Story: 5/10
The revenge premise intrigued me but is executed poorly. Minimal worldbuilding leaves the setting feeling incoherent. Pacing falters with repetitive training sections.
Art: 8/10
The art quality is excellent, with vibrant colors and dynamic fight scenes. Backgrounds are detailed. Character designs suit their roles.
Characters: 4/10
The MC lacks nuance and his motivations feel unclear. Supporting characters exist just to react to the MC so far. Needed more backstories.
Enjoyment: 5/10
Strong art couldn't outweigh the disjointed storytelling, dull training segments, and flat characters for me. I lost interest around Chapter 30.
With more care into the worldbuilding and characters, this could shine. But as is, the messy plot hampered my enjoyment too much to continue.
