitz - 100sp ~Shadow |
Shadow543Jan 16, 2013 3:31 AM
[center]"Gentlemen, all I ask for is war. A war so grand as to make Hell itself tremble. Gentlemen, I ask you as fellow brothers in arms, what is it you really want? Do you wish for further war as I do? Do you wish for a merciless, bloody war? A war whose fury is built with iron, and lightning, and fire? Do you ask for war to sweep in like a tempest, leaving not even ravens to scavenge from this Earth?!" - The Major. |
Jan 13, 2013 7:50 AM
#43
Name of thread: I want to be the best i can be Ep 4 (starting at post 158 i think) Involved characters: Ruseo and fallen_saint Url: http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=503015&show=140 I would have liked to see more description on most of the posts. Just adding one or two sentences can make a big difference. I have to thank you Rus, for doing a thread with Fallen to get him started in the RP. Chikusa - 80sp Makura - 100sp (+20 for first thread bonus) ~Shadow |
Shadow543Jan 16, 2013 3:45 AM
I miss rping here..... |
Jan 16, 2013 1:25 AM
#44
Name of thread: "The Cobra Unit" Story Thread [Invite Only] Name of involved characters: Chuugo Chiaki (Bill), Nande Genkotsu (Kyo), Yukiko Mochizuki (Motion) Url: http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=502481&show=80#msg18674820 You idiots are crazy. So fucking crazy. Especially the boss. Fuck she's crazy. CRAZY. *Brands you all with Crazy* Also probably one of the best threads I have read. Chiaki - 500sp Nande - 500sp (-100sp for making the club motto "Blame Shadow" +100sp for that one night we spent together in Paris.) Yukiko - 500sp ~Shadow |
Shadow543Jan 21, 2013 7:22 PM
Jan 16, 2013 6:34 AM
#45
Name of thread Trent topic Name of involved charecters raysha (me) zero (Trent) URL http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=545063 (sorry if I'm posting this instead of trent wasnt sure if he knew to do this ) It was rather flat to read and didn't do much to create any feeling, apart from a few of the better posts (mainly Miku). To me it looked as if it was just the bare minimum, which may be standard in other clubs, but we are always trying to improve here and to create more detailed RP and stories. Trent - looks like you have a solid idea about RP, which is good. I would just like to see more depth and quality in your posts. Description and the like. Even if it's just one or two more sentences. Also, please work a little on grammar and paragraphing, you are good in general, but some posts just make my head hurt trying to read and understand them properly. Miku - Good work overall, I would have liked to see you take a little more lead with some larger posts to try and evoke more detail from Trent, but you did well regardless (keeping in mind you are still learning yourself, I probably shouldn't be expecting you too, but I like to hope ^^). You have some really good moments, and some disappointing one line posts, but the quality of your RP seems to be improving steadily which is all we can ask for. Keep up the good work! Zero - 60sp Raysha - 80sp ~ Shadow |
Shadow543Jan 20, 2013 7:49 PM
Jan 24, 2013 3:38 PM
#46
Name of thread: Southern Mountain Herb Collecting Punis-Task Go! Name of involved Characters: Takezo Kensei (Psy) Yukikaze Shiroyuki (Talia) Psy Mulander (NPC) URL Link to thread: http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=548887&show=0 PSY-SAMAAAAAAAAAAAAA~ Kensei - 120SP Yuki - 150SP (+30 PSY-SAMAAAAAAAAAAAAA~ bonus) PSY-SAMAAAAAAA - 9000+ PSY-SAMAAAAAAAAAAAAA'S ~Shadow |
Shadow543Jan 26, 2013 8:28 PM
"Somewhere, something incredible is waiting to be known" -Carl Edward Sagan |
Jan 25, 2013 3:11 PM
#47
(Hope this one is better thatn the last chapter) thread: i want to be the best i can be Episode 5: The Evil Man, A Young Kunoichi In Danger! (post 238 on page 12) Character: Chikusa, Blitz, Makura at the end Url: http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=503015&show=220 It definitely was better than the last chapter. Good work Rus. You put a lot of effort into driving the thread. Also, company can be a big factor too. I think that RP'ing with Zant and Fallen did well to bring out the better sides in all of you. Good work so far Fallen, hope you keep it up and get better, you may end up getting to RP with me~ (It's a punishment, ask Panda) Same to you Zant, good to see you doing a group thread rather than just solo stuff, but that doesn't mean I'm letting you stop your solo stuff ^-^ Chikusa - 250 Blitz - 200 Makura - 150 ~Shadow |
Shadow543Jan 26, 2013 9:05 PM
I miss rping here..... |
Jan 25, 2013 5:18 PM
#48
Name of thread Trent topic Name of involved charecters Zero (me (trent), raysha (Miku), Snow (Snowman) Hikaru (Flame) URL http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=545063&show=40 chapter 2 page 3 post 4 and onwards for know For Trent, Snow (to a lesser extent) and Flame. -> http://myanimelist.net/blog.php?eid=62607 Trent - Your RP seems to have gotten worse, if anything. Remember, quality beats quantity. Half of your posts were not able to be marked because they did not meet the minimum requirements for the club. Flame - What I said to Trent, partially. But also, try to be aware of the circumstances of the thread. Your posts were completely irrelevant to the rest of the thread. Snow - Not too bad. I would say you could use with some lessons in structure. It would make your posts a lot better if they were easier to read and set out in a legible manner. But overall, not bad. Which is actually quite good compared. Have a cookie. *Gives snow a cookie* Poor Miku. Poor, adorable Miku. You try so hard. *Cuddles* Zero - 30SP Miku - 100SP Snow - 50SP Hikaru - 10SP ~Shadow |
Shadow543Jan 26, 2013 9:37 PM
Jan 26, 2013 2:03 PM
#49
Name of thread: Kensei's Adventures in Horrorland and What He Saw There. With Belle. Somehow. Name of involved Characters: Kensei (Psy) Belle, somehow (Ender) Various NPC's (Talia) URL Link to thread: http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=527464 With Belle. Somehow. What the hell ender. Otherwise, strong finish. The last page was probably better than the other two combined. Even though set-up was needed. I am a very simple person. Tali - 1GB of Furry Porn of your choice. (Since I can't give NPC's SP apparently. Or give you SP for DM'ing) Kensei - 200SP Belle - 10SP ~Shadow |
Shadow543Jan 26, 2013 10:11 PM
"Somewhere, something incredible is waiting to be known" -Carl Edward Sagan |
Jan 30, 2013 7:55 AM
#50
Name of thread: Sibling Rivalry: Shiro and Saeko Test Their Skills Name of involved Characters: Shiro (Hoshi) and Saeko (Kaos) URL Link to thread: [url=http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=530878]http://myanimelist.net/forum/?topicid=530878 Random generic comment - because I have nothing. Shiro - 100sp Saeko - 100sp ~Shadow |
Shadow543Feb 15, 2013 8:43 PM
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