Oct 28, 2012
This storyline lacks development, which I know *can* be harder to do with limited chapters, but there's no depth to the characters so it is hard to become attached to them. Aside from that, the story progresses too quickly and ends up feeling awkward and unrealistic. The unfortunate lack of depth for the characters and the story detract too heavily from the decent drawing style for me to rate this as anything more than poor.
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