Hobby writer wanting feedback and/or help.

Sebulon said:
Umm, what do you eactly need help at? :) I've never written any manga or stuff like that, but I can tell you my opinion if you need some help with the plot or characters.

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thanks, first of all its the protagonist. I made two: one female, one male. I've gotten further on the male one. i'll put in a portion of it. btw some of this is related to the plot which you haven't seen so it might not make sense.

Fui said:
Lots of cliches and tropes bro.

You should start really rough and get the basic setting/story down. Then fill it in with characters etc.

Rhyan said:
Hm, characters are usually fairly cliché, though it's true that Katsu isn't an exception; However, I like it, and it's the story/plot I'm interested in now.

koleare said:
Are you trying cliffhanging or something? xD
If so, for me it works, as I want to know more and more.
For now, it seems linear, but I know when I see something different which more than surely I'll like. I hope you'll help my idea and post more and more info.